I set a goal for myself after reaching a milestone birthday, to write one piece of erotica a week. I currently have over 25 chapters done. It started as an exercise to aid in coming up with scenes for my wife/sub and I, but I’ve started to enjoy it. She absolutely loves my stories so mission accomplished!
I figured I’d share here to see what you lot think. I’d love to hear any feedback, both on the story itself as well as the writing. I’m NOT a writer, so I’m feeling my way through and am not entirely confident if using present tense, etc. is the best way to go. Additional topics to write about would also be helpful. I have another dozen or so ideas waiting to be written but after that it’s going to be a struggle.
All of my stories are from her perspective.
“I packed you a bag,” his email reads, “meet me in room 225 at our favorite hotel. 7 pm, don’t be late.” With no time to change, still wearing her work clothes consisting of a dress with no panties per his morning instructions, she rushes to the car and drives to their favorite hotel.