Some Help Please!!!

So I have recently started writing stories in Fanfiction.Can someone please give me some advise to improve it?

**Fandom** – Avengers

**Rating** – M

**Title** – Spiderman In The End

**Genre** – Romance/Adventure

**Tags** – Lemons/Incest

**Notes** – I am new to writing and would welcome any advise, criticism and counsel about this story.

**Excerpt** –

Whose lips touched whose first? It wasn’t what either of them intended when going in, but *passion* was running wild.

Both were under so much stress; they could not fight what was transpiring between them.

Peter’s sensible side screamed at him to stop this before he did something that he – and no doubt, Aunt May – would regret in just a few moments. That part of him needed to shut up. He needed this, if only to forget his worries and reveal how deeply he felt for his beautiful aunt.

Normally the voice of reason, she now was giving into pure lust. She was Peter’s aunt as his mom’s sister; the same blood ran through both of their veins, yet she did not attempt to stop this. She had not felt this way about anyone but Ben Parker; now she was probing her nephew’s lips for access. Such a shy boy; it took quite a bit of insistence before he allowed her to taste the lingering flavour of his after-lunch chocolate snack.

The Reunion! [M]y wi[F]e fucks her ex while I watch!

As this is not a real porn it was hard for my wife to imagine her ex just seeing her and wanting to fuck so we had to do some build up before the actual reunion.  Links to the first two stories below in case you need some back story.  

Back to the story.  We decided that we need her to get into regular conversation and build up to some dirty talk to make this natural so he wasn’t weirded out by a person who hasn’t spoken to him in years other than birthday pleasantries coming in too strong.  So the first step was just to say hello.  Side note we also decided to make these conversations only happen when I’m around so we can both be involved, although I was acting more as a fly on the wall.  The first time she reached out and said hello it took him a day to get back to her, but he did at night so we were already laying in bed.  She asked him if he was coming to the reunion and he said he’s not sure.  They spoke a bit more and she was able to slip in the fact that she is coming with only her girlfriends and that they decided no spouses.  He did agree that spouses would be weird and all of a sudden was a bit more open to the reunion.  While I’m watching them type I’m super nervous and very erect, overall it’s been a weird feeling but exciting non the less and very little if any jealousy.  

Hooking up with My ex girlfriend [MF] part one

For a little back story we had dated for about a year when I was 30. I broke up with her but we stayed friends with benefits and I often got called up for some last night fun.

So I’m at work and my phone starts blowing up with horny messages. I send back a quick reply saying my shift ended in 30 minutes and get back to work. I felt my phone vibrating like crazy and I know she was sending me all kinds of naughty pictures and texts trying to distract me. She has done that before and loves to tease me when I’m unable to respond.

The second I get off shift I check my phone I see a picture of her in a set of blue nylon stockings and matching panties no bra. I was instantly hard and sent that I was heading over. I hoped in my car and raced over. I have a key to her apartment and let myself in. I walked in and headed to the bedroom knowing from the many other times she messaged me begging for my cock that she would be layed out on her bed fingering herself. She made sure that she would be ready for me to fuck without any foreplay needed.

I had sex blindfolded and it was the most sensitive and turned on I have ever been. [MFF]

This week has been one of the best weeks in my entire life and for sure the best week in my adult life. I and my girlfriends are trying to make the best out of this quarantine and trying to experiment and implement what turns us on the most and how to train me into cumming better and making them orgasm better. The latest bout of this experiment has made me feel the best I have ever felt sexually. After being lazy because of the quarantine I go and exercise. After I complete a really long session of cardio I want to have a bath and go to the only bathroom with a tub and to my surprise I find Kylie who had just woken up in the shower. I go into the shower and kiss her on the back. She turns and comes in for a Kiss on the lips. once my lips met with hers I waste no time and hold her by the hips and pull her closer. She reciprocates in kind and touches my penis and strokes it till it gets hard. I press up against her mound and kiss with my tongue in her mouth and slowly lower my right hand to her thighs where I pinch her and then lift up her left leg a tiny bit so her pussy is now a bit slanted and I line up my dick and go for it with her slowly moaning as I go in harder. I start Thrusting upwards and was really aggressive. Just as I was about to come I take my penis out and Kylie jerks me to fruition. I explode into her hand which she then rubs her pussy with. We spend a bit more time in the shower cleaning up and making out. Kylie dries herself off and then me and drags me to her room where she asks me to lie down. Me being the opportunistic guy I do without asking any questions. She then gets out two pairs of her underwear which still smelled like her and were wet and blindfolds me with them and asks me to stay quiet. She tells me that she is going to be back in just a second. After what felt like a really long time I call out for her like a panicked child calling out to his mommy.(Seriously what it reminded me of) The door hinge creaks and so I utter her name until she climbs on top off me while being silent. She turns around while on top of me which made me extra hard. She then proceeds to ride me where a few minutes in the door hinge creaks again to my surprise as I thought my other girlfriend was asleep and she climbs on top of my face with her panties still on. To provide context I was at the edge of the bed at that moment and the smell and weight of her really turned me on more. I start licking her while my other girlfriend who was riding my dick gets up for a second and then comes back and attaches something to my balls which i would later find out to be this : [https://www.nobra.de/produkt/twincharger/?lang=en](https://www.nobra.de/produkt/twincharger/?lang=en) . She than starts riding me while turning up the power on this stimulator. As i get closer to cumming she increases the power it has on my balls and she eventually stops thrusting and starts grinding with my dick fully inside her and this makes me cum. At this point she turns the vibrator to full and pushes it onto my balls harder than before and tremble and shake trying to get it off and my girlfriend on top of my face pushes harder into me and starts moving her underwear to the side and i can finally feel her wet pussy touch my mouth and my nose. The eroticness of the smell and the wetness are indescribable. I orgasm and cum two more times with me in my girlfriend who stops eventually after I start squirming like a girl. I was defeated.

After the days of quarantine. (Part 1)

Its a bit lengthy. Please bear with me. Also my first post so please be gentle.

We are in love with each other, it is 6 months and counting now. Before this Covid
sitatution me and my girlfriend used to meet almost everyday. No one had expected
this. As it was the beginning of our lovy doby phase it was really hard not meeting each
other. We haven’t had sex many times, however the times we have had it, it has always
been especial. I must say it is a very lovely feeling when you have sex with the one you
love. I always feel what it feels to make love.

Coming to the main story.

It had been 2 months and the lockdown finally ended. All this time during the lockdown
we had been telling each other how much we miss each other and also wanted to make
love to each other.

Finally the day came, we decided to meet. We met in our regular place and couldn’t
keep our hands away from each other and couldn’t stop kissing so we decided to take it
to the hotel room. We booked a room and I couldn’t imagine doing all the naughty things
that I had been dreaming of all this time.

The interview process (Asia) [MF]

Full disclosure up front this my interpretation of a story a buddy told me.

Due to my Yellow Fever that I had been unable to satisfy in New York I decided to move to live with my partner in Hong Kong. After a few months there I was getting very used to the expat lifestyle, lots of boozy weekends and and generally getting away with whatever we wanted.

Whilst Hong Kong apartments are very small we had managed to score ourselves a hidden gem. It was a relatively spacious building in an old complex. We had kitted it out as a party pad, lots of space for socialising and having friends over. However, we soon realised that neither of us were tidy.

My girlfriend, who was local, decided we should get a helper to cook for us and tidy around the house. At first I relented, finding the idea of some random snooping around the house as an invasion of my private space as I was enjoying the place and us having the freedom to do as we wished. Anyways she went ahead in trying to hire us a helper.

Counseling (2/2) [Fantasy] [F mast, MF]

In a hotel ballroom, a banner says, “Good Luck Gillian — Happy Retirement After Thirty Years!” Men in suits and women in cocktail dresses gather around the bar, drinking sparkling wine as a DJ spins oldies.

Nicola brings Lisa up to meet Gillian. “Hello, Gillian, congratulations. This is my girlfriend, Lisa. Lisa, this is Gillian.”

Lisa says, “It’s so nice to meet you, Dr. Smith, Nicola tells me you’re a whiz.”

Gillian laughs “Well, maybe. I’ve learned a few tricks. Now it’s time for somebody else to use them. And call me Gillian, please.”

“Are you going to relax, now that you’ve retired?” asks Lisa.

“Well, I’m retired from the Service Office. I’m not old enough to retire for real. I’m starting a small private practice, part-time, helping women in commercial service work through their issues. So, it’s related, but different. And I’m working on my art — I have a show at a gallery in Jenkins next month.”

Nicola asks, “Jenkins? Why Jenk– oh, you’re going to the wedding.”

“Ha. It’s just a coincidence, actually. But in thirty years I’ve never had a client invite me to her wedding, so I thought I’d go, and meet the man who singlehandedly forced a session of the Joint Lords-Representatives Conference on State Service.”

[M]y [F]irst time with Emmy

This took place several years ago after I had turned 21. Names have been changed for obvious reasons. If I make any mistakes I apologize, I’m typing this out on my phone, it’s late, and I’m about 6 deep into a 12 pack… and autocorrect hates me. Plus I was never a stellar writer. If you want to skip the back story find the asterisks.

It was early March, still early enough to get kinda chilly in the evenings even in central Florida. My buddy James decided to have a bonfire on a Friday night and invited our usual friend group over and told us to invite whoever we wanted.

I went over to James’ family farm to help him set up after I got off work. I was setting up bales of straw around the brush pile as he was bringing in more and more brush to burn.

James has a reputation for building huge fires so I left plenty of room between the brush pile and the bales of straw but I wouldn’t be surprised if they ended up on fire by the end of the night.

Why I love eating pussy [m]

gunna try this again, my old post was deleted.

it all started with my first few experiences with pussy. my first gf at the time wouldn’t let me fuck her, which i was okay with… we fooled around a lot which meant a lot of oral play. I’ll never forget her sweet little clit, and perfect little pussy. i would get off as much eating her as i would when she sucked me off. she also had a big fat ass so id beg for her to sit on top of me…the view of her sweet wet pussy lowering onto my face was enough to get me off.

My next girlfriend allowed me to explore every thing i could imagine, we did everything together, she would give me the best blowjobs ive had to this day, and i would eat her wet pussy until she came for me in return.

I learned a lot with her but when we broke up I bounced around with about 10-12 different girls for about 5 years until i found my most recent gf.

Fucking daddy while his girlfriend sleeps [MF]

Fucking daddy while his girlfriend sleeps [MF]

Lisa’s boyfriend kissed her goodbye & told her to have a great time with the girls. She felt guilty, lying to him, but only for a minute and continued packing after he left for work. She had looked out her favourite summer dress and packed all her favourite sexy underwear for a weekend away with Connor. She’d known Connor for a long time, and recently got back in touch with him. One thing led to another, and before they knew it they were discussing sexual fantasies and the spark that had always been there got more intense. They were both in relationships, which just made it all the more exciting.

‘Nearly there!’ Lisa texted excitedly, sitting on the train.
‘I can’t wait to see you.’ Connor replied.
‘What colour did you go for baby girl?’
She felt herself blushing as she read his text and remembered the sexy lacy underwear she was wearing under her dress. She felt so naughty sitting amongst the businessmen & women on their way to work.
‘Your favourite, daddy. Black & lacy. I hope you like it. Are you there yet?’
‘I’m here. See you soon’
The train pulled in & Lisa felt the butterflies in her tummy flutter.