Beginning scene of a fantasy erotica series I’ve been working on, would love feedback! [m/f]

Getin leaned his broom against the wooden barn wall and wiped the sweat from his brow. His messy brown hair was dripping wet and damp patches were quickly forming on the waist of his tan trousers. In the middle of the day the barn felt more like an oven and the sickly sweet smell of hay was overpowering. Though he tried to get all his indoor work done in the early morning, he found himself stuck sweeping up the mess left by the king’s guards once again.

He grabbed his threadbare shirt off the gate and wiped down his naturally muscular body. Working as a stable boy for most of his life never allowed for much accumulation of fat. Even though he’d had his left arm amputated above the elbow when he was young, Getin’s body had only ever known the hardships of manual labour. He felt a light breeze on his cooling skin and turned to check on the animals grazing in the fields beyond. The cattle were all snoozing quietly under the shade of a few trees and all seemed well. He turned his gaze to the town beyond and tried to make out individual buildings through the haze of the day. He was concentrating so much he didn’t hear the approach of two people behind him.

Ivy pt. 2. .. working on conclusion or “more”. Maybe even a part 3. Open to ideas/suggestions.

written in collaboration with my69shawn Thanks for the help, I have never collaborated in this manner before, and found it super fun. Finished writing without you, hope you like what you see! **YOU CAN READ PART 1 HERE

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He awoke on the cold, damp cement floor, head pounding. He rolled over, vision unclear. As he blinked, it became clear that he was still in Ivy's now vacant lair. The cage that held the young woman captive was lying in a corner, twisted from impact… the girl was laying nearby, clearly unconscious. He slowly picked himself up off the floor, to his knees then his feet, surveying his surroundings carefully. He spotted his pile of clothing, armor, shuffled over and collected them in one exhausted reach. He straightened out, put on the basics and approached the sprawled out girl. As he got closer he could see the rise and fall of her chest. She wasn’t dead. He scanned her body for any indication of broken bones, and when he cleared her of any remarkable bruises, he picked her up, draped her over his shoulder and left without a word. He walked briskly out of the building and into the Batmobile, making certain to be unseen.

[MF] San Francisco first date

Dallas He tossed another crumpled ball of paper toward the basket and murmured “He shoots. He scores!” as the trash bounced in.

“This will take a while” he said as he reached for the coffee. “What I’m writing doesn’t capture the moment. It was so… clear then… so lucid… so perfect. How can I put that into words?”

He leaned back in the wooden swivel chair and put his size 11 ½ Nikes onto the desk. “If I can just remember enough….,” as his eyes closed.

San Francisco – Dinner Sandra had agreed to meet Will at the Tadich Grill on California Street in the Financial District. The old restaurant was three blocks from his office and two from hers. Both were in town for several weeks and had mutual friends who suggested that they ‘look each other up’. Will arrived a few minutes after the agreed 5:00 time, having sprinted the last block in his tan gabardine slacks and denim shirt, the silk tie he wore (in defiance of the ‘casual’ trend at the dotcom office) trailing behind.

Orbital Academy XIV [scifi][mf][Fdom][facial]

In space no one can hear you scream…in ecstasy.

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"Jackson, why'd you bring us to Pivot? What about Orbital Academy?" Preston reached across Missy and flicked the cruiser's autopilot off, beginning to manually pilot their cruiser in line with the other squadmates'.
"Rookie Preston, please cut the comm chatter, we wouldn't want to crowd Orbital Pivot's comm channels," Jackson's voice crackled into the small space. The message was clear; We're being listened to. I can either trust Jackson or come up with my own plan. Preston and Missy exchanged looks, and she nodded, her brown ringlets bouncing with the motion. Preston shrugged. He probably would've trusted Jackson on his own, but he trusted Missy at his core. Pulling up the fine-navigation controls, he prepared to land the craft.

Merman Island [MMMMMF]

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My eyes slowly opened as waves of cold water rushed past my face. My body was completely cold and naked and my lungs were filled with salt water. With the little energy I had in my body, I looked around myself.

I had found myself on some uninhabited beach. The air was brisk and the sun was beginning to set. The wind was violently cold against my wet skin. I sat my body up slowly and looked into the ostensibly endless, uninterrupted waters from where I came. The waves crashed vigorously about two hundred meters out into the water.

I sat for a moment, trying to build up enough strength to pull myself to my feet, but then fell back down, lifelessly into the cold sand.

I started to drift out of consciousness once again. Nearby me, there was a man standing in the water. He was incredibly fit, with enormous muscles. He began to move towards me, and then I blacked out.

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Orbital Academy IX

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Tess wished she hadn't woken up the second did. She was surrounded by pitch black, and there was so much pain she had trouble for a moment identifying where it was coming from. Blinking, she shook her head a few times, trying to remember where she was. The satflyer…we were on a planetary… She sat up at the memory, and the sudden motion caused a wave of further pain to wash through her, making her almost vomit. Leg…the pain is definitely coming from the leg. After the Drake attack Tess' broken leg had been healing at a rapid rate, but the mind-altering pain indicated that her two week healing process had been for naught.

Orbital Academy IV

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I wonder if this is an abuse of power, Jane idly mused, dragging her carbon scraper across the nose of her cruiser. She had been pondering the question for the past few hours, as the rookies complained and joked and chatted around her. The problem is that on the one hand, I can't resist a man who knows his way around a cruiser and can keep it clean…but on the other, any pilot worth anything will have that knowhow…

Jane finally decided that these mechanic exercises were for the rookies' own good. Everyone appreciated a squadmate who knew how their ship ran, man or woman. Thus, she reasoned, smashing a chunk of charred carbon from the intake valve with satisfaction, forcing the rookies to learn the ins and outs of their cruisers isn't an abuse of power at all. Well, no more than normal.

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“Hide and Seek” Short Erotica Story (mf) –Please forgive any mistakes, I write for fun, not for publishing.

This is a story I wrote to settle myself down. It's the universes gift to writers that we can rewrite our experiences to be what we actually thought should happen, not what did. I apologize for grammar/ structure errors, though if you want to say what you liked/disliked I am open to hearing what could make my next story better. Please find the remainder of the story in the comments section. Enjoy!

“Alright, today’s exercise is hide and seek!” The petite cheerleader type announced from the center of the crowd. Twenty to thirty people stood in a ragged circle around the little woman with the high brown pony tail. The sun was beating down on the small clearing surrounded by towering conifers. The temperature hovered around comfortable, but standing still in the open was pushing the definition of the term. Not liking heat to begin with one tall female eyed the shadows between the trees with longing.

“Get on with it already,” Muttered a squat female with a rope of mahogany brown hair falling down her back. The comment made the taller woman just behind her grin.

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The Coin [Werewolf TF M/F] – Part 3

Over the next few weeks, David and Kelly restarted their relationship. Slowly. Carefully. On the third date after that night, Kelly wore the same outfit – outside of her apartment. At first, she refused to look at anyone around her but as the night wore on, she raised her head and started smiling again. When an older couple remarked on what a handsome couple they were, Kelly grinned with her teeth and pressed up against David, laying her head against him briefly.

After every date, David walked Kelly to her apartment and stood carefully in front of her door. Some nights Kelly would blush and very clearly not look at the doorframe and other times she blush and wink at him as he kissed her (mostly) chastely good night.

They talked a lot – a good bit about her parents and the near cult they were involved in that started with a group of born again Christians. She was sixteen years old when she worked up the nerve to ask a classmate for help. A government investigation was eventually launched and her classmate's parents took her in. Two years later, Kelly's family and the whole group moved to Arizona and set up a compound. She never heard from them again but she bore the scars still. The fact that she was still a virgin with intimacy issues was just one of the many lingering struggles she had to deal with.

In the Movies [mf]

We hurried to buy tickets to the earliest movie that was showing at the time. It didn't matter what the movie was as long as the cinema itself was relatively empty. Things were already in our favour of course, since nobody comes to the movies at 3pm on a weekday. My sweaty hand holding onto her clammy ones, we minced our way to the seats in the corner.

Approaching the velvet chairs, I said to her, "I guess this is where I'll try to put my arms around you and try to cop a feel throughout the show." She giggled and I saw her rosy cheeks. We took our seats and soon enough the lights dimmed. I was playing with her hair and giving her pecks on the cheek. There were a group of loud students seated a couple of rows ahead of us, thank god they were busy doing their own thing. Still running my fingers down her soft hair, I used my other hand to raise the arm rest between us.

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