Need a review on my first writing that im doing for my girlfriend.

Context- We’re dancing in prom night

I held her waist tight with my hands and her arms were on my shoulders. The music was loud but I could still hear her nervous heavy breath, or was it mine? Her beautiful brown eyes were locked into mine. As we danced I could feel the tension between us, her eyes would take a break to look at my lips for a second and would shift back up to my eyes. I ran my hands onto her back, going downwards for a second as if to tease her then pulled her closer slowly. She looked surprised. I leaned in but just as I was close enough to smell her lipstick I shifted towards her ear, I whispered “You wanna get out of here?”my heart was racing, unsure of her answer. She took a second as if to think about it then nodded as though in a hurry. She couldn’t wait to be alone with me either.

[MF] My girlfriend gave me the gift of cumslut

We join our lovers mid-coitus.

My stiff cock hovered for a moment, then without a touch let loose a sizable load over her heaving tits. I resisted every urge to stroke myself to earn that extra surge of dopamine as I painted her chest. If this was a “ruined orgasm”, by design to maintain my erection, I couldn’t tell. And unlike other times I’d cum this hard, there was still gas in the tank.

She writhed beneath me, vibrating her clit to her third orgasm of the night. I plunged back into her, each of us erupting in guttural moans as I did. Every twist and squeeze of her voluptuous figure, every scream from her ravenous and filthy mouth kept my cock electric inside her.

“Fuck me with cum all over me,” she demanded as if I weren’t already rutting her. “Make me a fucking cumslut!”

I had eaten her pussy to make her cum the first time, explored her body with my lips while she vibrated her way to the second. It was at that second crest I entered her for a fast fuck before we quickly came together.

(Female Perspective) How I Discovered Cuckolding Turns Me On… (Cheating) (Humiliation)

**Warning:** This story revolves around non-consensual cuckolding, strong humiliation, and cheating. **Do not read this story if you are not into these kinks.**

***Synopsis*:** *Rachel lives with her boyfriend in their new apartment and gets a new roommate, Mike. She’s a strong-minded woman that doesn’t take shit from anyone, until a peculiar incident happens between Mike and her, causing her to discover a new fantasy that quickly gets out of hand…*

***Author’s notes:*** *This story is told from two perspectives, switching back and forth between Rachel’s and her boyfriend’s perspective, starting off with Rachel’s.*

# Chapter 1

My boyfriend and I have been dating for about four years before this all happened. I honestly cannot believe the path I’ve spiralled down the last few weeks but… I want to share my story…

I’ll start from the beginning.

First weekend with my girlfriend [MF]

My relationship with Kate started off as an innocent high school fling that ended up turning into countless adventures. We are now in our early 20s and have enjoyed our ever evolving relationship.

Kate is 5’8 and dirty blonde hair that flows across her freckled white skin. She has blue/green eyes that if you look into long enough, you’ll wonder where you are and how long you have been there. I am 6’1, keep my black hair cut short and have rich caramel toned skin.

During our college years, Kate and I were always being interrupted by someone or something. During one of our first weekends alone, we spent most of the time watching movies, going on drives and fucking each other. One night in particular stands out to me the most above anything else. 

Kate had been teasing me all day, flashing her tits at me on our walk around the town. Casually putting her hand under the blanket as we would watch some terrible movie and play with my dick. She would make my cock throb for her. By the end of the day, my cock was aching to be inside her.

Festival Weekend Part 1 [M/T/F]

**Intro**

My stomach had been fluttering for months now. A girlfriend of mine, Sydney, had told me about this music festival that was very exclusive, not in the snobby kind of way, but you had to know someone involved in order to learn anything about it. It took place out in the woods in the foothills of a large mountain peak that loomed over the whole campground. The scenery was amazing, especially as the sun began to set behind the mountain, casting a shadow over the entire festival. The music was a mixture of electronic DJs on the main stage, lit by one of the most amazing light shows I had seen for such a small stage. Another, small tent was tucked away in the woods, where guests had to remove their shoes at the door and could lounge on pillows spread throughout the area while the DJs played much more relaxed and mellow vibes.

A hot week on a cruise ship [MF]

A few years ago I spent a week on a Mediterranean cruise with my girlfriend. I had given her the trip as a present for her 20th birthday. When the trip finally started, we both had only one thing on our minds: sex, sex and more sex. And we had it. We made it our mission to make love in the most unusual and risky corners of the ship. This is the story of the hottest week of my life. But let’s start with our first location: the bed.

First, something about us. We had been together for about one year at the time and were about to move in together. My girlfriend, let’s call her Luca, was a tall sporty girl with dark curly hair and beautiful brown eyes. Despite her slim figure, she had a nice butt and great B-cup boobs. In short, she was a real eye-catcher and she was aware of that.

After checking in and briefly relaxing in the cabin, we went on a short exploratory tour on deck to check out some “interesting” places. During the tour I could hardly take my eyes off her. Luca wore a loose white summer dress that perfectly contrasted her tanned skin.

[F]un on a webcam chat room.

When I was 18, my boyfriend at the time and I went to the same college.

One day we were hanging out in a lounge area for students on break between classes, in a cubicle-esque corner of the room, and our mutual friend decided to tell us about his experience in a chat room. It’s where he had met his girlfriend and they had a good time there. He showed my boyfriend and I the chat room and told us to try it out and see if we liked it.

We signed in on a joint account, and turned the webcam on publicly so people hanging out in the main chat could watch our cam if they wanted to.

It didn’t take long before we started receiving a bunch of compliments, and it made us smile and feel good and confident. …then they started getting sexual. Complimenting my body, and saying how they were jealous of my boyfriend, and what he should be doing to me.

Amnesia Was The Best Thing To Happen To My GF [?/?/?/?] Part 52-1

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=== ***Chris*** ===

The girls seem to be getting along well. Bella and Alexa have been going to the gym with Roxxy and Alana, and I’m glad that they’re all bonding together. I just want them to be happy, that’s all I want.

Victor has invited me over for lunch, which I gladly accepted. He’s been a good friend and we have a lot in common with one another.

So I walked into the restaurant, a Mediterranean place near the hospital, to see Corey and Victor sitting on a booth table facing me.

“Yo, Chris!” Victor called out as he waved me over, but I’ve already seen them.

I sat across from them, their smiling faces. I’ve met Corey a couple of times before, he was in the party with Alana last year when she got her BSN and at my birthday party. Corey looks a bit younger than us, despite being a year older than I am, while Victor always looked about the same, though he’s cut his hair now.

“What’s up guys,” I asked as soon as my butt hits the seats. The waitress soon followed and I ordered a gyro and water.

[MF] Home for the Holidays: Seeing Her for the First Time in Months

For context, this was years ago with an ex. I told a new friend this story today and she encouraged me to write it up and post it. So, here goes:

My girlfriend at the time lived in another state. I was away for school and we hadn’t seen each other in a few months. She had an extremely high libido, but she never felt very comfortable sending pics or playing on camera. So, coming home for the holidays was a big deal for us. We sexted almost constantly, bombarding each other with messages about how hungry we were for one another and how much we loved each other.

I flew home at the end of the fall semester and she picked me up from the airport. We kissed and said our hellos. I always forgot how wonderful she tasted. These little reminders made me so happy to be with her. She drove us to her apartment just a few minutes away.