Before I start the story I wanted to tell you a little about myself for context. This is the first erotica story I have ever written and my dearest friend has encouraged me to post it here for feedback. I’m a virgin and I’ve never been on a date before. The only porn I’ve really seen has been R rated movies and spanking only videos online. I’m a male dom, but in fantasy only. I’m looking for honest opinions on the writing but keep my situation in mind as you read.
I wrote this series of stories with interactivity in mind, and the story is written for female subs to read and play along with. I am fascinated with the act of submission and domination and I try to explore those concepts in my writing. Because of this I have added a play along with my story that tries to put you in the shoes of the main character. I call it **true submission** any time you see *** in the story you will be instructed on what to do in order to play along with the story. Most of these are done in the privacy of your own home, but you are also given an extra assignment that would require you to DM me your personal thoughts and experiences of your play. This is for any female interested in trying submissive play out, or for experts who are bored. I hope you enjoy my first ever erotic fiction. I have this story and another one finished and ready to post. Each story has 3 chapters so follow me if you are interested in reading more.