Under the dim computer light [MF]

Hello everyone. I've recently taken a liking to erotic literature, but I'm very picky with it so I decided to try to write a short story.

The story is more focused on the act itself rather than the setting, so keep that in mind.

Again, this is the first thing I've ever written and I would like honest feedback, whether it be related to character, setting, narrative, grammar, detail, descriptions… I think you get it.

Seriously, I know it is not very great, so by being honest you're only helping me.

Thank you in advance for your help, and I hope you enjoy.

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She yawns. You look over your shoulder to see her lying on the bed on top of her stomach, feet up in the hair and hands supporting her head. She has been quietly watching you work on your computer for about one hour now. She is absolutely beautiful.

She is a tall girl, about 1.80 meters. Deep, brown eyes and dark red, straight long hair which, had her been standing, would reach to about the level of her nipples. She has a very attractive, slender build and her breasts are small and cute. Her skin is very white.

My first attempt at writing anything ever. Should I continue this story? What would you like to happen next?

As it seems to have become a habit of sorts, I was completely absorbed in my current project when I realized I had been working for 6 hours straight. I loved my job but this was too much, I silently thought to myself.

My silent thoughts were jolted shut by the sudden realization that it was 945 already and Trader Joe’s would close in 15 minutes. I had been here before – I made a split second decision on whether to make a run for it, or to look at other options, and sprang up to the bedroom to get dressed. I had been working in my comfy boxers and tank top all day. Of all that the HR types will tell you, the biggest proponent of working from home is being bra-less all day. I grabbed the first thing that I could wear the quickest and still call myself appropriately dressed – my gym clothes and sprang out of the apartment. The light worked in my favor and saved me a full minute, and before I knew it, I was making the daily thai-or-indian choice in the frozen meals section.

Outline for Conservative Wife Massage [cheating, hotwife, MF]

This isn't really a "cuckold" or humiliation story at all. This is more about a conservative wife losing her inhibitions. I'm not good at storytelling but I have an outline to flesh out. Feel free to run with it and build a great story or give me some ideas:

Outline

Characters

Wife – Sheila, mid 30’s, conservative, never been with another man

Husband – Jack – average joe

Masseuse – Maximus (Max), muscular, giant penis

Story Summary – Husband buys wife a spa day. Wife opts for a few drinks and a massage. Masseuse gets a little excited during massage, drunk wife loses inhibitions a little at a time until she’s completely over the edge. Told in 3rd person.

  • Introduction of Characters

Husband tells wife about spa

Wife gets ready goes to spa

wife does various things at spa before massage

*Pre-Massage

Wife gets a little drunk drinking some white wine while waiting for massage

Wife strips down to thong panties and large towel, feels a little uncomfortable as its outside her comfort zone, but being drunk gives her a little more confidence than normal

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The Good Student [Excerpt] [Dom-Sub] [M/F]

Hello, I'm back with an excerpt from my latest Kristi Campbell short, The Good Student. This time, Kristi learns that being a good girl has its rewards.

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The Good Student

In my first semester, I met a cute young thing at a fraternity party. His name was Kyle and he had dark brown hair, blue eyes and fine, almost feminine facial features. I met him during a round of “flip cup”, a party game where two teams race to right overturned red plastic cups on a table using only one finger. He and I were last in the line, and when it came down to him and me, he won. Afterward, after I finished chugging the last of the warm beer in the cup (my punishment for losing), he’d approached me and whispered into my ear, “If I can do that with one finger, imagine what I could do with all ten.”

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Beach Aftermath [m,f]

Part 1

We walk hand in hand in no direction in particular. Having had our fill of the beach for the day, we stopped at a local ice cream shop to get to know each other more before we decided to go for a walk. Before long, we came up to the local bakery where my friend, Amy, worked.

"This is where my friend works. I should stop in and say hey." He stared at me bewildered, dropping my hand.

"What?"

"My sister works here."

"Really?"

He opens the door for me and let's me go ahead of him. "John!"

I look over to see a cute European-looking girl running up to him and wrapping her arms around him.

"Lo!" A second later I'm nearly tackled as Amy's blonde hair whips around me and her arms squeeze.

"I'm sorry, do I know you," I smile at her.

"Ha! Jo-Jo, this is my friend, Lauren. Lauren, this is Joanna."

"And this is my brother, John," Joanna says.

"Finally I get to meet your brother! I've heard so much about you! Is your wife coming down to visit soon?" Amy asks.

Spring Break (The Adventures of Dennis part 4, cont’d)

I wasn’t in to Dirk’s plan. So that night, I ignored him. I got trashed at a bar further downtown in Miami and hit on several groups of girls. None of them were interested. I vaguely remember some big dude stepping between me and some other chick and yelling in my face. I swung at him. He socked me in the face. I remember me throwing a chair. We were restrained by bouncers and I was thrown to the pavement. I woke up in our hotel room the next morning with a white hospital bracelet on my wrist and a bandage on my cheek. I didn’t recall anything. Dirk was, once again, not there. I checked my phone and saw a ton of texts from Anjali. I only knew it was her because the first message said; “Hey this is Anjali.” I drank coffee and rehearsed a plan. I would go to her room and we’d have a quick pity fuck. I wasn’t sure how functional my cock would be after the previous night, but I’d manage. I would make sure that she sucked my cock for at least five minutes. I don’t leave these situations without lips having been around my cock. I’d tell her I didn’t think she was my type, get dressed and go. I made sure to remove the bandage before I left, because despite her insecurity, I didn’t think Anjali would want to fuck a mummy. I arrived at her room and rang the bell. Nothing happened. I rang it again. I thought she probably wasn’t there. But she opened the door and stood with her arms crossed, once again wearing a t-shirt and her underwear. In the background, buck-naked: Dirk. I couldn’t fucking believe it. “Hi Dennis,” she said, matter of a fact. “Hey…” I said. “What!?” There was a pause. “What,” she said, “is you’re a neglectful shit-brain. You promise me we’ll hang out again, and you don’t answer my texts. ‘It’s okay, Anjali, you’re such a special person. Your Mom just doesn’t realize it.’” She pointed a finger at me. “Bullshit. You just wanted to have sex with me. You’re a shithead male stereotype, do you know that? Well, guess what? Two can play at the game you’re playing. How old are you, anyway?” “Nineteen. What does that matter, you—“ She looked kind of surprised. “Nineteen,” she said. “Well I don’t know how many women you play these games with, but I hope you get AIDS before your twenty-fifth birthday.” “Thanks for granting me that six-year window,” I said as the door shut on me. I walked away. The door opened behind me and I heard Dirk call, “We’re still on buddy.” At first, when Anjali had used the word game, I’d thought that Dirk had let her in on the moan game. But I realized she was more likely referring to me being a manipulative douche. But I now saw what Dirk meant when he’d said, “No. Those same chicks.” I bought a coke from the machine downstairs. I took a long swig and thought of how two would, indeed, play at that game.

Spring Break (The Adventures of Dennis part 4)

Spring Break is, ideally, a gigantic powwow of not-yet-adults baring their bodies and rubbing their skin together as it drips with clear ocean water like they are in a Gatorade commercial (and maybe they are), while muffled hip hop surrounds their souls like an ecstatic Stockholm Syndrome and colors flash in the sunlight that never goes away and beer cascades through the air in slow-motion. But that isn’t what my spring break was, exactly. By the time my bud Dirk and I arrived at the beach in Miami, large swaths of it were closed off, most people had packed up and left, and it was colder than you’d ever think, all because our college lets out for spring about a week and a half later than everywhere else. By the time we got to the beach, we just stood there, staring. Dirk said; “Let’s go to the hotel.” We did, and we slept. The next day was a little more interesting. We stood in a Tiki bar talking with two girls. One of them was Adrienne, who was a senior at Florida State University, where she studied creative writing. The other was Anjali. She was doing an internship with a law firm down here in Miami. Her college was in California. She was originally from India, but she had no accent, so she must have moved here at a young age. She wore a blue blouse and bluer jeans, with a tear on one leg. I recognized the tear in her jeans was a desperate plea for male attention. Her hair was black enough to create dark contours against the tacky brown oak of the bar. Whenever a drink flashed in the light, her hair countered it. I was playing it low-key. I started off with Adrienne, but Dirk consistently elbowed his way in there, and ultimately I gave him the ground. While I sipped my Jack and Coke (don’t even ask if they bother checking IDs in Florida), Anjali said to me; “So, like, do you get free passes to concerts and stuff?” I’d told her I was a roadie for The Dave Matthews Band. She loved it. I’d guessed she would. “No,” I said. “Not really. Dave and I don’t get along too great.” “Why’s that?” I sighed while I came up with something. “Oh, you know, me and his daughter,” I said. “We may or may not have had something going on. It’s all good now and me and her are totally friends. It’s just, when her Dad found out, you know…” Her eyes bugged out enough to stick to the ceiling. “Oh my God,” she said. “You can’t be serious.” I nodded. “Let’s just say I keep a bat in my apartment.” The more I told her about Dave Matthews being a deranged psycho, the closer she moved toward me. As soon as it got to the point where I came back from the bar with two drinks and slid my hand down her shoulder after handing her drink over, I could see the deal was sealed. At around this time, Dirk and Adrienne split. Dirk’s a pro.

Swim Coach M/f, spank, reluctant

I've had several similar fantasies for years and am starting to write them down for the first time. I welcome comments and messages.

Coach Barry is our school's assistant swim coach. He is also my friend(enemy), Nicole's step-father. She is away for the summer at swim camp and Coach Barry said I could come over whenever I wanted to use their pool and get a head start on our last high school season.

Coach B is a little intimidating. He is very tall and really muscular. I wish guys my age had chests and abs like his. Not that guys my age really look twice at me. My body is straight as a board, except for my bottom, which is sculpted from all our kicking drills, and I have barely any breasts. Plus I always smell like chlorine. Coach B is also the strict coach, the one who assigns drills, the one who criticizes, and the all around bad cop next to our head coach.

[Excerpt] Some Experience Required [M/F] [Deflowering] [Older Man]

Hello, fellow Erotica lovers! This is a short excerpt from my short story, Some Experience Required. This is the story of Kristi Campbell's "first time", as she gains new experiences at the hands of a masterful teacher.

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Keep it sexy, lovelies!

Some Experience Required (Excerpt) By Josie Daniels

I can’t explain how it happened. For a few minutes, we stood there in his living room sipping beers and making mindless chatter, and then I was standing before him as he sat on a bar stool. His hands itched at his legs as if wanting nothing more than to reach up and wrap around my body, but his mind wouldn’t let it happen. His eyes burned into mine, and mine into his and I tried with everything I had to send him the mental instructions to just do it – to rip my yoga pants off and to take me in his arms and fuck me until I screamed, to make me feel the way I had that night so many weeks back in my bedroom when he had invaded my fantasies.

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