Need feedback on my partial erotica story I’m working on

Hey all! I’m currently working on a book about a young woman who plans to sleep with 10 different guys to achieve a self-proclaimed goal. It’s part erotica, mainly because of the excessive detail I poured into the sex scenes, but I mostly categorize it as New Adult.

I would love some more feedback on the story, especially on how you personally think it sounds thus far (there are 15 chapters written so far, with a lot of extra stuff in between). I’ll post a link below to review the story at your leisure. Thanks in advance for giving it a shot :)

[https://www.wattpad.com/story/174248809-top-ten](https://www.wattpad.com/story/174248809-top-ten)

Groomed part 2 (M/F)

It hae been a couple days since James had fingered me and made me squirt in the Cafe’s bathroom. And since then, I haven’t stopped thinking about it. It keeps me up at night while I tease my pussy, saving up my orgasm, and teasing my pussy till I’m soaked in juices. I lay in bed, tracing my fingers ever so slightly around my clit, feeling it throb and yet ignoring my body’s desires. I was so tired of making myself cum. I kept caressing my pussy over the top of my panties until I felt my wetness seeping through the delicate lace. I sighed and finally got out of bed.

I hadn’t seen James around the house since that day, but after I threw a baggy shirt over myself and got to the kitchen, he was there, doing dishes.

Seeing him triggered all sorts of reactions in my body, I felt my face get really hot so I knew I was red. My pussy started quivering as grool began dripping down the inside of my thigh. I froze and couldn’t bring myself to say anything, instead I reached between my legs just to feel the cum I was already leaking, and taste it. Read more »

We shot some guns and he shot a load in me [MF]

first time poster… hoping you’ll find this experience as fun as I did!

With everyone in lockdown in our area, my bf (39) and I (38) have been looking for ways to get out of the house and away from people to just let loose. On this particular weekend, we didn’t have the kids and we had about 10 hours of alone time to kill. Rather than work on the yard or do any of the responsible adulting things, we decided to load up the truck with a couple guns, some ammo, and a few beers so we could head out into the wide open spaces west of the city and play. Read more »

Edging day 13 – WFH and reward [F]rom FWB

Another day of working from home, another opportunity for some edging and teasing. I had 2 video calls lined up today with some very attractive guys and couldn’t stop fantasizing about having a threesome together. I made sure to wear a slightly more sheer work top and panties as my outfit for the day. My nipples were so excited you could easily see them poking through my top.

I spent the entire call with my little clit sucked nestled directly on my throbbing clit. My panties were soaked and the feeling of them against my pussy sent shivers down my spine. I almost showed one guy just how much I was enjoying talking to him while playing myself, but I had to switch off my camera and mute myself so I could release my stifled moans. Mmm I was so close to breaking.

For the rest of the night I made a really nice dinner for my FWB (staying over again) and she seemed to really enjoy my cooking. Why? She was way more sexual with me, from sitting on my lap and making out with me while fondling my tits, to finger fucking me on the couch after I showered. Even in bed she pinned me down and kept teasing the nape of my neck while her leg was grinding against my pussy. Fuck it was an intense night trying not to come. Read more »

A Brothers love

Saturday night was perfect for our end of the school year party I had just turned 18 our parents were out of town and all our friends were there to celebrate with us. We listened to music and played drinking games til 2 o’clock in the morning and by then my 19 year old brother and I were completely drunk, laughing and staggering a bit as our friends began to leave one by one.

I was having trouble walking by then so my brother helped me up the stairs and into my bedroom, once we got to my room my brother layed me on my bed and as I closed my eyes ready to pass out he took off my shoes as I dozed off a bit, my eyes opened and closed randomly as I desperately tried to stay awake my brother started to unbuttoned my blouse and removed it completely, as I layed there I felt my bra being unsnapped and pushed over my shoulders exposing my breasts, I felt his hands touching my body rubbing my breasts, his mouth on my nipples kissing and sucking on them as his hands squeezed them firmly, I struggled to stay awake unsure if I was dreaming this or if this was really happening. Read more »

[M]y Cousins Wi[F]e Part 8

This is a long one.

I received a call early in the morning from my cousin’s wife, she wanted to thank me again for everything last night. The conversation very quickly changed to talking about the sex we had last night. Telling me how she hasn’t been able to stop thinking about it. I asked her if she wanted a date night again soon she said: “yes, definitely.” She also told me that she is going to confront my cousin about the divorce tonight after the kids go to bed. She can’t stand him anymore, he disgusts her and doesn’t even want him around the kids. I told her to call me if she needs to talk and that she is more then welcome to come over whenever. Read more »

Sarah’s pussy pays the bills, part 3: a first time for everything

“Hommm my doinngm?”

“What’s that?” Faith asked.

“I said,” said Sarah, lifting her mouth from Faith’s mound and looking up at her from between her lightly tanned thighs, “How am I doing?” Sarah slide a hand between Faith’s legs to rub her clit while her mouth took a break. “I’ve never eaten pussy before.”

“You’re doing great. Don’t stop!”

Faith let her head fall back onto the pillow as Sarah buried herself in the young woman’s pussy again.

Faith was 20. She had been studying for a business degree at an exclusive East Coast college until the pandemic forced her back home with her parents. She was an attractive brunette with shoulder-length hair, a pair of perky C cups that Sarah had spent some time massaging earlier in the afternoon, and was well proportioned even though she’d never quite managed to lose the freshman 15 after she’d put it on. She was also, unbeknownst to her parents, a lesbian. Read more »

30.M.USA looking for creative writer for commission work

Whats up everyone. I hope you are all safe and healthy! Quarantine is making me go a bit stir crazy and I would love to get off to a few fantasies I have.

I am looking for someone who is extremely open minded, detailed, and creative that I can provide details of fantasies I have and you can write them into an erotica that I can use for personal use to get off to.

I have a few fantasy ideas in mind and have very specific details that go along with them so message me if you’re interested in hearing about them and also what you charge for commissions. Please be a legit writer as I am willing to pay for the work provided as long as it hits all my trigger buttons!

I look forward to hearing from people!

Hot New Neighbours (MILF, Teen) Part 4

First Day of School

The summer went by like a breeze and today is the first day of school. On the weekend I offered to go with Abigail on the first day but she she turned me down. There I was in the hallway with my friends grabbing books from my locker. When she walks around the corner spots me, smiles, and runs to me leaving her friends behind. Jumping into my arms I grab her in a big hug and we kiss. While everyone around us just stares. After the kiss I ask “How’s your first day?” she shrugs and says “I’d rather be with you all day”. I start cheesin and tell her, “Me too but at least we have a class together. After a whole year of seeing me you might take that back”. We both start laughing, kiss again and she rejoins her friends to head to her next class. While she walks away she turns back to smile at me every couple of seconds. My friends are all stunned, “What the fuck man, who’s the major hottie and why didn’t you tell us you hooked up with her?”. I ignore their questions and watch her ass bouncing up and down while she walks away “God I love that ass”. She turns back to smile at me one last time before disappearing around a corner. Read more »