This is my first time writing up a formal piece! Hope you enjoy.
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Battle Rayale
Jonathan sat mesmerized by the clinking, the shaking, the jiggling. His eyes snapped back to the flashing in the foreground. A large cooking knife sliced the air against a long steel rod.
“You like what you see?” She asked with a smirk.
It was the laughter of his four best friends that brought Jonathan back to his reality. He chuckled shyly remembering where he was.
It was his 27th, a bit of a milestone for him as his father passed away at 26 oversees. His buddies took him out for a big treat. They had gone to this tittie bar before, but had never gotten the VIP treatment. This is what lead these five fine fit gentlemen to be basking in the presence of the bronze beauty Ray. Rachel, as her mother called her.
You see, the VIP treatment entails a private night of fare and entertainment. The men are treated to Ray’s refined skills in the kitchen, drinks, and a show all for their viewing pleasure. The luxurious meal is prepared before them by Ray… covered in chains.