[f] [First Person] A [succubus] begins to come of age. (This is a beginning to a work in progress, feedback welcome) [No sex yet] [Draft] [Incomplete]

This is my first story of this sort, and one of my first fiction works, for that matter. I haven’t gotten far into it, and was looking for some critique on what I’ve written so far. What I’ve written at this point is ecchi at best, and I promise as it goes on, it’s gonna get a lot more dirty.

This is meant as a setup to the story, before anything really happens. I’d like some feedback, and suggestions regarding my style, voice, etc.

There are definitely some spots I already cringe at while reading, but I’d like to hear from you.

Nothing Like A BJ From [M]y BBW Girl[f]riend

Yesterday, I awoke to my fat girlfriend gazing into my eyes and stroking my stiff 8” cock. She said she was hungry to have something in her mouth, so I pushed her head south and she immediately took my cock deep between her plump lips. As she licked and gagged on my cock, I appreciatively observed her gigantic, blubbery ass and round DD tits. I slapped her huge ass and it jiggled massively under the impact.

After sucking me off, she straddled me, and I shifted under her enormously heavy body and fat gut, which hung over her pussy and rested on my chest. She shoved my big cock into her dripping pussy and began riding away. She soon grew exhausted, as she is a chubby, out-of-shape porker, so I flipped her over and fucked her until we both came hard.

After showering, she waddled to the kitchen and stuffed a huge meal down her fat face. I noticed how quickly she had been gaining weight and the stretchmarks on her flabby hips and blinking gut. A nice fat, horny piggy.

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[M]y [F]first cougar

Have you ever hooked up with someone and you know that no matter what you do, you wont be able to forget it? That’s what happened to me….

I had just turned 21 and I went to Las Vegas for my 21st birthday. I loved gambling. Vegas the new video game arcade for me. My family and I decided to stay at Silverton. We were there for 3 nights. Little did I know, those 3 nights would change me forever.

I was a newly 21 year old man who had just got my heart broken by my ex girlfriend of 4 years. She had cheated on me with a guy she was seeing at work. This trip was more than a birthday trip for me. I needed this. I needed to go out and let loose. I was there to gamble, party and drink.

I was on multiple dating apps. I didnt know anyone in Vegas and I was only there for a limited time. A few hours after landing i was matched up with her on a dating app.I remember thinking that she might be a little older for my taste. In a matter of minutes she had messaged me. We talked for the first night and we seemed to connect. Little by little I started to get more comfortable and more confident. I knew she wanted me and she definitely knew that I wanted her.

The [M]ilf across the street made her [F]antasy a reality

It was my dad’s birthday about a month ago and I went around to his place for dinner that weekend. I moved out only last year so it was the first time back at my childhood home in like 6 months. I got there in the early afternoon to hang with my brother and have a drink or too before dinner. As I pulled up to the house I saw the family across the street leaving to go out. I didn’t really know them well but would always wave or say hi when we crossed paths. They were usually a family that would always be together but this time I noticed that the husband wasn’t around, just the wife and her 3 kids. Unusually, the wife came over to chat and I told her about where I had moved to amongst other things. Seeing as her husband wasn’t around I asked what he’s up to and she informed me that they actually divorced last year. I offered my condolences but she said it was for the best as they were drifting apart even before they moved here. They pretty much stayed together this long just for the kids. Eventually she had to leave so we said goodbye and went our separate ways.

Doctor Natalie [doctor][orgasm][helplessness]

“Please come in,” I heard in response to my gentle knocking on the door.

I hesitantly reached for the handle, took and deep breath and entered the room. I saw doctor Natalie. My attention was immediately drawn to her beautiful and professional look. She was a young, slender woman with average sized boobs, sharp facial features and full pink lips.

“Please take a seat,” she told me pointing to the chair in front of her.

I walked to her and sat on the chair.

“What seems to be the problem?” She asked.

“I recently felt something on my testicle. Something like a lump and I don’t think it was there before,” I replied describing why I came here.

I left out a few details, like the fact that I noticed the lump when I was masturbating. I didn’t think it was important and mentioning it to the doctor would only make me more stressed.

“I understand. Did that ever happen before?” She asked.

“No,” I replied truthfully.

“Any genetic diseases in the family?” She added.

“No,” I said once again.

The Christian Girlfriend Part 3 [MFF]

It had been a few months since Mary and I started having sex, she was open to trying new things but she also exactly knew what she liked. If she tried it and did not enjoy it we were never doing it again. Tonight was date night and we decided to go to our usual bar. Our relationship was still a secret, so we tried to avoid places we knew our family and friends frequented.

We were sitting in a booth enjoying some food, drinks and conversation. The bar was large, had live music and was dimly lit. The ambiance and the company was amazing. Since it was a Tuesday it wasn’t as packed and the music was also more mellow.

Mary sipped on her drink and nonchalantly asked, “Where to tonight?”

Since we couldn’t meet at each other’s homes we’d find isolated places to make out or just outright have sex. My favorite one so far had been the detached garage at her place, I snuck in at two in the morning and she bought pillows and blankets to lay on the cold floor. We fucked right behind her dads vintage Porsche. Hers was in a classroom at her college after hours. We role played the teacher student act there and had to run towards the end when a security guard came by. That chase left us so excited we fucked again in my car after we escaped. The excitement of being caught really elevated the experience.

[M]y GF, the horniest [f]atty

The first time I fucked my obese girlfriend, I was really surprised at how eager she was to strip off her clothes and take my cock. She straddled me and I loved the feeling of her giant jiggling ass on me. She was very heavy, which I expected from her, seeing as how she’d be one

After some hard fucking, she got a large tub of ice cream from her freezer and stuffed her big bloated belly to the max. I gave her a belly massage as she did this, then began groping her swollen DD tits. We fucked again soon after, and she squealed and moaned as I plowed into her bbw pussy.

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Another story with my girlfriend’s younger sister [MF]

Several of my past stories have involved some of the fun times I have gotten into with my lifelong friend and then girlfriend Liz. I wanted to follow-up one of the prior stories I wrote that ended up with Liz and I having sex while Leah was laying in bed in the same room as us. As you may recall, the morning after, Liz gave me a blowjob in bed while Leah slept in a bed right next to us. Of course, nothing happened between Leah and I and really nothing was mentioned amongst the three of us about that night (or morning after). Eventually, Liz had to move away for an amazing job offer, although we remain close friends and still have fun together when she comes back to visit home.

Leah went off to college the following fall at a nearby university. As I mentioned in my last story, Leah could have somewhat of a bitchy attitude, something that worked out for her in the popular crowd in high school, but then caused some issues making friends when she first got to school. Right before the holiday break, Leah was going to a holiday formal with a guy she had recently met. Around midnight that night, I received a call from Liz. Leah had called her in tears – apparently she went to an after party with her date and he ended up bailing on her. Knowing I lived only about 10-15 minutes from where the after party was, Liz asked if I could go pick her up and bring her back to her dorm.

Outdoor fucking stories with my ex [MF]

These are the last really good stories that I have with my ex, Erin. They’re somewhat short so I figured I’d post all of them at once.

Like I’ve mentioned previously, my ex Erin was a bit of an exhibitionist. She made out with another girl at a brewery, showed her 34C boobs off to another girl at that same brewery, and would often have me fuck her on the 2nd floor balcony of my apartment at night.

Erin loved wearing sundresses during the summer in Atlanta. Especially a cute yellow one with spaghetti straps and a hemline that ended about halfway up her thighs. It was thin, and she hated underwear lines showing, so she never wore any with her sundresses. Thanks to her thick ass, this particular dress would ride up enough to show off her shaved pussy any time she bent over. We were out for a walk in a park one spring afternoon and realized that we were alone on the trail for a minute, so she lifted the back of he dress up, used a tree for support as she bent over, and pounded herself on my cock fast and hard until I told her I was going to cum. She knelt down, sucked all of the cum out of my dick, and we both got covered up not even 30 seconds before other people showed up on the trail.

The College After Party [MF]

This story is not fully true but is based off a real experience. I would describe it as a fantasy based on what could have happened. Names have of course been changed. This is one of my first stories, so I hope you like it.

My college girlfriend Lisa (now wife) was a performer in a small college play. She was beautiful. Five foot nine. Long dark hair. Gorgeous brown eyes. Legs to die for. And large, perky breasts. Her performance in the play was excellent.

But this story isn’t about her.

After the last performance, we all went back to one of the common rooms of the dorms. This dorm was older, and slightly off campus and had a bit of a party atmosphere. Everyone involved with the play was there, as well as their friends. It didn’t take long before everyone was drunk, my girlfriend and I included, and soon everyone was playing the college favorite Never Have I Ever.