LOOKING FOR LADIES PERSPECTIVES (With PIC For You)

Okay, I have this coworker that I flirt with quite a bit, particularly over the office IM. So she asked me to write her a story of a sexual nature, but she has not really confessed any of her real kinks yet (other than that she thinks I would be shocked), which makes it a bit difficult to really home in on what she might like. She has confessed that she sometimes fantasizes about what could happen in our office meetings, so I touch on that a bit, but don't want to go too far down that road until I really know what drives her fantasies. (She has promised me an actual experience she loved and a dark fantasy to be revealed next time we can arrange lunch).

Anyway, I am getting along in this, and although the story is not complete, I'd like to get a couple of women's perspectives on how this is shaking out and what you think. As this is a story about an actual office environment, I have changed names and places just in case anyone I work with happens to be on this forum Again, it is not finished, but I hope to get some feedback anyway, it may help me make some changes. I have think skin, so if you have a red pen, go wild

[mf] A serious game [fantasy]

First part: Dreaming of a nymph

Second part: Night time

After what happened last night I cannot stop thinking about you. I try but I can't. I spent the day in a limbo, waiting for the sun to go down to repeat my little experiment and see if I can bring you back to me. What I tasted yesterday I didn't know existed, your juice must be what ancient Greeks called ambrosia. I want more. I want to taste you again. Let me get my clothes out. Oh my, I already have an erection. Same chair as yesterday, lights off. I close my eyes and think about you. In my mind I picture your face, your breasts, your legs, your ass, your pussy. I get furiously on my cock, waiting for you to appear again from thin air. There is just a problem, you are not coming. I wait and wait, always stroking my cock. I beg you in my mind, beg you to come and let me taste you again. I finally cannot hold anymore and cum, but you are not here. Crashed in the spirit and still naked, I go to my bed and immediately fall in a deep sleep.

So I Have This Pirate Fantasy

I don’t remember the capture, just the wreck, the fire, the screams as the ship went down. Blurred shapes of red, brown, gold and silver slowly come into focus illuminated by flickering candlelight. I stir and when the soft sheets caress my skin I realize I’m in a bed. Naked. The recognition of my vulnerability startles me awake.

Movement across the cabin draws my attention and I see him sitting quietly in a red leather wingback chair, watching me. His white shirt is rolled up at the sleeves revealing weathered arms. He is leaning forward, elbows propped on knees clad in black pants, his chin resting on clasped hands that wear several gold rings. Shoulder length black hair frames his tanned face out of which piercing gray eyes gaze. He’s beautiful.

“You’re awake.”

His voice is low, rumbling and soothing, like antique velvet.

“What happened?” I whisper.

“We plundered the ship,” he says matter-of-factly.

“The crew? The passengers?” I croak.

“All in little row boats headed for shore. They’ll be fine. We’re thieves, not murderers.”

“But you took me. Why?”

Peccancy [Anal, huml, nc, reluc, feminization, MM, Mdom, Msub, Fdom]

(Hey, just found this buried in a thread. The brief video at the end was taken down shortly after, but I transcribed it for this post. Thought you guys might enjoy.)

User_PrincessNat: I’m going to try to tell you everything that he did to me. I think it might help me start to accept what’s happened to me.

It all started with Han, the worst asshole I knew. He was Asian, ripped, rich, and, unfortunately, hung like a horse (you won’t believe how I found that out). That thing about Asian guys and small dicks? Not true. And he was always working out at the gym. I was always too afraid to go–having to negotiate with all those guys for bench privileges seemed too nerve-wracking and awkward to bear. I ran instead, and I would do the occasional squats and crunches at home, for the sake of my knees and core. Han had a way more impressive physique than me. I was more lean, although I had pretty thick…upper legs…from the running. We all don’t realize how much brute physical force still counts in this world, and Han had it over me. We were rivals, and in raw power I was completely outdone. But by the time I realized it, he…I’m sorry, I don’t quite know where to start. I think, maybe, I need to go a little farther back.

Collaborative writing? “Okay honey. Go ahead”

Looking for someone to help me write this story together. Write up the next few paragraphs, then I will write up some more, and so on.

I enjoy rich descriptions, and I'm a good writer, looking for the same. We can take this to DMs or do it in the comments.

"Okay honey. Go ahead".

I say to you, my wife, as I hand you over to another man in a hotel room. He's been your crush for as long as you can remember. You've been my loyal wife and loving girlfriend for as long as I can remember. We've only been with each other. You've never seem dissatisfied.

But then you asked. My shy, demure, cute, wife, asked if she could fuck another man. I was furious the first night you mentioned it. We argued all night. But then I cooled down.

We talked again. You explained, he was your only fantasy, your only wild thought, your only infidelity. You loved me, but you wanted, needed, to try, to explore. You apologised, assured me you loved me, but you knew you needed him.

[mf] Night time [fantasy]

First part: Dreaming of a nymph.

I don't know how but yesterday I was in my bed and a gorgeous forest nymph materialized in my room, out of nowhere. She stripped out of her tiny clothes and gave me an amazing blowjob. She just said that she was thirsty. I am now wondering if there is a way to call for her and have her again in my room.

So I had this idea, I went to my room and turned all lights off. I got naked in the dark and sat on a chair. Legs wide enough to be comfortable. I closed my eyes and began to think of that nymph. While I was thinking about yesterday I could not help but to grab my cock with my right hand and start to slowly stroke it. At some point I smelled something sweet in the air, I opened my eyes and she was there, the nymph. Or, I believe it was her, as she looked so different from yesterday, pink hair and furry outfit. "I can look any way I want" she said, like she could somehow read my thoughts.

[mf] Dreaming of a nymph [fantasy]

I'm in bed now, over here the middle of the night arrived. I looked again at your pictures and I'm getting excited. Suddenly you appear from mid-air, all in pink like in today's posts. "Watch me" you say "and do as you wish". While you dance and move around I take glimpses at your wonderful body. You look at me and slowly strip. I look at you and start stroking my cock.

I remove my pants and stroke my cock, you remove your clothes and spin around. Unfortunately, even as you get naked, I cannot see your body properly as while you move there is always something covering your breast and pussy. One time it's a hand, one time your hair. I know that you're naked in front of me, even if I can't enjoy the view of your whole naked body. As you come closer and closer I just look into your eyes and move my hand to the rhythm of your dance.

Hers to Command: Addicted (A story about a witch that can summon toys & men to do her bidding)

Every afternoon Kate heads to her room to enjoy alone time with her toys. Being a witch’s daughter has brought certain advantages passed down to her. Kate quickly learns how to make her toys do her bidding as she experiments with her new found powers bestowed to her on her 24th birthday.

Will Kate take her powers too far? Will her body be able to withstand the addiction? What happens when she learns how to conjure men with endless stamina, hard shafts that never go down and an imagination of the hottest guys she can think of?


My question to you… think this kind of story will flop pretty bad or is there a market out there for something like this? Haha. I started writing it as a joke as my wife told me her fantasy. She got turned on by it, so I turned it into a story.

I threw it on Amazon to see what happens. http://www.amazon.com/Addicted-infinite-energy-witch-Command-ebook/dp/B00OBIS004/ref=sr_1_fkmr0_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1412875350&sr=8-1-fkmr0&keywords=hers+to+keep+addicted+erotica

A knock at your door [FM] First Time Posting Written for a female reader. Should I keep writing?

Sorry ahead of time for poor punctuation, spelling and grammar =-) If you enjoy please comment and let me know.

There is a sudden loud banging nose coming from your living room. Someone is unexpectedly knocking on your door as you're in the shower. You frustratingly shout" hold on a second" as you quickly rinse off the soap from you curvy wet glistening body and wrap up in a short towel. You're somewhat pissed off as I unknowingly interrupted a particularly hot and heavy shower head fantasy time that you were fully engulfed in.

Little do I know, your clit is full and throbbing from the particularly exciting treatment that you were just giving it. Your pussy wet dripping and creamy with excitement. Your nipples hard and perky from the teasing and twisting as you fantasized about a stranger you saw on the subway but never spoke with.