*Author’s note: This is my first attempt at writing something like this, and I’m not very experienced at writing in general, but this came to my mind this morning and I had to write it down during my breaks at work and during my lunch hour. I gave it a quick pass for spelling and grammar after work but I’m sure I missed plenty. I’m also aware that I can’t write dialogue to save my life, any critiques would be welcome. All of that aside I hope at least someone enjoys what I’ve written even half as much as I enjoyed writing it.*
“You look absolutely ravishing” I said in a hoarse whisper barely resisting the urge to tear that dress from her body and take her right now as I ran my hands down from her shoulders to her hips, over her skin-tight ruby red-dress. I watched as her emerald orbs flicked down my body as I stood before her in the suit I wore to our anniversary dinner.
“Not nearly as good as you look in that suit” she replied.