Homecoming [MF] [oral] [inc]

Mike stepped off the bus and took a look around. Not much changes in sleepy southern towns like this. The old diner and attached gas station across from the bus depot still had peeling paint, old men in rockers out front, and the same gaudy neon sign proclaiming, "The Best Southern Fried Chicken in the State." He looked up Main Street and saw the same Civil War memorial with General Robert E. Lee standing proud and tall with one hand on his saber.

"Surprised that thing is still standing," he thought, shouldering his duffel bag and heading away from downtown. "I figured the council would have had it removed by now. Nearly every week there was some new wannabe rattlecan tag or other defacement."

Every block or so he saw someone he recognized but no one seemed to recognize him. That's what happens though when you leave town to join the Air Force and don't come back for six years. He had changed. Riverview never would.

The lady and the dungeon

He had dreamed of this night for many long months now; and had planned every minute detail. The time had come for him to put the Master plan into operation. The relationship with his lady friend, was on the whole very satisfying, but it was a bit tame compared to the wild sexual adventures he often conjured up in his demented mind. She was a good girl with a fantastic tight body that any man would be proud to caress, fondle and devour, but he was sure there was another hidden side to her nature. He had no real basis for his suspicions, but over the time that they had been together he had observed her closely, and noticed that the way she moved her body was purely sexual.

The Goddess of Kultra, Chapter One [MF, Fantasy]

As the huge doors to the great hall began to creak open, golden light flooded in illuminating the gilded walls of the expansive chamber. Between the slit of light the silhouette of a slender young woman entered. I could see the curves of her body haloed by a suggestion of a delicate silk dress. Once the doors had been fully opened this shadowy figure began to move towards my position. Treading softly along a velvet walkway that led to the base of the steps to the throne. As she entered further into the great golden hall I could begin to appreciate her completely.

She was wearing a elegant and flowing silk dress of peachy coral. A colour that complimented the rich tan of her skin beautifully. The silk appearing almost translucent in the warm light, I could see her youthful body beneath. The wondrous warmth of her skin mirrored the earth of her homeland, Kultra. A city in the southern kingdoms perched on the edge of an arid desert as it falls in to the ocean. A land populated a hardworking and diligent people, extracting the most from their contrasting landscape. Her cheekbones appeared to rise as the dunes do from the sand falling into the deep azure ocean of her eyes.

My first foray into the world of Erotic Fiction… Figured I may as well tackle the library cliche at my first chance. Here goes… Let me know what you think! (Part 2 in the comments)

In the library…

The day had finally come, when we were assigned our group project for the Modern Social Issues class. I'd had my eye on you for months, since first sitting down in the class late in August. Never quite being able to work up the courage to talk to you, I thought that this might finally be my chance…

The professor told us that we were to choose our groups on our own outside of class, and as the clock finally ticked past 11:55, I jumped for the door, hoping to catch you outside.

I saw you walking past me and I didn't quite know what to do, the best that I could manage was following you from afar, out of the building and down the walkway past our building. I was 15 feet behind you, eyes locked on your amazingly tight figure, and your ass swaying so invitingly in your tight white pants… Then, out of nowhere, opportunity struck.

[MF], Oral, Submissive, Cheat: A Quick Stop in Baton Rouge

He sat across the table from her in the diner. Two cups of coffee steamed between them, un-touched. She looked down at the table and licked her lips.

“It’s . . . good to see you again,” she said.

“You too,” he replied.

May was overweight. Fat, in fact, she’d put on fifty pounds since he’d last seen her. But her hair was long, and rich and healthy, tumbling about in auburn waves. Her eyes were still a glacial blue. She glanced up at him and brushed her thick hair back over her shoulder. She licked her lips again. Reaching down, she pulled the heavy knit sweater down over her mom jeans and swallowed.

“Thanks. It’s been a long time.”

“So,” she said, licking her lips. “You still married?”

“Yep,” he grinned, “25 years this year, with a five-year engagement at the beginning, we’ve been together 30 years.”

He reached across the table and took her hand in his. She sighed.

“Happy?”

“Mostly. Nothing’s perfect. I understand you’re married, too.”

She swallowed. “Eight years. We, um, we have one daughter.”

He raised an eyebrow.

The Interrogation, Part II [m/m/f, domination, humiliation] Please start with Part I. PMs welcome.

Click. “Again, we can certainly wait until Monday. The judge will be able to see you and at the very least we will have a female officer to assist you.” Click. “No. I’m fine. I want to get out of here.” Click. “Stand and approach the mirror.” Click The young woman stood somewhat robotically, as if she were watching herself from across the room. She walked up to the two-way mirror quickly and stood, awaiting further instructions. Click. “Open your mouth and show me that you have nothing in your cheeks or under your tongue.” Click.
The woman cast a disbelieving glare off to the side, then faced the mirror dead-on and opened her mouth; she lifted her tongue, moved it right and left, all the while staring straight into her reflection. As she began to close her mouth, she felt a thin line of saliva escape; she clamped her lips closed and made a quick sucking sound to avoid drooling. Her cheeks burned red hot; she knew there was no way the officer on the other side of the glass had not seen her nearly spit on herself. Click. “Take one step back from the glass.” Click. The young woman did as she was told; standing tall and still, her hands at her sides. The hollow pit in her stomach grew larger as she noted her reflection in the glass. Over the last several years, when she would see other women in the locker room at the gym, or on the occasions she had watched porn on her laptop, she noticed that her nipples became harder and stood away from her breasts more than most women. Standing alone in this room, being interrogated by this officer, she noted with horror that her big nipples were erect and fully visible through the fabric of her top. As her eyes traveled down her own body, she regretted her hasty decision not to wear her panties to yoga; the outlines of her outer labia could be seen through her pants. Click. “Turn in a complete circle,” the voice said; she did as she was told. Click. “We recently had a case where a female inmate in our jail hid contraband between her breasts to avoid detection. Bend at the waist toward the glass and use your hands to part your breasts and demonstrate you are not hiding anything.” Click. Oh my god, she thought.; she was not sure how much more embarrassed she could possibly get and she could not understand why she felt so compelled, eager even, to comply with these mortifying instructions. Slowly, she bent forward, bringing her hands up to her chest; she felt her large breasts hanging forward, held by the fabric of her top. She inserted her fingers deep into her cleavage and parted her breasts; she realized she was striving to give her tormentor the best view possible of the space between her tits. As she stood there, being forced to let this stranger stare down her top, she felt her nipples tingle and harden further; and to her shock, she felt a small wet spot in the crotch panel of her tight, thin pants. Click. “Unfortunately, your top is too tight to allow proper inspection. Remove it.” Click. Well there it was. Did she want to leave this awful little room or didn’t she? Did she want to object? Did she want to do as she was told? Did she, for reasons she did not fully understand, want to please this man? Turning her head to stare at the wall to her right, she crossed her arms, grabbed the hem of her top and lifted it out and up, over her full breasts. As the fabric finally cleared her nipples, her boobs dropped down against her body. She completed removing the top over her head and tossed it on the floor. In the mirror she noticed that her boobs looked huge; her nipples were in fact fully erect and her usually large, dark areola were shrunken and pruned.
Click. “Lift them so I may inspect underneath.” Click. Dutifully, she cupped each of her breasts and held them up so the flesh underneath was clearly visible. She then lowered them back against her body.
Just then, to her surprise, a light came on in the room on the other side of the glass; the effect was to make what had been a one-way mirror now a clear window between the rooms. On the other side was the officer who had stopped her, standing in a small room with a desk and filing cabinet behind him.
But he was not alone; at some point, the first officer had invited a second man to join him. The second guy was also in the same uniform, except that he was a much larger and African American. In fact, as she looked at him more, she realized the guy was enormous; he was a head taller than the first guy; his massive biceps strained against the short sleeves of his uniform shirt. She realized that the normal reaction might be to turn away from these two men, or to cover up, but some switch had been flipped and she knew she would obey whatever instructions she was given; so she stood there, her breasts exposed, her juices starting to soak her pants. Her arresting officer leaned and spoke into a mic on the desk, she heard the now familiar click, “In order to complete our search, you need to remove your pants. Do it now.” Click. As she watched the cops watching her, the woman stepped on the heels of her sneakers to pull them off; she then bent to remove her short, pink socks. As she bent, she felt her breasts swing and sway in front of her. Finally, she took the waist band of her pants in her fingers and pulled them down. She wriggled her hips, which made her breasts dance back and forth, and shimmied her way out of her pants. She then stood before the window, fully nude. If she stood at the right angle, she could still see her faint reflection in the glass; she could see the neatly trimmed triangle of dark pubic hair, her flat, toned belly and athletic thighs. She then looked back though the glass at the officers. Both men were staring at her intently. She saw the white officer say something to his big, black coworker. And then, as if in unison, both men pulled their gun belts up a little higher on their hips, and lowered the zippers on their uniform pants. She stood transfixed as each man fished inside his pants with his fingers. The white officer was a little faster, though both men seemed to struggle a bit; he pulled his large fully erect penis out through his fly. His cock was circumcised, with a fat purple head and thick veins along his shaft. The young woman then looked at the black officer. He had also flopped his cock free of his pants; the thing was almost comically large; a massive, dark, thick thing so big that even though it was hard, its own girth cased it to hang down. She realized she had been holding her breath and took a quick gulp of air; her heart was pounding. Click. “You know exactly what we need to see; turn, bend at the waist, and use both hands to spread your buttocks open; you are going to expose your anus to us so that we can inspect it fully.” Click As if on autopilot, the woman did exactly as she was told; she turned to face the back of the room, bent over and placed a hand on each of side of her firm butt. She then pried her bottom apart. She felt the skin of her anus pull tight, involuntarily she contracted her muscles, causing her asshole to constrict and then release; she felt her outer labia part and her inner labia gape open; she gasped as the air hit her warm pussy and she felt her own juices leaking from her open pussy and running down her inner thigh. After waiting a beat, she stood and turned around. Through the glass, both men were stroking their erections. The white officer was gripping his shaft backhand, quickly jerking his cock back and forth; the black officer had his massive dick caught tightly in his big hand, he was pulling his cock up so it pointed at the ceiling, slowly working it up and down. Click. “Pull the chair closer to the window and place your left foot on it.” Click. The woman did as she was told. The chair scraped across the floor. She raised her leg and placed her foot in the cold seat. She felt her pussy open again and again she felt her own wetness. Her pussy was soaking and she felt a throbbing in her clit. Both men were now jerking their cocks harder and faster.

[FFM, Fdom, Mdom, Fsub] Caroline takes a woman’s advances on her husband into her own hands. PART ONE [Fiction]

  1. The first message she left me was her asking to speak with me. This wasn't odd, she'd do the same each christmas and week before my wife's birthday- which she shared. It wasn't odd at all the hear from her. Just like the christmases and birthdays she asked if I was free the next day; she told me that she finished work early enough for me to see her before I started in the afternoon for what I assumed would be to buy a gift. But she told me she couldn't wait. She punctuated the message like she hadn't punctuated any others. We'd never been excited to see each other before- we did because we had to. But, I didn't think much more of it, put it down to her being in a good mood. Which were rare for her. I didn't consider that the date she called me wasn't a week from my wife's and her birthday or a month out from christmas. If I had, I'd have called her and enquired why she would want to see me.

    The next day she arrived when my wife left for work.

    "Did I miss her?" she asked while letting herself in the door.

    "Just," I replied without much warmth.

    They aren't good together. They know this. My wife, Caroline isn't one for conflict; she's quiet and not a match for Sarah's manic attention seeking. Caroline is in denial of her beauty, despite constant reminders from me. She doesn't want to be the fool who says too much about herself only to be wrong. She is quiet and regal. Sarah is her opposite, she is a more clunky person. Her posture gives away her personality; attention seeking, loud, self-obsessed yet self-oblivious, she doesn't know how to dress, she guesses and looks okay sometimes- but I'm not going to tell her how to be.

    Her tomboyish shoulders swing through the door, the trim of the doorway complimenting the outside world better than her shoulders compliment what she looks like. Blonde hair naturally straight- so a brush isn't even necessary- all pulled into a ponytail. She's looked better straight out of bed. In her work clothes, blue polo and gym shorts. She definitely isn't the girl I would usually think about fucking.

    "That's too bad." I think she is trying to imply by her tone that she wanted to see her.

    "Where are we going?" cutting to the chase. I don't want her in my house. "No where. I told you I needed to speak to you."

    This isn't normal.

    "Okay, what about?"

    "I am leaving Nick."

    "Oh, shit. Are you okay?" It was a matter of time. He is a self-righteous prick. She isn't a bad person, she deserves someone more compatible. She begins to cry.

    "I- I don't know." She's really crying now. She drops her bag as she falls onto the couch. I grab a glass of water for her and sit beside her on the couch.

    "What happened?"

    "Nothing, really. I just told him I want a divorce. I can't be with him anymore. He's a good man," again, he isnt, "I just can't be with him anymore."

    This is just like Caroline's parents. They pretended like the river was calm while the current beneath the surface slammed everything into the rocks. Their divorce was simple at least.

    "Is there anything I can do?" That's what you say, right?

    "No." She places her hand on my knee. I remove it. Just tap the back of it to show comfort while I place it back in her lap.

    "Do you have anywhere to stay?"

    "At mom's." she puts the hand back. "Is something wrong with me? I shouldn't want to leave my husband. But he makes me want to like I'm not pretty enough or important enough."

    At this point Caroline's car pulls in the drive. The hand stays in my lap, in fact it moves to my cock. In the moment I realise my wife is home, I realise what Sarah is doing. I look at her with disbelief and slap her hand away; she picks up her things and leaves. Caroline sees her leave. She looks at me with anger. I'm not quite out of the moment on the couch, I too am angry. I never though Sarah would do that to Caroline.


    Nothing has happened for a month. But then I get another visit. This time Caroline is home. It's nighttime. Caroline is between my legs, on her knees with her arms bound behind her back. He favourite thing is to hold my cock, get it all slippery with her mouth and rub it while she sucks. I grab her hair and pull her off. That's when the bell rings. I place a vibrator on the ground between Caroline's legs. They're kind of spread making her pussy low to the ground, but no low enough to get good contact with her pussy and the vibrator. She'll have to wait while I answer the door. The bell rings a few more times. Someone is in a rush.

    I see the blotchy colors through the imperfections in the glass. Blonde hair and black dress. Legs exposed. Opening the door I smell shitty perfume. It smells like child's candy. Like bad wine. "Is Caroline home?"

    "Yes, she's upstairs. why are you here?"

    "My car broke down in town, I was out with friends."

    "Did you want a lift?"

    "No, I don't think I can drive."

    "I was going to take you home, not to your car."

    "What?"

    She's drunk, she has an ulterior motive. She steps into the house, attempting to show off her legs. Her stockings don't suit her legs. Her dress is even more ill-fitting. She tried. Even given my first impression, she looks good enough for my cock to get hard through the pyjama pants I put on to come down to the door. She notices. He's gotten what she came for.

    She drops her purse and lowers down, pulls down my pants and grabs my cock. "It's all wet. Is it pussy? I don't like the taste of pussy." she looks at me with fake eyelashes that do nothing but make her look droopy, they're a good half a centimetre longer than they should be.

    "Get off me." I'll admit I could've just stepped back, pushed her out the door and gone back to someone who does like the taste of pussy.

    "But, I'm lonely."

    'That's your own fault,' I think to myself. As I do, she opens her mouth and slides it in. I can feel her teeth on the base of my cock, I can feel her throat trying to protest as she forces it down. Points for trying. But I'm not having any more of it. I grab hair doll-like hair and pull her up 2 inches higher than her heels. As she tiptoes drool drip down her mouth, she attempts to wipe it but I slap her hand away.

    "What do you want, Sarah."

    No response besides her trying to look at my cock. I slap her hard enough to get her attention. She snaps her eyes to me. "What do you want?"

    "I don't know." "Do you want my cock?"

    "I think so." "You think so? You were pretty damn sure a second ago. Did you taste your step-sisters spit on there and realise what you're doing?"

    She starts to cry. She nods through her blubbering mouth and welling eyes.

    "I'm sorry," she mutters.

    "Don't say sorry to me. Say sorry to Caroline. Go up there and tell her what you did. Or should I?"

    "She won't believe you," she taunts, "you didn't stop me."

    I grab her by the throat. "Don't you pull this shit. If you want to act like a slut, commit to it. Now go tell Caroline what a whore you are now."

    "No."

    Another light slap.

    "NO! Please."

    I force her to the stairs that lead to the bedroom. I forget my pyjamas are down and stumble. My grip is loose enough for Sarah to get free and quickly escape. I don't chase her. She knows she's done wrong. She can't escape that.

    Back in the room, Caroline continues to try and press her clit against the toy. I grab it and put it on the bed. I sit back in front of her and take my cock out.

    "Taste it. Tell me what's wrong."

    She opens her mouth, takes it down to her throat without any protest. She stops and takes it out.

    "Who was at the door?"


    Now another month goes by, only this time it isn't filled with radio silence from Sarah. It's very much open airwaves. Caroline has taken it upon herself to field all text messages from her and respond as me. She delights in this after a childhood spent in the shadow of the golden-haired golden child; the girl who did no wrong has wronged the girl who was always wrong.

    The day after Sarah's visit, Caroline simply messaged "would you like to get coffee?" That's all. There was no response. At least not to Caroline. My phone turned into R2-D2. Every second moment a text would come through. In 5 minutes she would run the gamut: regretful, self righteous, horny. Texts along the lines of: "I am so sorry. I will never contact you again. Please don't tell Caroline," and then "I think you liked it. You should've stopped me, I was drunk and you took advantage," culminating eventually in, "I need more of you. I liked being your slut." She doesn't know what it means to be my whore.

    Caroline would also run her own gamut of emotions: vindictive, remorseful, horny. All carried out in the messages back to Sarah. She was very subtle. She was making Sarah her whore.


    This all came to a head when Sarah messaged me asking to meet. It would be out first meeting since her visit. I was at work when I received the text message. I forwarded it to Caroline who was at home. Caroline told me how to respond to her. This was a side of Caroline I'd never seen. She's always been the submissive one, never once has she expressed an interest in assuming a dominant role. In fact, I'd tease her sometimes by calling her mistress. She hated it. But now, with her step-sister, she had found a delight in it all.

    The date was set. It would be the morning after. Both Caroline and I were off work. Sarah wasn't, but Caroline made it clear, via me, that if she wanted to get another taste she would have to comply.


    Caroline and I packed a bag with relatively few things. A polaroid camera, a marker, old clothes of Caroline's and the same vibrator I used to torture her the night of Sarah's visit. I asked if she wanted cuffs or gags. She said no. I asked why. She said she didn't want to tell me, and then quickly apologised for bing defiant. I smiled and told her if it was worth my while waiting that she may escape punishment.

    We drove out to a motel in the mountains. Snow had hit it pretty hard so it took us longer than we would have liked to arrive. Sarah had gotten there early, perhaps in an effort to show her obedience. She could be a suck up. And this time sucking up worked to her disadvantage; the wind was blowing hard against the motel where she was standing outside room 14. Caroline had instructed her to wait outside the door specifically, not to get the key and go inside. The weather wasn't a consideration when she gave that order, but Caroline, who was religiously indifferent, saw it as as a sign of good will from God.

    After applying chains to the tyres, we got to the motel. I'd let Caroline out a block before so Sarah wouldn't see her through the windshield. I continued on and pulled into the motor oil and snow mixed parking lot where I looked up at Sarah, who hadn't noticed me yet, shivering and breathing into her hands for warmth. She was alerted to me arrival when I slammed the car door shut. She looked at me. At first it seemed as if she was about to smile, but her mind must've caught her because she then looked worried, as if she didn't know what she should emote. She wasn't ready for this. But I wasn't in charge of this operation.

    The office handed me my keys and asked if the young lady by 14 was waiting for me. I told the old woman behind the desk yes and she nodded as if she knew what was about to happen. I smiled because she didn't.


    As I turned the corner on to the balcony from the stair well, I see Sarah. Caroline is behind her, but Sarah is clearly too nervous seeing me to notice Caroline's heels clicking on the ground. She's dressed impeccably, she has on a maroon velvet dress with black thigh highs that turn into black heels. She's so beautiful. She looks too innocent to dominate.

    Sarah stands where she has the whole time while I approach her. Caroline is still a few feet back away from her. I walk past Sarah, whose eyes follow me all the way around to Caroline. If her face didn't know what to do before, then now her brain has shut down. It looks as if she's in shock. I don't say a thing.

    "Can you get the camera out, honey?" Caroline asks, her voice like silk.

    I unzip the bag and hand her the polaroid camera.

    "Feel free to take as many as you like, Carrie. We have lots of film."

    Caroline responds with a smile, more focused on capturing the dear in the headlight. The camera churns out a picture, while it develops Sarah starts to cry.

    "Sarah, I don't want you to talk. I don't want you to make any sound at all. I'll let you know when you can. understand?" she's a goddess.

    Sarah opens her mouth, and closes it at double time, exchanging it for a nod.

    "Honey, I don't like her clothes. She looks like a boy." again, a goddess.

    And she was right. She is in a pair of jeans, coupled with trainers and a jacket that looks as if it belonged to her husband. She doesn't have a clue.

    "I think you're right. What should we do about it?" I ask Caroline.

    "I want you to change her." I know she meant the clothes, but I think the meaning of what she said stretched much further.

    Sarah looks at the ground while I undressed her. I remove her jacket which reveals black t-shirt covering her small tits, I remove it, unlace he shoes, remove her socks and then her jeans. She is in the only items of clothing that looked good. A lace thong and bra, as if she though it only mattered what she looked like naked. She shivers.

    "Why did you stop? I want it all off." I love this Caroline.

    Sarah's tears drip on the concrete balcony, her mouth open, expelling her erratic breath visible in a cloud. I step behind her and unclip her bra. Whether through reflex or conservation, she catches it so it doesn't expose her. This angers Caroline. She slaps her across the face.

    "You want do be a whore don't you?" she is a burning fuse.

    Sarah just shivers.

    "Answer me, whore."

    Sarah blubbers and nods and inhales the way you do when you cry.

    "Grow up, Sarah. You chose this for yourself."

    I grab her arms allowing the bra to fall onto the pile of other clothes. Her panties come off without protest.

    "Can you inspect her, Honey? I want to see if she's up to grade." I knew this would feature in Caroline's plans.

    Inspections were my first games with Caroline, on our first few times together I'd have Caroline stand at the foot of the bed while I make sure her body was fit for me. Of course it always was. But Sarah may actually pose unfit.

    "Inspect with me, Caroline. She's your whore."

    "Our whore," she corrects. I had only seen myself as an assistant to Caroline's plans at that point.

    "Spread your legs," I command. Sarah obeys.

    I squat down and look at her pussy. It's hidden away, her labia majora hiding the rest of her. I run my finger along it ensuring to get inside her crease. She's very wet.

    "She wants to be our whore more than she's letting on, Carrie."

    Caroline grabs my finger and sucks it.

    "How is it?" I ask.

    Caroline looks at Sarah, who is looking at her like a chef about to have her dish judged, waiting for a response: "I'm not sure."

    She lets go of my hand and dives it into Sarah who shudders and closes her eyes involuntarily. Caroline pulls it back out and grabs Sarah's hair and the back of her neck.

    "You tell me, Sarah." she slides the pussy soaked finger in her mouth. Sarah sucks it obligingly before it slides back out.

    She shakes of the taste and responds "I don't like it. I like the taste of cock." "So it could use more cock?" Caroline nods and turns to me, "It could use more cock. Can you help with that?"

    "If she passes inspection. Bend over, Sarah."

    Her asshole is untouched. I lick it. "Has anyone done that before, Sarah?" She looks at Caroline for approval to speak, Caroline nods. "No," she finally replies. "But I like it a lot." I stop licking. I spit on it and slide a finger in. "Very tight. She passes. Just."

    "Any notes?" Caroline asks gleefully.

    "Many. Poor posture, poor dressing."

    "Put her in my clothes."

    I grab the bag and take out the clothes, Caroline takes the opportunity to take pictures of Sarah's asshole, pussy and remainder of her naked body. I hand her the clothes and watch her get dressed. She looks no where near as good as Caroline, but 1000 times better than she did.

    "It's time to go inside, Sarah," Caroline announces as she lowers the camera from her eye.

    END OF PART 1

My /u/NaughtyFox69 Tail Plug Fantasy [M,f,Str8]

I have been a Fappy Redditor for a long time and /u/NaughtyFox69 is the closest to perfection I've ever come across.

Her 1 post under /u/meowelix is without a doubt the hottest album I've ever seen on Reddit, and it inspired me to write this.

It doesn't take long for me to lock eyes with the younger girl across the table from me. She goes to school with a co-worker of mine, we've never met, but her blond hair, heavy chest, and thick behind have my attention, and I want her to know. The first gaze says it all, I give her a sly smile and she returns the same with an intriguing raised eyebrow. I can tell she's done this dance before, fuck I love girls like this.

LOOKING FOR LADIES PERSPECTIVES (With PIC For You)

Okay, I have this coworker that I flirt with quite a bit, particularly over the office IM. So she asked me to write her a story of a sexual nature, but she has not really confessed any of her real kinks yet (other than that she thinks I would be shocked), which makes it a bit difficult to really home in on what she might like. She has confessed that she sometimes fantasizes about what could happen in our office meetings, so I touch on that a bit, but don't want to go too far down that road until I really know what drives her fantasies. (She has promised me an actual experience she loved and a dark fantasy to be revealed next time we can arrange lunch).

Anyway, I am getting along in this, and although the story is not complete, I'd like to get a couple of women's perspectives on how this is shaking out and what you think. As this is a story about an actual office environment, I have changed names and places just in case anyone I work with happens to be on this forum Again, it is not finished, but I hope to get some feedback anyway, it may help me make some changes. I have think skin, so if you have a red pen, go wild

TindErotica

So a few weeks ago I met a man on Tinder and we really hit it off. Before I knew it we were creating an erotic story together of our fantasy encounter if we ever meet up. What follows is one of the sexiest stories I have ever taken part in. For the sake of the story, let's call this man Aaron, and I'll be Janelle.

Note: I'm starting in the middle of the conversation. We got to talking about writing.

Aaron: So if you had to write a play about us, what would it be called and what's the plot?

Janelle: What a question! Well of course it would be called A Thousand Swipes of Tinder, where the stars align and two people swipe right and end up being very well suited for one another even though the guy is 7 years older. :)

Aaron: You def chose the right major. If this story is made into a film it should be a drama, and obv R-rated so we can show our passion onscreen.

Janelle: Well that would certainly be a lot of fun to film