Erotic Transformation Fantasy Story

Hi everyone,

Unicorns, magic, transformation, love, character development, body image

I wrote a piece a while ago which is quite fantastical. Erotic, magical body transformation with what I think are interesting characters.

So far no one has read it 😆😔! But I would love some feedback before I write the second story in the series which I’ve had planned for ages.

Is there a subreddit anyone could recommend so I could find people interested in this quite niche story.

Thanks so much for any advice. I’m sure every writer feels like this, but it’s painful that this story is sat there unread! I’m sure someone will enjoy it.

Thanks,
Limi

New Life As A Lewd Futanari Succubus (CH 245-247) [Futanari][Futa/Female][Futa/Futa]

**Synopsis:** An old man dies, torn by regret. Due to his high karma, he has “near-limitless possibilities for reincarnation”. He chooses to reincarnate in a fantasy world as a voluptuous futanari succubus with big tits and an irresistible smile.

Erotic fiction that contains: Futanari/Dickgirls, Genderbending, Futa on Female, BDSM, Nymphos, Masochistic characters, Threesomes, Orgies, Facefuck, Deepthroat, Dom/Sub, Taken by Monsters, Corruption, Game elements, etc.

## 245: A Costly Mistake

“Oooh, what kind of an attack could participants Twenty-five and Twenty-six be preparing?” the announcer’s voice echoed through the arena as a giant black energy vortex grew in power, unleashing dark winds in all directions.

Number Thirty-three lost balance as he was one of the closest to the suddenly appearing dark presence. His gaze inadvertently gravitated toward a much greater power than the fly that he chased. The beastkin realized the error of his way only in time to catch a kunai with the palm of his hand.

“GAARGH!” Number Thirty-three screamed from pain and anger. He knew that this pain was preferable to the alternative of catching the kunai with his face, but his pain and embarrassment were only matched by the rage that he felt for the little fly that dared wound him with such underhanded tactics when it should have already been squashed long ago.

i never believed in mermaids [MF][soft fantasy]

It was a sunny day on sea same as the others. Im tired of this work on my small boat in the middle of nothing, but oh well you have to make money somehow, right?
I shortened my time usually by fishing. I hardly catch anything and if its just something like sardine, nothing interesting.
But that day it was different. I was fishing again, and even though i knew that area was full of sharks, i just had to do something. Maybe i will have luck? Well… i did. After an hour of staring into the mysterious deep of the ocean i caught a little shiny pink fish. “Wow, its beautiful” i said to myself and decided i want to keep it, i had been lonely these days and i would appreciate company. So i put her in glass bowl and fed hear once in while. I was stupid and underestimated how vast was the shark area and i ran out of food. i starved and so did my fish. I thought i will never make it home, but then out of nothing *SPLASH* and my companion was gone. Was it seagull? or did she jumped out? Would she just leave my like that? I leaned over taffrail in hope to see her and there she was, my little shiny pink companion. She held huge fish in her hands and smiled at me. Yeah, she apparently wasnt just a fish. I never believed in mermaids but it seems like one just saved my life. It still feels crazy writing this.
After that even though she said she liked her glass bowl i decided to build her tub on my deck so she would have more space and lets be honest i liked looking at her. Her eyes were like big black pearls, her long hair wavier than the sea and her body… well i understand now why Aphrodite had to be born from sea foam to be so beautiful haha.
We talked a lot till night. She had beautiful voice. We talked for so long that i fell asleep next to her tub.
Something woke me up. Under sky still full of stars, there she was, she pressed her firm chest on my arm a wispered: “you know, youre not the only one lonely here in these waters. I needed friend for soooo long. And you just took care of me and talked to me without wanting anything back from me. But i think i should take care of you now too, can i? So we are even you know?”
I didnt even notice she was already playing with bulge in my pants. I wanted to say something but she silented me with a kiss.  The harder i was the more intense she played with me. It took just few mintues for me to be hard as rock. She just laughed and stuck her hand under my pants. Her hand was cold, but strangely that wasnt even an issue. I couldnt concentrate to anything, i just sat there next to her while gasping for air and trying to form at least simple sentence.  “Do you want more?” She asked. I only found power to nod when i looked into her beutiful eyes. She giggled and threw my into her tub. She almost ripped my clothes. She kissed my neck, then my chest and then she went at it. The tip of my dick was just above the water so she started licking it and playing with it in her mouth but after a few moments she took it deeper in her mouth and even in her throat. You would think that because she did that underwater it was rough but no, she knew exactly what she was doing. I held her hair while she almost sucked my soul out of me. She seemed like she was really enjoying it an so did I. To be honest… it didnt took long till i fill her mouth full with my cum. She didnt even hesitated and swalowed every last drop. But no that wasnt the end, after than she climbed again up on me to kiss me and to insert my dick into her warm almost hot pussy with her hand. She let out a loud moan like she waited for this eternity.  I tried to move my hips but it was clear that to her every small thrust was overpowering. Her body shook from pleasure and at one point i just stopped controling myself. I turned her on back, grabed her waist and started pounding her as fast and hard as i could. She was just in pure pleasure. While she was moaning and tring to grab on to me i let out the last three big rough thrusts and came inside her. I felt how her pussy started to hrob while i was still in her and that she came too. This is of course not everything that happened but i think you get the idea.

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“”Pulling my hand back… Shutting my eyes with every heartbeat that pounded in my pussy. Looking at him, thinking “I have never wanted someone as much as I do now.” The pad of my finger resting right on my clit with the haunting thought of “Do I play or talk to him?”
With my mind made up I started to pull away from my pussy. That little movement, that subliminal tremor made me close my eyes. My hand gripped around my pussy! Wanting to say something, anything before he walked away!
The withering of my body. From my trembling knees to my short breaths I cried out! “Ooooh yesss OooohOooohOoooh OooOoooOoooo yesssssssss!” Feeling my hips thrusting forward, the only strong thing I have done since seeing him. Pressing forward my tits plastered to the glass petition, my arm splitting them in two as I sucked my juices from my fingers.
Watching him as he disappeared into the crowd of shoppers. Finally as I peel my breasts from the glass wall I could feel what he did to me. I could feel the wetness on the material. I could tell that my orgasm had left my panties wet. Staring down at them with the crowd beginning to gather! My hand slipped between the fabric and my skin. The feel of a warm body got my stomach fluttering long before my finger tips neared the split in my skin. Rolling out my hips totally oblivious to the mass of people watching my performance.”

General Arthur’s Conquest – Chapter 7: Seeking Alliance [MF] [MFF] [fantasy] [non-con]

The light from the morning sun was too bright. My head was pounding, almost as if it was beating me up from the inside for having drank so much the night before. My face hurts. Why the fuck is my face hurting? Oh right. The princess kicked me in my face last night. I sat up on the bed, and massaged my temples. And where the fuck are my clothes?

The princess was bent at her waist, rummaging through one of the bundles of clothes she packed the day before. Her torn sleeping gown hung loosely off her shoulders. I pushed myself off the bed and walked towards her, uncertain of my own intentions. Was I angry? Or was I sorry? My mind was hazy because of this fucking drubbing in my head.

She turned around, startled, and leapt to her feet when she saw me standing stark naked next to her. She stepped away from me, her eyes darting between my face and my exposed cock. I took a step towards her, reaching out my hands, unsure of what I actually wanted to say or do. She retreated. I followed her, matching each of her backwards steps with a forward step of mine until she found herself sandwiched between me and the wall behind her back.

General Arthur’s Conquest – Chapter 7: Seeking Alliance [MF] [MFF] [fantasy] [non-con]

[[Chapter 1](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/t7xgir/general_arthurs_conquest_chapter_1_princess/)] [[Chapter 2](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ta86vf/general_arthurs_conquest_chapter_2_the_generals/)] [[Chapter 3](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tce6xs/general_arthurs_conquest_chapter_3_princess/)] [[Chapter 4](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tfiqn5/general_arthurs_conquest_chapter_4_the_generals/)] [[Chapter 5](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tikkao/general_arthurs_conquest_chapter_5_trouble_at_the/)] [[Chapter 6](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tpnk20/general_arthurs_conquest_chapter_6_sir_claytons/)]

The light from the morning sun was too bright. My head was pounding, almost as if it was beating me up from the inside for having drank so much the night before. My face hurts. Why the fuck is my face hurting? Oh right. The princess kicked me in my face last night. I sat up on the bed, and massaged my temples. And where the fuck are my clothes?

The princess was bent at her waist, rummaging through one of the bundles of clothes she packed the day before. Her torn sleeping gown hung loosely off her shoulders. I pushed myself off the bed and walked towards her, uncertain of my own intentions. Was I angry? Or was I sorry? My mind was hazy because of this fucking drubbing in my head.

She turned around, startled, and leapt to her feet when she saw me standing stark naked next to her. She stepped away from me, her eyes darting between my face and my exposed cock. I took a step towards her, reaching out my hands, unsure of what I actually wanted to say or do. She retreated. I followed her, matching each of her backwards steps with a forward step of mine until she found herself sandwiched between me and the wall behind her back.

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“Aahh fuck Mmm.. fuck Mmmm.. yes fuck me” Jade panted as Bree’s tongue flicked her clit. Wrestling Bree’s hair from around her shoulders, pulling her mouth in for the squirting orgasm. “Tonight on Cum Drippers, will Garrett get his cock dipped in Jade’s and Bree’s ass or will they continue to lick each other off find out on Cum Drippers!” Taking in Jade’s entire pussy in a sloppy licking, running her tongue up and down the skin surrounding. Loving the feel of someone pulling on her hair, Bree was just about to have her own orgasm. “Don’t stop Aahh Aahh yesss” grinding her clit against Bree’s tongue. “Aahh my my fuckkk.. I’m.. gonna.. cuuum..” sliding her finger into her own asshole. Jade was in heaven once more, bucking as the next orgasm was just around the corner. Wagging her tail as her tongue was chasing the finger into it’s tight confines. Pulling Bree’s hair back as a kiss came to their lips. Wiggling her butt plug as Jade was licking her own cum from Bree’s lips. “I just love the..” having a orgasm just from the hair pulling. “..the.. the Ohh my fuck” breaking the kiss for her own orgasm. Bree was have the dry humps begging to be set free. “Oh no your my pet tonight” pushing Bree’s head back down between her legs. “Now lick me” Jade thrusting her pussy back in Bree’s mouth. “And don’t forget my asshole” lifting her ass off the bed. “Mmm.. my two lovelies how ever does the sight make me hard” Garrett whispered as he was making his way behind Bree. Swatting her on the ass before jiggling the fox tailed butt plug. Seizing the cuffs that held her arms behind her back. Leaning in to whisper in her delicate ear, “Let’s get rid of your toy so I can pound your ass”. This just gave Bree the pre-orgasm orgasm. Discarding her beloved toy and spitting on her asshole. Rubbing it in with the head of his cock. Her asshole was clinching with every rotation. “Mmm…” as he started to shove his massive cock into her tight hole. Hearing another, this one a males moan and knowing it was Garrett. “Aahh AahhAahh fuck fuck Mmm” imagining that his tongue was forcing it’s way to her darker side. Rocking her hips as the orgasm was building. Slapping her own pussy and pinching her clit, at the same time clamping down on Bree’s head. Forcing her tongue further into her deepest fantasy. Jade was having the biggest orgasm to date at least with her lesbian counterpart. “AahhAahh AahhAahh..” taking a ragged breath. “.. AahhAahh ye… y… yesss…” “Will this love triangle last or will their be another.. find out tomorrow on Cum Drippers, and now a word from our sponsors..”

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“Cum Drippers.. what will happen when these three achieve the ultimate daisy chain orgasm find out on Cum Drippers..” Chastisy was trying to put off one of the biggest orgasms to ever grace her pussy. Not being able to control her own reaction was devastating butt ever since Tyra had cum on to her. Licked her way into Chastisy’s fantasy’s Hunter and his cock have been a distance blip on her radar. “Stop… stop please pl… Aaaah.. I don’t what to.. … … Cum, Oh shit.. Ohh shit I’m, I’m Ohhh fuckkk yesss I’m cum…” with Tyra’s tongue plunging so deep into her ass, her fingers caressing g-spots that Chastisy didn’t even know existed. Fighting it back, her own tongue lashing out at this new meat, this perfect round steak laying right in front of her. Circling her little clit with the inexperienced tongue of a new lesbian, herself. Knowing what she likes was the first trial, the second was to show her new female lover how much she liked it. “Aaaah Aaaah Mmmm” vibrated Chastisy’s tongue. Letting her tongue slip down into the creamy depths. Making her tongue go ridged as the pussy parted it’s lips for the intruding tongue. “Ooo my..” Bree’s hips convulsing with every little centimeter that it slipped further in. “Ooo my goddess Ooo” not even sure if her thoughts was bleeding out. “You know what would make me..” getting the surprise of her life. Chastisy’s tongue roamed from the pussy. Licking every piece of skin that it glided over. Pushing her leg up till she took ahold of it, exposing her bald pussy and more importantly the one thing that Chastisy was after her asshole. Reading everything that was going on with her body and taking her rightful place as this cougar pet. Rocking on her side, the orgasm was getting to hard to hold in. Pushing her tongue even deeper into Bree’s tight asshole. Feeling her spasm, feeling her pussy as it butterflied open as the juice cum started to flow. Thrusting her ass down in Tyra’s tongue, Chastisy was starting to cum, cum like never before. Starting small, then and only then exploding all over Tyra’s face. Her pet was struggling to keep the pressure up in Tyra’s forbidden pleasure. “Ooo Ooo fuckkk…” came out of Bree’s mouth as she exploded all over the greedy tongue of Chastisy. Butt let’s not forget the instigator Tyra. With a little shutter she grabbed the new meats hair, pulling her into the forbidden pleasure zone, thrusting her tongue so deep into her that the cum just ran out. Splattering all over the new meats tits and throat. Untangling herself from the two, still having ahold of Bree’s hair. Reaching forward and grabbing Chastisy’s hair as well. “You have a new pet I see” kissing Bree while licking the cum from her face. “How did she taste” Tyra asked Chastisy. Licking her tits on the way up to her mouth.

My first threesome! [MFF] (Declan & Charlotte: New Horizons)

“What about Charlotte (18F)?” Declan (26M) asked, raising an eyebrow.

Charlotte. Hazel eyes with a pixie cut, she was tall and willowy- and absolutely tempting.

“Charlotte it is,” I grinned.

Declan and I (19F) had been having a casual sexual relationship whenever he flew in to my city – he was a nomad at heart and rarely around, and we always strived to make the most of his visits.

I was in uni and knew lots of young women on the cusp of their sexual exploration journeys, but the potentiality of having *Charlotte* so intimately excited me. She was always so calm and collected- I wanted to see her placid face scrunched up in the throes of intense pleasure and covered in cum.

I’ll try to recall the experience the best I can- although it was a while ago, I have replayed that night in my head many times.

I don’t remember how I approached Charlotte about it, just the excitement afterwards when she said yes.

Declan rented a nice hotel room for the occasion. We sat on the sofas in the dining room area making small talk- but the air was thick because we all knew why we were there. Talk graduated to casual touching, and a bottle of champagne was popped open.

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I always did enjoy having you around kitten. You were fun to talk to, sweet, funny…

And so, so fucking oblivious. You never really figured out that your boyfriends roomate wanted you. Did you? That he stroked his cock while you were in the other room riding him. That he stroked it to the sounds of your frustrations…
Even using other women to get off didn’t do enough. Inevitably I’d get bored with a new toy and go back to fantasy. Until one day I decided I needed you.

You were asleep much later than normal, while you’re boyfriend was out at work. I had been kept up all night with the sounds of you desperately trying, and failing, to cum. I decided to do something about it.

You start to stir, groggily wondering what that feeling is. And why it feels so fucking good. Whose beard is brushing over your sensitive skin, whose tongue is writhing deep inside your kitty.
Surely he had come back home for some reason? He had seen you sleeping and taken advantage. Either way. You were moaning like a wet little whore, weren’t you pet?