I’d love some feed back on this I’ve been sitting on it for awhile, posted the original version. This is slightly edited.
The night air was cold, it caused Alcielas skin to pucker with each icy gust. She stood on the open balcony nude and letting her pale skin soak up the full moon light. The shuffle of coals in the fire and Eldrin adding fresh wood to the fire breaks her trance. She looks over her shoulder to see him joining her on the balcony. his hands are warm as they wrap around her body, she spins in his grip to face him kissing him. She lets her lips linger on his for a moment letting his body heat hers.
“You’ll catch your death standing outside nude, its freezing out here.” Eldrin wraps his robe around Alciela.
“You don’t need to worry about me, I am a grown woman.” She furrows her brows at him. She’s not used to having someone fuss over her.