The Critic (M32, F32, noncon, hypno, revenge, food – 4,975 words)

**THE CRITIC**

Story by All These Roadworks (2022).

*For avoidance of doubt, all characters in this story are aged 21 and over.*

Top chef Jamal takes cruel hypnotic revenge on the woman whose review ruined his restaurant.

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Jamal couldn’t believe it when he saw the booking – Kate Lendle, the food critic for the Central Gazette. The evil white bitch had ruined his last restaurant with a scathing review – she had claimed it was because the food was cold and tasteless, but he knew his food was impeccable, and he suspected her real problem had been that he was black.

His restaurant had gone bankrupt and he’d worked years to pay off his debts and start over – and now she was daring to turn up to his new place, “The Golden”, and do it again?

But luckily Jamal had learned a few things in the years in between – spent some time studying – and he had a little something he was eager to try.

“[STORY REQUEST] [F/54] [Humiliation] [Teasing] [Body-mind control] [E.U.F: Embarrassed Underwear Female] [Huge Butt] [Fleeting Dignity and modesty] [Amateur Twerk] [Struggling resistance]”

“Not only must she fight for self-control and modesty, but she must prove to the world that she is to be taken seriously… all while cursed with a very…uh.. unfortunate spell.”

[WP] A witch curses disobedient Illuminati member and Canada Deputy Prime Minister, Chrystia Freeland [F/54], to twerk while giving a major speech before a live press. She discovers this and realizes there’s still a lot to cover in her speech, however, notices her jiggling machine of a big booty and how close it’s about to spill out of her very tight, short dress she keeps peeling down.

Reference: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pA4vdqG8mzs](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pA4vdqG8mzs)

Chrystia freeland’s thickness: ([https://i.redd.it/65sdrnd1pad51.png](https://i.redd.it/65sdrnd1pad51.png))

([https://preview.redd.it/gqhtk2z3mey41.jpg?auto=webp&s=c5cf8d8c84380fa58bb714810352c139a164afa7](https://preview.redd.it/gqhtk2z3mey41.jpg?auto=webp&s=c5cf8d8c84380fa58bb714810352c139a164afa7))

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Vampire Omicron: Chapter 6 – New Life [M29/F19/F21][Mdom][rape][nc][humil][Sadism][feet][blood][death][violence][harem] READ DISCLAIMERS

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*New strain of COVID, I’m now a disgusting perverted vampire. Each chapter is like a ‘stealth mission’, with lots of slow build-up and pervy creeping around. The protagonist’s mission is always to rape and abduct his victims, adding to his harem of vampires. Then occasional chapters show his sexual family lifestyle with his mind-controlled free-use slaves. Then right back to another stealth mission.*

*In this one, I creep around a farm at night with my daughter at my side, in search of my pregnant cousin among a church-group campfire. We kill off young adult Baptists one by one, then enjoy one of them. Kind of like a teen slasher movie, ending with a brutal rape scene.*

DISCLAIMERS

-I’m just trying to be helpful with these disclaimers. I don’t want to spring things on anyone!

My black celebrity mistress [femdom] [interracial] [humiliation] [M24/F30]

I work at a bar in a studio lot in LA, I started working there because I thought I might have a shot at landing a job as a sound engineer. You know, drop my card here offer some sound samples there but my atrocious communication skills left me where I started. I wasn’t so bad like I would get fired because I didn’t make the guests feel comfortable, that part I perfected; the good smiles, replying to flirty comments only when the clients feel like it. After all Hollywood is a game of pretend, and I didn’t mind playing.

At our bar there was a particular client that seemed to have her eyes on me. I would serve her drinks and she will keep following me with her eyes as I do my job. She was a black lady who seemed familiar. I don’t remember where I saw her before, but then again, this is Hollywood it is not weird that I recognize her face. I never look her in the eyes except when I serve her order, I leave closing the tab to my friend Jermy. He is good with coaxing the more generous clients to increase the tip. But one night after she was done drinking with coworkers, she called at me, ignoring Jermy who was in front of her.

Daddy’s GOING to fuck your friend. [cuckquean][humiliation][Cheating][MFF][watching][DDLG]

We finally get back to your place after being out all day and you having caught us multiple times looking each other up and down. We head back to your room and sit down while you decide to go the bathroom for a bit. As soon as you shut the door we look at each other and I pick her up and hold her up while we start making out.

My hands under her ass and squeezing to support her. I waste no time pressing her against the wall so I can stick my hand down her panties and finger her pussy. Its not longer before we’ve gotten each other naked and I’m holding her against your wall, her legs wrapped around my waist.

Thrusting hard into her little snatch, pounding her into your wall. By this time you’ve heard the banging and come out to see what the noise is only to find Daddy fucking your friend into your wall. “Oh hey Babygirl, I hope you don’t mind I just had to take your little friend for a spin here. She’s a real nasty, feisty little thing. She even came up with a game for us to play. Well, us as in me and her, we play. You watch.”

My girlfriend (21) [F] has turned me (19) [F] Into her slave

We recently just moved into house together about a week ago and she’s taken this opportunity to have complete control over me now that we don’t live with our parents. I also will say I have a massive humiliation kink, and she’s a respectful person, if I didn’t like any of this she would stop immediately.

For instance, we have a door mat right inside our door, and I’m not allowed to step off of it until she comes over and undresses me (I’m not allowed to take my own clothes off unless she’s not home.) I also am not allowed to use the bathroom without asking her first. And I’m not allowed to close the bathroom door while I’m in it. I am not allowed to shower, she bathes me. And obviously, I am not allowed to even touch my boobs or pussy without asking, and even if I did ask she most likely would say no. She says they’re hers not mine.

In the Closet, Chapter 2 [mm] [Incest] [Brother/Brother] [Gay] [Sissification] [Humiliation]

[Chapter 1](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/ybm210/in_the_closet_chapter_1_mm_incest_brotherbrother/)

***ZACH***

“Your plans suck,” I snapped as soon as the door was open. “I almost got fucked.”

“Yeah, you said that over text. But what happened?” Ellie let me in and followed me eagerly as I stormed to her room. I threw myself on her beanbag and sighed heavily, running a hand through my walnut brown hair. She assumed her usual spot on her bed, patting the mattress excitedly. “C’mon, spill.”

I double checked that her door was closed before taking a breath and glaring at her. “I’m serious. He almost stuck his dick in me.”

Her eyes widened in surprise. “Wait, how did that happen? That wasn’t part of the plan.”

“Yeah, no shit, ‘cause nothing ever goes according to plan,” I muttered. “He came in drunk and I freaked. I just wanted to call off the whole thing.”

Thoughts of last night came flooding back, unwelcome and guilty thoughts. There was a wadded-up, cum-stained tissue in my trash that was a direct result of the events that had transpired. And I didn’t wanna think about it.

“…And?” Ellie prompted. Jesus, I was daydreaming about him.

Solace in Valencia Pt2: Stones and Castles of Glass

I found that transparency is a concept of imagery and radical belief, but it’s a double pane we’re looking through…I see you exist, while staring back at the reflection of me. The world captured between us is of poise and grace collected and framed to scale with blissful clarity. Upon your arrival here, meeting your gaze, I hope you begin to take in the depth and weight of what’s being given?

“I have one rule,” I say…

*“We don’t throw stones while surrounded by glass—unless you’re willing to own the mess you make.”*

Walking around you letting my footsteps echo in the room…examining your posture and eagerness, I continue “In your time here, we stand to emulate this concept of safe and secure, confiding in our own comfort. Eventually you’re going to realize it’s a prison that has been created. So what have you?! Should we shatter the walls we use to protect ourselves?! Or break the very promises that lay the foundations of our demise little one?”

*I pause…thinking carefully how to approach this. Using a deep tone and whispering…while keeping eye contact.*

Tourist Girl (part 2) [F30 M29] [BBW] [Chubby] [Dubious consent] [Humiliation] [Roommates] [Anal] [Ass-to-mouth]

I woke up to the most pleasant sounds: that of a woman being fucked. That, I thought, had to be Jason, but the girl does not sound familiar, must be somebody new. I lay there for a while, entertaining a thought of going and joining them, and then decided against it. When I am fucking a new girl, I want her to be all mine. I don’t mind getting sloppy seconds, but there’s time for threesomes and gang bangs, and there’s time for good old-fashioned fucking.

My name is Hassan Mustafa. I was born and raised in Philadelphia, PA, but thanks to a Turkish father and a Greek mom, I look like I just stepped out of Arabian Nights, where I was one of the Forty Thieves. Some girls love it, some get scared. I like the ones that do both, and many of Jason’s freshly fucked ladies fit the bill. We are friends and roommates, and we like to share – I bring in the young party girls and an occasional adventurous housewife, and he gets us naïve out of town visitors and shy but horny girls from the Internet.

[FMF] All the depraved ways in which I have degraded myself for men

I have voluptuous tits, a juicy ass and impressive flexibility thanks to years of yoga. But I’m nothing special: I’m 30 years old, bespectacled and rather plain looking with slightly chubby curves. Luckily I’m utterly submissive and completely lacking in self respect so I bring a lot extra to the table in order to keep the alpha male men I crave interested in me.

When I was 21, I was infatuated with Josh, a senior at university. He was on the basketball team and infamous for his anal fetish and fratboy debauchery. He had a thing for skinny blondes and as I’m neither skinny nor blonde, he ignored me. One drunken night, I confessed that I had fantasised about him taking my anal virginity and training my tight little asshole. He agreed, if I would be his cleaner in exchange.

So I cleaned his room in nothing but a Victoria Secret thong and a bejewelled butt plug in order to earn the privilege of his cock. After I was done each day, he’d have his way with my ass. He started slow with some fingering and built his way up over the semester to rough sessions of anal fucking, hair pulling and name calling. I would be a raw, quivering, sobbing, utterly satiated mess by the time he had finished.