Literotica Collaboration and Help

My girlfriend and I are currently trying to create a literotica short short/mini series. We have a guy helping with the worldbuilding and we are trying to find someone who can critique the writing, preferably a woman.

The world we’re creating is home to four elven races in a world where masculinity is slowly fading.

The 1st race are essentially human in appearance, just slimmer and shorter.

The 2nd race are an all-female nymph-like race similar to the Asari of Mass Effect.

The 3rd race are essentially halflings that come in colors like green, purple, blue, turquoise, ect. They tend to have very large breasts.

The 4th race is a flip on gender power dynamics, as the females are basically futanari and the males are femboys. The futanari are sterile however, and it’s the femboys that get them pregnant after many hours of prostate stimulation.

We can provide more details if need be. We also have a discord for the project.

Cosplay [M22/F22] [con][sex] (2/3)

[Part 1](https://redd.it/102g2fm)

8. *Everything*

It was a deep, hungry, voracious kiss which found them devouring each
other’s mouth for minutes on end. Her tongue would dart forwards,
tasting, licking, probing as he eagerly sucked on it, only for her to
return the favour moments later as he pushed back with his own tongue.
All the while she kept grinding her hips, pressing hard against his
bulge, pre-cum staining his pants. She held his head tightly, pulling
it against her face, while he gently placed his hands on her waist,
feeling her writhe on his erection. They panted as they gasped for air
every so often during brief releases, only to then frantically consume
each other with renewed vigour.

“Wait, wait,” said Seung-hee, pushing herself up, barely fighting
off the urge to dive into him again.

“Are you OK?” he asked, breathlessly.

Seung-hee gave him a sweet smile.

“I’m fine, I just want to try something,” she explained.

She paused, reconsidering her proposal.

“Better yet, I want to try everything,” she said, in an eager,
husky voice.

“I… I don’t have condoms Seung-hee.”

[M]y(46) weekend.

Friday was nothing special. Just some drinks at the bar.

Saturday, though…I’d been looking forward to Saturday for a long time. Even though it was New Year’s Eve, it also meant sexy time with one of my best partners. She’s 61, a silver-haired beauty who is as smart as a whip, a body that I crave, and a taste for kink that keeps me coming back.

The best part? She’s got a boyfriend, and they both love it when I’m with her. Sometimes we both fill her, sometimes it’s one of us at a time. It’s bliss for me.

So I went to their house with the plans of spending the night. They were going to host some mutual friends for SFW foods and watch a ball drop. I was set to arrive earlier for our fun.

We started in the hot tub, our go to to relax and start foreplay. We’d experimented with sex in the hot tub in the past, but it never really was successful. One such experiment netted me releasing into her highly talented mouth, and as she didn’t swallow, she instead snowballed my seed into his mouth. That was interesting as I basked in my afterglow. Another experiment helped me clear off part of my sexual bucket list: sex in water. Between the obvious lack of lubricant, and the sudden discomfort of ejaculating in water… I’m glad I got it off the list, and regret all at once.

Snowed in with Blue Balls [M28/F32] [Cuckold, breeding, edging, dubcon, surprise anal, DP]

I arrived at the small cabin in the mountains just outside Durango as the snow storm began.

There was already a good amount of snow accumulated, but I knew that, given the forecast and this sudden flurry, I would likely be snowed in for the better part of a week.

I’d gone up to the cabins for a meet-up with a girl I’d been talking to on Tinder, but I found out Saturday night (the night I arrived) that she wasn’t going to get out and brave the storm. Needless to say, I was bummed.

A little bar across the street was the only bit of civilization for miles, and it happened to be open that night, because (as I later found out) the owner lived upstairs and opened it every night, rain or shine, for the guests in the surrounding cabins.

I went in that first night thinking the only patrons would be from the seven small cabins (one of which I was staying in) across the street.

I was wrong.

My first time dominated [MF]

This happened during my time at university. I was 20 at the time, single. I am 6ft, quite handsome, and people say I have a cute smile. I did a lot of sports at uni so I was fairly muscular but still quite slender. I was still quite shy, but the drinking brought out my confidence.

It was a typical night out so far. We pre-drank at home, tool the bus around midnight and found ourselves dancing in the club. Most of us were single and looking. I looked around; my eyes met with a stunning girl across the club. It was the dark eyeliner that caught my attention first. Her eyes were piercing. She was brunette, a little under my height and slim. She wore a black dress which was tight around her body and some heels. We both kept dancing, glancing at each other. Although I was nicely drunk, I still didn’t have the confidence to go up to her. Finally, as I continued to dance with my housemates, I felt a pull on my shirt from behind. I turned around, and there she was. She immediately took a gulp of my drink and then kissed me. Her tongue was wet and forceful. I was putty in her hands. She took my hand and led me out. I was smiling from ear to ear as I looked back to try and say goodbye to my friends. We got a taxi back to hers as her house was still out. My hands were all over her body. She ran her fingers through my hair as I nibbled and kissed her neck to her soft moans.

Meeting Laura: The third time part 2 [FFM]

Part 1 here:

Meeting Laura: The third time part 1 [FFM] from gonewildstories

The next couple hours was much of the same. Each of us taking turns bring the center of attention. I switched back and forth between kissing Laura and sucking on her nipples while hubby licked and sucked her clit. Then he went down on me and focused his attention on my clit while Laura kissed me and pinched my nipples and I ran my hands over her body. We both sucked his cock again, I kissed him while Laura tried to force his cock deep in her mouth and then I did the same while Laura sucked on one of his nipples. Hubby and Laura each sucked on one of my nipples while rubbing my pussy and then Hubby and I did the same to Laura.

Eventually hubby directed us into position to attempt a 3-way 69. Hubby went down on Laura while she fingered me and I sucked his cock, sort of in a triangle arrangement. Unfortunately it looks better in porn than it feels in real life but it was still fun. He tried to get us to reverse the direction (hubby sucking my clit, me fingering Laura, Laura sucking his cock) but it was a bit too awkward so we took a break and Laura broke out a vape to refresh our highs.

The New Year’s Eve Party (Part 2 of 2)…(Christmas Party Swap continued) [M/F 20s-30s, swingers, cuckold, cheating]

“Hey, you sexy motherfuckers!” Aly’s voice rang across the classic lobby of the historic downtown hotel.

It was New Year’s Eve, and the lobby was teeming with men and women dressed to the nines, in tuxes, suits, and classic gowns.

The six of us—My wife and I, along with Ben, Alex, Aly, and Margot—had decided to get together again. (It was the first time we had seen each other since our Christmas party couples swap.)

“Let’s get fucking naked!” Aly announced in the lobby to everyone within earshot. Some couples turned to look at us, more than a little curious, while others ignored us and went about their business.

“Jesus, Aly,” Ben said, trying to gain some semblance of control—Clearly no one had drank as much as Aly at this point, though we had all been pre-gaming for a couple of hours now. “Let’s go up to our room and plan this whole ordeal out.”

We entered Ben and Alex’s room, and we all jumped as a cork popped from a champagne bottle—Aly held the bottle and laughed as champagne flowed over the sides onto the carpet, and the rest of us knew, whether we allowed ourselves to know it fully or not—that the night was going to be one for the books.

Day two, part 2 (M39 F38) (surprise anal)

My face was completely coated in a mix of her juices and my saliva, and I was gasping for breath. Without realizing it she had clamped her thighs on my head and pulled my face hard into her pussy while she came, nearly suffocating me. For some that might be a problem, for me it made my cock throb. I desperately wanted to drive into her, but it wasn’t time yet. I caught my breath and lowered my face back into her pussy. I did my best to clean up the mess that I had just made. Her clit was so sensitive that her body was twitching every time my tongue flicked over her. Luckily for her that wasn’t where my tongue was focused this time. After sucking every drop that I could out of her pussy I allowed my tongue to venture further south onto that delicious patch of skin that separates her holes. My tongue ran circles over her taint and I occasionally pushed my teeth into her skin, applying gentle bites that made her breath catch. I moved my mouth lower, centering my tongue over her asshole and pushing in as deep as I could. My hands were spreading her cheeks so I could push my face deeper into her ass while my tongue was working in and out of her, opening her hole as much as I could. I was using my tongue to push my saliva into her now open asshole ensuring that she was well lubricated. It was time to make things more exciting and it was time for me to get what I had came for. It took me a second to find where I had lost her plug in the sheets. Once I had it I pulled my tongue out of her hole and began pushing her plug in. I expected her to pull away from the shock of the size but to my surprise she eagerly pushed into the plug allowing me to fill her quickly. I wiped the juices off of my face and quickly made my way up her body covering her mouth with my kisses. My cock had instinctually lined itself up with her pussy and without warning I drove myself into her in one stroke. She moaned into my mouth with the sudden fullness. I didn’t linger to allow her to enjoy my cock, I pulled out to my head and immediately thrust back into her. I set an aggressive pace, fucking her hard for my pleasure. I fucked her right to edge of her third orgasm and just before she came I stopped with my cock buried in her. She was whimpering, asking me why I stopped and begging me to keep going.

(F4M) Don’t Stop (Cumming for Me) (20s-?) (Mentions of Alcohol)(Switch)(Prostate Play)(Milking)(Forced Orgasm)(Teasing)(Aftercare)(Spanking)(Dirty Talk)

I had spent most of the day dicking around at work and was more than ready for round whatever since all I was allowed to do was edge all week. I had stopped at the store to pick up some wine before making my way back to the hotel. Walking through the liquor section of my local grocery store I found a bottle of wine called “Pink Kitty” and felt it was the most appropriate purchase. The lobby was crowded with wedding guests which caused my irritability to spike. I grabbed my room keys from the front desk and made my way up to the room as quickly as possible.

I laid out the toys I had brought and stripped down to shower. The water pressure and temperature were perfect, especially after a long day at work. God, I was so stiff, I let the warm water beat down on my body as I lathered shampoo into my hair fantasizing about what was to come. My muscles started to decompress and I let the irritation wash off of me. I was always so fucking turned on and horny anymore. All I wanted at any point in time was to have his cock in one of my holes. Fuck, my pussy was soaked at this point. I finished washing and shaving and stepped out.

(F4M) Beg Me to Let You Cum (20s-?) (Switch)(Prostate Play)(Milking)(Edging)(Teasing)(Post Orgasm Torture)(Good Boy)(Aftercare)

I had messaged you early this morning. When I hadn’t heard back from you by 1pm, I knew your day at work had turned to shit. You finally text me at 4pm and told me that you need to just not think for a few hours. I tell you to come over and I’ll take your mind off of it.

You arrive promptly at 6:00pm and let yourself into my apartment as directed. I’m sitting on the couch waiting for you to turn the corner of the room. As you walk in and drop your bag at the edge of the room, I cross my legs making sure that my skirt rides up slightly.

“Long day, baby?” I state.

I know you had a long day, hell, I know it was a long week. You had texted me each day with something worse than the last and I knew you needed a release. You nod in response, not yet opening your mouth to verbally respond to me. You stand there and ogle my legs, and I know your mouth is watering. I stand and slowly walk over to you. I can feel your eyes burning into the sheer shirt I’m wearing.