How to write Erotica?

Can I write Erotica? And How?

This was posted in a writing group, but someone got triggered and got deleted with no reason.

I don’t understand reddit, therefore I have a hard time reading rules and small things. If this post is not fit for this group, please teach me where to post it or if I have to edit it, please tell me before it’s deleted.

*Original post*

I was 12 years old when I moved to the U.S.
The language sounded beautifully, and the words looked luxurious. As if it was a tongue that only the rich could speak.

I bought an English-Spanish dictionary and began to write my first book. Kissing scenes were too much for my young heart, and holding hands was enough to make me blush.
My book was 40k words, but now that I think about it… it wasn’t that good.

I didn’t learn all the rules of grammar, where to put commas, and how to make a good use of a thesaurus. It’s funny how I tried to describe a simple scene while using lots of “high-class,” words. Until this day, as a 22 year old, English is a big struggle, but my passion for writing is even bigger. I know, I’m stubborn.

The Haunting of Palmer Mansion Chapter 2 [MF] [inc] [cheat] [oral]

*All characters in sexual situations are 18 years or older. Enjoy.*

The bus dropped off the twins at the end of their long driveway. They talked about classes and friends as they walked back to their new house. Once home, Brittney went off to the main living room to do some homework. There was a couch in there and Brittney liked to imagine a roaring fire in the fireplace, which was a cozy thought. Daniel said goodbye to his sister and hunted for his parents. This proved difficult as the mansion was quite expansive.

Eventually he found them in the west tower room, creating their punch list.

“Floorboards are loose here.” George stroked his graying, blond beard as he surveyed the enormous, circular room. The windows looked out in all directions. He could see the east tower. It looked like Brittney was home as he caught a glimpse of a woman’s shape moving about her room. “Some of the sills and jambs show rot. Not too bad.”

“Got it.” Julie scribbled down on her pad of paper. “What about electrical?”

Cucked by mistress with BBC [femdom] [interracial] [bi] [mmf] [fdom] [cuck]

Billy knew his relationship was on rocky ground and he felt bad because he felt his lack or performing in the bedroom may be contributing to it. He was very open to licking pussy and exploring in certain ways but it wasn’t enough for Nicole. Nicole was a sexy, almost 30 woman who had such a big ass that Billy couldn’t even take her doggystyle because his 6 inches weren’t enough. She was confident, flirty, and everything Billy wanted but she wanted to explore in ways she had kept to herself wanting to ease Billy into it. Lately, she was struggling with the fact everytime her and Billy had sex missionary style he just couldn’t go deep enough to give her the amazing orgasm she had experienced with other men before; with black men! She wanted to be with this nice, attractive, successful white guy but she just wasn’t being fulfilled. So, she came up with a plan.

Billy: So what do you want to do this upcoming weekend since we’ve got the holiday and have couple extra days to ourselves?

Nicole: I was actually thinking we could do something spontaneous.

Billy: Like what? This town is so boring.

Sunday morning watching porn and getting ass [f]ucked

We always stay in bed till late on weekends, we wake up fairly early, start playing with each-other, suck-lick-fuck and cum our brains out and sleep till after lunch hour. This weekend was no exception.

We woke up at around 10am last sunday and I was feeling kinda frisky. I approached and kissed him and reached his already hard dick. I guess he knew I wanted to have some fun, so he asked if we should watch some porn together to which I said yes xD

We looked up something we both liked (usually girls being degraded and used as fuckdolls) and started watching this girl in ponytails being facefucked by some “random” dude. He started asking me if I was enjoying watching this girl being used while playing with my tits, and I was loving it, my nipples were so hard. Seeing this girl being degraded, her mouth being used as a fuckhole, tears and her mascara running down her face while she could hardly breathe was getting me so turned on. I just wanted my bf to use me as such a slut, I wanted to please him make him cum, I wanted him fuck me and cum inside me without caring about me.

[M]y wife’s [f]riend was in town

This just happened last week and my apologies in advance for any typos or grammar I punched this out on my phone and had to retype the second half :-/

My [38M] wife [40F] has a chronic illness and at times is bed ridden and requires additional care. We have 3 small children so I’m often my wife’s caregiver and a single parent. We live a flight away from my wife’s childhood best friend so we only see her once a year at best. Let’s call her Sharon. Sharon is like a second mom to the kids and has known me since I was 18. We are very close and when she heard my wife was in bed again she put her life on hold and booked a ticket on a flight to stay with us for a month. I’m pretty capable of taking care of the family but I certainly wasn’t going to turn down help with a big deadline for work on the horizon.

My [F]irst kinda threesome part 1

So a fair few years ago me and two girlfriends were chilling after college (around 16 yrs old) we’d found one of their dads porno collection and we sat on the bed looking through at all the the beautiful women and their big tits and reading all the stories. We were all straight so I wasn’t expecting to feel myself getting more and more turned on and could feel my pussy getting wet but not being able to do anything. I could hear one of the other girls let’s call her Lyn breathing getting quicker and shallow. I looked at her as she was biting her lip. My other friend Maura and I looked at each other and found ourselves smiling shyly at each other.
I tentatively moved closer to Maura and put my hand on her leg, she moved it up to her tit which was covered by a bra and t-shirt. Lyn was just looking at us both.
Maura’s breast felt so squishy under my slightly trembling hand. She had to be a 38 C while I had small 32 A cups at the time. I moved my second hand up to feel her other tit. Not knowing what to do but just wanting to squeeze them. I felt her put her hands on my little bee stings too. Her hands felt so good on me. Lyn joined in so we had a hand on each other boobs just squeezing and smiling at each other. We heard the front door open and suddenly we all went back to our spot on the bed and carried on watching what we was on tv at the time.

So squirting is a real thing?[MF]

So if your read my last story you know I was a virgin who hooked up with a Redditor recently. We made plans to met again and this is what happened.

So a day after our initial hookup, Sarah (is what I will call her) texts me saying she has the following day off. She follows this with she can get a room and I can meet her after work. I say yes and we hammer out some details.

The next day I wake up to a video she sent me of her playing with her tits. Oh my God, This woman is driving me crazy and it’s before 7am. I quickly jerk off and get ready for work. All day long I can’t keep my mind on work. Having to hide my boner as I walk around the office. Watching the clock and counting down the minutes. An hour before quiting time I get a text from her, saying she has checked into a hotel a quarter mile from me and the room number. Holy shit this has got to be the longest hour ever.

Cougar Bang [lengthy; old/young; college; twisted]

By JK Jones

My first year at State College I lived in the study dorm, where I became best friends with Frank, a freshman who actually grew up here in Riverville. That was convenient because rather than use the small and almost useless vendor washer and driers in the dorm basement, we both packed our dirty laundry into duffle bags, and every two weeks I was able to hang out at his house while I washed and dried.

I tried to keep my eyes off of Jocelyn, Frank’s mother, during my stay there, because to otherwise caused me to develop an instant hard on. She was a tall, curvy, brown-haired woman with lovely tan legs, a firm-looking ass that jiggled in the shorts she usually wore, and really large, pendulous breasts with nipples that destroyed any bra that tried to hold them down. She was pretty in an older woman kind of way, with a wide brow, big blue eyes, always made up with eye shadow and mascara, a pert little nose, and a wide smile, which, along with her knowing wink, was about all I ever saw coming from her, emotion-wise.

[MF] Unexpected holiday fun with an inexperienced local girl (long)

This happened a few years back now and it happened so quickly that even remembering it back is a little bit of a blur but I’ll try and recount what I can of it because it was pretty great. It’s a bit long so I’ll break it up into background and action.

 

—Background—-

 

I was on holiday over in Malaysia – some of my family moved over there for work and invited me over after they had been there for about a year. It’s not really a place I ever had considered visiting but with free accommodation and everything being cheap there I figured why not head over for a week or so.