[Constructive Criticism][Work-shopping][MF][anal][ass to mouth][fiction] Giving Quinn a chance

**Disclaimer:** This story does contain some coprophilia (dirty ass to mouth) if you’re not into that please don’t read. If you do decide to read it and have any suggestions to improve my writing, please let me know.
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He could feel Quinn staring at him again. He didn’t even have to look up to know. He could feel her eyes burning a hole through his sweater. It was two days before finals, but somehow they had the whole print studio to themselves.

Kyle grumbled to himself. He had all but finished his final project; a set of art-books showcasing local street artists and their graffiti, all he had left was the binding. It was no surprise Quinn was there. She had always been low effort, low effort in a way that seemed like she was trying really hard not to care. She was cute though even with her hippy-dippy-punk-aesthetic; septum piercing, gauged ears, tattoos, and all. She wasn’t tiny, but she was small, maybe 5’3, if he had to guess. Her face was round with cute, delicate features, and she had the cutest set of dimples. Beneath her thick (but surprisingly well-manicured) brows nestled a set of beautiful emerald green eyes. Her dirty blonde hair (which she naturally elected to dye streaks of hot pink throughout) fell almost to the middle of her back. Her chest was small, swelling just slightly pasted her ribcage, and while her hips were kind of trim, her ass was round, perky, and squeezably thick. Kyle had always considered himself an ass-man, and Quinn’s ass was simply mouthwatering, the only drawback was it was attached to Quinn.

[MFM] Slutty neighbor shared and shown the real pleasure – 1?

My next door neighbor, Carole, is a very sexy and wanton wife and a mother. At first glance you might not consider her to be in the MILF category but she is one wildly fabulous fuck. Her husband, Tom, is a very straight laced conservative and doesn’t appreciate his wife’s desires, talents and skills. For this, I am glad since I am now the recipient of her lusty and nasty intentions. A while ago, Carole and I settled into an agreement where I would take care of her private needs with her becoming my personal whore and quite a hot and wild, slutty whore she is.

One thing that makes Carole such a terrific slut and whore is her appearance. Most of the time she appears to be a very pretty but chubby, dedicated wife and mom, but it is just a disguise to hide the “real” Carole. When she dresses and makes herself up as a slut to be my whore, she has a way of emphasizing her dirty desires, her need for cock and the fact that she is someone’s wife and mom as well. The combined contradiction is devastatingly arousing.

Katie, Mia, Andy [FF MFF] [Inc]

Damn, Andy thought, “I’ve run out of condoms!”

“That’s okay, my last period ended three days ago,” Katie stated. “Mine’s due Wednesday,” Mia said. “Then we should be okay,” Katie said, “And I bet I know where I can get a morning after pill if we need one. So you better fuck her first,” Katie indicated Mia, “Less sperm for me but that’s okay. I can get on the pill if I ask Mom.”

“You sure?” Mia asked, “This was supposed to be for you.”

“Yeah, I’ll be quite happy to suck his dick after he’s cum in you. Eat your pussy too, if you like. Cream pie it’s called, I think.”

“But, you’ve never eaten a dick before what if it doesn’t taste nice?”

“If he tastes like you-” “I’m right here you know. You could just ask.” “Ask what?” “Well, watching you two, I’ve got a lot of pre-cum on my dick, my hand, all you gotta do it take a lick. Then decide for yourselves.” The girls looked at each other and both thought, Duh! “You first,”Mia said. “Together,” Katie suggested, “Suck him together.” Mia nodded, “Come here big boy, lie down here.” Mia said, indicating an area between them.

I 26[m] made her a anal slut

So this takes place before the story of me fucking my baby moms sisters throat if anyone is reading and happens to have read that one.

I had just turned 18 and had my eye on a very particular round plump ass. For a few months I had noticed that this smaller white girl with long blond hair and hazel eyes had been checking me out everytime she would walk past me in the neighborhood. Some times even from across the way. I begin to slowly but surely notice that she was making an effort to come my direction. So the gears in my head start spinning as I found myself sizing her up more and more.

She was about 5ft 6in maybe 125 pounds little feet, tight calf’s and thick thighs for her build with a chest to match the 65% half a basket ball she had for a ass.
In the face she really wasn’t all that pretty maybe a solid 4 out of 10. That didn’t matter at all. My obsession had already taken the wheel and I was determined to seduce my victim.

[MF] [anal] [Asian] [surprise] A MOMENT IN VIETNAM

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I’m not sure how this started but the incident sticks in my mind because of the gecko, you know, that little lizard in Asian countries… Well, there I was, knees on either side of her buttocks, hands spreading her ass to get a better look at my cock, which was completely embedded balls-deep and unmoving in Jui’s anus.

I was simply enjoying the contraction of her butt around my hard cock. Those spasms somehow managed to squeeze the entire length of my cock from its base (surrounded by the coral ring of her distended anus) to the tip of my throbbing penis buried in her intestines.

I wasn’t looking at anything in particular when I rolled my head back inhaling the sweet odor of the local weed that floated in swirly clouds through the dense air of the hut. We had just put the bong aside and paused in our ass-fucking to absorb the drug. Her tiny little buttocks pushed up and back, twisting slightly to bend my cock at the root, again gripping my shaft so tightly my eyes watered. God, just sitting on her ass as she fucked my cock so sweetly was better than all the lousy greedy crap I had been dipping my dick into.

[MF] former coworker wants me to have sex with her…with some interesting conditions [UPDATE 3]

[Previously](https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/kvkpnj/mf_former_coworker_wants_me_to_have_sex_with/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3)

It’s been awhile since I updated, sorry. Work and life happened. I mentioned the rules were getting loosened up, and indeed they were! Unfortunately we were all busy so not much happened until last week. We’d chatted a bit in the weeks after the first meetup but I’ll transcribe some of our convos from just last week.

Cass: Hey! What are you up to this weekend?

Me: Nothing much. You lookin to hang out?

Cass: Haha maybe?

Cass: We enjoyed having you over last time?

Me: Did you now? I enjoyed it too.?

Cass: Haha ok Mr. cool. Why don’t you talk to Nick and see what you can arrange?

Me: I think I will.

Me: Hey man sounds like y’all want to hang out this weekend?

Nick: Yeah. Cass says she’s excited to feel you again

Me: That’s good to hear. I’d be glad to feel her again.

Nick: Since your tests came back clean, you ready to fuck her bareback?

(forgot to mention we discussed getting STI screens earlier)

Me: Oh hell yeah. She was so fucking wet

I fucked [m]y coworker’s ass [f20]

So this story is about a former coworker of mine. Hailey and I worked at a popular sporting goods store in the same department for about four months or so. She worked a lot of the same shifts I did and so we actually got to know each other very well. When I first met this girl she had been in a relationship with another guy and I actually didn’t have much of an interest in her, but after she broke up, I tried to console her during our shifts, we’d often close the store together and so we’d talk often for large chunks of time.

After one conversation, where she talked about feeling alone and unattractive, I admitted to her that I thought she was cute and I had been for awhile. She admitted to me that she was equally attracted and had though about us fucking in the past.

This let to us hooking up over the course of several months. At first we would hookup after the end of our shifts out in her truck. The parking lot was big and dark, so we’d often find a quiet spot and we would go at it like monkeys.

At 55[M], had my first experience with much younger [26]F

Very tame post here, fairly short, but maybe other Redditors have had a similar experience. I generally date within my age group, which has held true when matching up on Tinder and Bumble, but there seems to be fewer women my age on the apps these days (or at least ones that appeal to me). Thanks to a few good genes, I’m not looking too vintage. Think the blond Cobra Kai character Johnny Lawrence. We’re the same age, though I gave up on martial arts long ago (can’t do those roundhouses very well anymore).

Anyway, the point of the story, for kicks (see what I did there) I started widening my age preference, sometimes down to the thirties, even as low as 26 for a few days last summer (Canada was doing a lot better with Covid during that time). After getting past the ones that were looking for a sugar daddy, I matched with and ended up dating a 26 year old. Despite the age difference, we hit it off, largely because she was so intelligent and well read, with a lot of experience packed into those 26 years. The sex was good (maybe too good, as it was sometimes difficult to keep up with her).

Driving him crazy with the need to punish me (MF) (Fiction)

My husband is a powerful man. The way Adam moves through the world like he owns it, analyzing situations, finding their weak points and reshaping them to his advantage truly inspires me. I’ve never met another person so in control of his life. Usually when it comes to our relationship I’m happy to give him that control, no reshaping required—that all happened within the first year of our relationship.

The moment he met me my training began. Even before I agreed to go out with him he was subtly reshaping me, his comments about how I dress encouraging me to take my look in a specific direction, reinforcing certain behaviors with compliments and responding to the actions he didn’t like with a disapproving look. Then, when we finally started dating a more explicit form of training began. He took his time teaching me all the things he liked, both in the bedroom and out, and in the process he introduced me to all the things I never knew that *I* liked.

26 [M] Fucking my baby moms step sisters throat

The story goes I was About 18 or 19 When I met my daughter’s mother. She lived in an apartment Next to her stepsisters and they where together all the time, ironically I had been in a sexual relationship with both of her 2 neighbors that lived in the apartments behind them all.
This was before I ever met any of these 3. My thing was then the same as it is now I have a fetish for anal sex with white women. So here is where things get interesting. After meet these 3 girls it became obvious that all 3 of them like me and I was over quite often partying with them. To make things easier to under stand im going to use 3 fake names. The oldest girl being my current baby’s mom name is Jennifer, the middle child name was rory, and the youngest name is Renee. Well I really liked Renee alot and had my eyes set on her especially after find out the Jennifer and rory had no problem discussing freely in front of me how big of a whore Renee was and still is. One day it even come up in conversation and was said from renee’s own mouth that she is a little whore and she didn’t even know how to feel about it herself. She didn’t sound entirely upset about it but she wasn’t entirely enthusiastic about it either. This only excited me even more, as I still to this day want nothing more in a sexual relationship then a woman who is able to admit openly to herself and others that she’s a sexual deviant.