Sexy Strangers [feedback][short story][MMF][cuckold]

The rest of the story can be found here. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

VI. SHY NO MORE

As Brian is kissing her neck, Isabel is overcome with tremendous feelings of desire and nervousness. I can't believe this is happening. These guys are both about to have their way with me, and Jon is going to be there watching the whole time. Her body shook at the thought. She felt Marc exploring her thighs, slipping his fingers between her dress and her skin. He slowly slid it up over her body, and she instinctively put her arms up so that he could get it off. Wearing nothing but her tiny black thong, she felt suddenly exposed. But she resisted the urge to cover her breasts with her hands, and instead used those hands to pull Brian's face to her own and kiss him. This is it. Now, it's time to let go.

She rubbed Brian's dick again through his pants as they kissed. This thing is huge. I want to taste it so bad. Probably sensing her urgency, Brian placed a hand on her shoulder and motioned for her to sit down. Marc got off the bed and stood at Brian's side. Read more »

The Transformation Chapter 3

Camille woke with a start. It had been a week since she had first started feeling horny and it hadn't gotten any better; if anything it had gotten worse. As she slowly opened her eyes she briefly wondered if her habit of masturbating every night before sleep had made things worse. She smiled and rubbed the sleep from her eyes.

"Who cares." She thought as her hands strayed back to her breasts. Her nipples were hard as diamonds and seemed to beckon for her touch. Each of her fingers rode ever the nipple of her left breast as she could sense the now-permanent ache building in her groin. Camille spared only a a passing thought for why she had woken up without a t-shirt on before she remembered taking it off the night before during her last self-love session.

Camille let a little gasp out as she used both hands to knead her breasts. Her legs spread involuntarily and her right hand strayed from her tit down to her panties. As she had anticipated she was already soaked. She would have slept in the nude but given her constant arousal and self-pleasuring she didn't want the help to explain to James why they had to clean her sheets constantly. Her breathing quickened as she slipped her hand underneath the pink and purple horizontal striped panties and begin toying her clit. Read more »

Spanking: Her first time [spanking] [BDSM] [D/s] [pleasure] [MF] [orgasm] [erotica] [belt] [submission] [Dominant] [play]

Writen by me © In the Quiet

This is one of my favorite subjects, since I like to spank. So for me it is not if I will spank you it is when I will spank you. So first let me give a little disclaimer, I do not condone abuse. I will never and have never abused a woman, the thought repulses me and I am ashamed to be part of a Gender where the beating and tolerance of abuse is Admired. Abuse is never ok. Let me establish that when I talk about Spanking or Discipline (Correction) it is in terms of Safe Sane and Consensual an act agreed upon in a relationship, such as D/s or even in a regular relationship where some dabble in Kink.

There are two basic forms of spanking one is to correct (discipline your submissive). The other is sensual and erotic a form of play. I do not like to correct my little but it must be done, for it is my responsibility as a Dominant to Discipline when warranted. Read more »

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The Transformation Chapter 2

Link to Chapter 1

Camille awoke and checked her smartphone. She almost didn't know where she was until she realized she was in James Camden's house, his mansion. It was 6:00 AM, she didn't want to be late for her first breakfast. It was going to be a big day. Class in the morning, shopping in the afternoon then dinner and working on her thesis at night. She read a few articles and checked her bank account, another 5,000 had been deposited. She smiled. This was too lucky. She fired off a text to Lizzie promising to tell her all about it over lunch, she promised to take her shopping on the weekend. Then she got ready and walked to the dining room at 7:55.

James was already dressed and waiting. He wore another suit and Camille found that she could get used to this. Breakfast with an attractive billionaire. Lambo ride to class. She just had to finish her thesis to graduate. Who knew, she thought, maybe James will need a financial advisor after I graduate. If he's willing to pay me 5 grand a day to shop who knows what he would be willing to pay for real work. Read more »

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Mine. [very short story]

Fingers hooked on the front of your jeans and I dragged you close.

I read the uncertainty in your eyes, but there was no hesitation in my own. It didn’t take much to loosen your jeans, just a quick unsnapping of buttons and my hand was drawing them over your hips. I could feel your indecision like a low current along your skin, but while I was moving slowly, letting the jeans settle around your feet, I gave you no chance to escape. My hands moved to your wrists, drawing them over your head, and your shirt joined your jeans on the floor.

You were bared to me, clothed now only in the sheer fabric of your panties. I leaned forward, forcing you back a step, until you were trapped between me and the desk. My hands encircled your waist and I lifted you, settling your ass near the edge.

Knee nudging your thighs apart, I stepped between your legs and buried my right hand in the back of your hair. Drawing your head back to expose your throat, my words were spoken against the long curve of your neck.

"Mine." Read more »

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The Transformation Chapter 1 (This is my first ever, appreciate the critiques, if there is interest then more to come, doesn’t get sexual until end of chapter 2)

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Camille sat up at her table at Starbucks a little bit every time the bell hanging over the door rang. Navy suit with a red tie the email had said. She wasn't sure what he'd look like, she'd just responded to the ad on campus. It had been a simple flyer. Just a piece of paper on a bulletin board:

"Seeking attractive, young, intelligent female for important finance work, PART TIME"

The ad had contained a number. The number was answered by a man who took her name. A few hours later a call came and she was given an email. She sent her resume and was given a time and place for the interview. Camille had resisted the urge to get up and leave half a dozen times since she'd been waiting. She sighed. It was always nerve-wracking waiting for an interview and Camille had had too many go poorly recently. Pursuing her doctorate in political science was absolutely time consuming and though she needed the money and had a bachelors in finance there were too many interviewers who thought she wouldn't have the time to work. Read more »

SheilaStretch’s Alone on the Farm: Jane Wrecks Her Hole [Story tags include: Corruption, Fisting+, (some) Forced, sometimes a bit of beast…]

This is a story I've been working on for awhile. Chapter 5 is currently being edited, but I just realized I never did share the first 4 around here… It might be a bit extreme for some, but maybe some of you might be interested?

Chapter 1: http://legitkink.net/content/stories/sheilastretch/aloneonthefarm/janewrecksherhole-ch1

With a sudden pop the bottle slid easily all the way in, right up to her cervix and an uncontrollable shudder ran through her entire body as her muscles clamped fiercely around the bottle in a sudden orgasm.

Her whole body tingled with pleasure and she couldn’t help but massage a breast while gently sliding the bottle in and out of her warm, wet pussy. She hadn’t noticed herself holding her breath, but now she was panting heavily. She greedily fucked the bottle and moved it around trying to widen herself as much as possible, with the hope that it would loosen her up and make the next attempt a little easier.

That night she fell soundly asleep with a goal fully formed in her mind: She would stretch herself out and ruin her vagina so that no one but her would be able to enjoy it. Read more »

SheilaStretch’s Plutonian Propagation: wrecked holes, broken taboos & wanton cumsluts too! [Story tags include: M/S, MC, Mind-Break, Cum Obsession, Intentional Pregnancy, Fisting+, ect. ect…]

X-posted from /r/breeding… Mr. S and I have been working to get this finished for what seems like forever now, but it's finally done!

The story is broken up into 3 parts, with each part having a few 'main' kinks. If one chapter's focused kink doesn't appeal, the story is split in a way that you can absolutely skip to the next chapter to avoid the bit you're not interested in :)

The mother/son relationship is a primary theme, and progresses throughout all 3 chapters, but I guess we could say the first 2 chapters are really more about the mental processes our leading lady goes through to end up where she ends up by chapter 3 :D

Chapter summaries below:

Chapter 1: http://legitkink.net/content/stories/mister-s/plutonianpropegation/wreckedholes-pt1

Tags: slut, cum obsession, corruption, MC, mind-break, piercings, gangbangs, wrecked holes

Claire could see the cum spilling out of her overfilled hole, leaking out around her piercings and down her thighs and onto the sheets to form a sticky mess between her legs.

Her cunt was a sloppy, gaping, wrecked mess. She knew she should have been horrified, but… she couldn't bring herself look away. Read more »

A Penitent Man [feedback][short story][~9000][MF]

She opened the door to her room. The rush of delicate scents that met his nose was somewhat overpowering at first, but welcome. This girl sure loves her Victoria’s Secret. He dropped his bags onto the floor and waited for the opportune moment. And, just when she got close enough to her bed, he lunged at her. He wrapped her up in his arms and they went crashing into her mattress, a bundle of laughter and happiness. They settled down and stared deeply into each other’s eyes. They shared what would surely be only the first of many kisses during the coming week. They could feel the heat transferring between them. The familiar magnetism brought on by sexual tension. But they were tired; it had been a very long day. So, they decided to just go to bed. Read more »

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Fantasy Fulfilled [mmmmf]

Being a big-shot executive was not how Samantha envisioned herself. After college, she'd taken the job at the publishing firm just to pay the bills. 7 years later, here she is, running the place. 16 hour days takes a toll on a woman. She's not had a steady relationship in 5 years, and it's been at least a year since she'd felt the heat of a man's breath in her ear, and the tingle of a man's tongue on the back of her neck.

Samantha was a stunning woman. She wore her dark brown hair short for efficiency's sake. She couldn't stand having to allow time in the day for hair styling. It was easy to see how she could command a room full of middle-aged English professors and bookstore executives. Her bright blue eyes had snatched more than one man's breath from his lungs. Add that to her hourglass figure, flawless skin, and long legs, and you've got the recipe for a woman with amazing powers of seduction. Just to put a cherry on top of it all, she always made sure her cleavage was available, just in case. Read more »