Alli had the most perfect little body. Our new music director was fresh out of grad school, and her small figure matched her youthful personality. I call her Alli, because calling her Mrs. Lastname made her feel old. This would be her first music job since graduating, but she was definitely not inexperienced. With the firmest of personalities, she stood at just about 5’4″, short red hair, freckles and gorgeous green eyes that sometimes turned blue, with an ass that deserves its own few sentences. She was an avid runner, and had a body that confused her as a PE teacher. We weren’t used to it. Alli wore the tightest pants that just barely hugged around her waist. She couldn’t find jeans that fit both her ass and waist respectively, this part here is very true, she’d complain about it frequently, and we were all the more grateful for it. She couldn’t walk away without an entire group just ogling her entirely. Her waist was just unbelievable. And on the days we performed, I’d feel envious of the audience behind her, witnessing her in her usual skirts. For a high school full of dry old men, she was more one of us rather than an adult. She demanded we all call her Alli the first day we met, and was just the coolest teacher we’d ever have. We all wanted to fuck her immediately.
Category: eroticliterature
[PROOFREADERS WANTED] I am writing a story and would like someone to help catch my mistakes.
Dirty BDSM type story it’s 2 parts and growing. Each part is around 10,000 words I would just like someone besides myself to proofread it before I start posting it properly. Also I’m struggling with a decent title.
M/F switch, bondage, stretching, body mod, diaper, humiliation, back and forth one-upping….probably other tags I’m forgetting.
[FEEDBACK WANTED] Panties and Other Stories About Panties (W/T) Introduction [Fetish][FFF][Incest][BDSM][TS] (x-post from r/erotica)
Hello r/eroticliterature,
**LONG POST ALERT**
I’m working on my first erotica novel (really my first long-form writing project since term papers) and I’m looking for feedback—constructive or otherwise!
I’m nearing the 100 page mark and for some reason I thought that would be a good milestone to go back and edit the totality of the rough work I have so far. As you might imagine, there’s A LOT of cringe in there, A LOT of purple prose, A LOT of thesaurus writing, but there’s also A LOT I’m extremely proud of and I think my concept is still strong even if some of my execution can’t stand on its own.
That’s where you guys come in! I need a competent editor(ial staff) to give me their unvarnished thoughts and most merciless criticisms to break me of my terrible habits. I am 100% in favor of compensating you (I can’t do it monetarily at the moment, but even though I’m not a Lannister I always pay my debts).
The major questions I have with the work are as follows:
Does it turn you on? Is it too much? Do the descriptions bore? Are you not (otherwise) entertained?
[FEEDBACK WANTED] Panties and Other Stories About Panties (W/T) Introduction [Fetish]][Bondage][BDSM][TS] (x-post from r/erotica)
Hello r/eroticliterature,
**LONG POST ALERT**
I’m working on my first erotica novel (really my first long-form writing project since term papers) and I’m looking for feedback—constructive or otherwise!
I’m nearing the 100 page mark and for some reason I thought that would be a good milestone to go back and edit the totality of the rough work for I have so far. As you might imagine, there’s A LOT of cringe in there, A LOT of purple prose, A LOT of thesaurus writing, but there’s also A LOT I’m extremely proud of and I think my concept is still strong even if some of my execution can’t stand on its own.
That’s where you guys come in! I need a competent editor(ial staff) to give me their unvarnished thoughts and most merciless criticisms to break me of my terrible habits. I am 100% in favor of compensating you (I can’t do it monetarily at the moment, but even though I’m not a Lannister I always pay my debts).
The major questions I have with the work are as follows:
Does it turn you on? Is it too much? Do the descriptions bore? Are you not (otherwise) entertained?
It’s always intense with you.
I really want this you know. Me holding you in my arms. Pulling you in closer with a small peck on your lips. And then I trail kisses down to your neck. Lifting you up and putting you on the table while I continue to kiss you. With one hand moving from your stomach to your thighs as softly as possible. Wrapping your legs around me while I continue to kiss your lips and your neck. My hands reach around the back of your head, pulling you closer into me.
Hands through your hair while I kiss you harder. D
I take your top off and I trail my kisses lower down your boobs to your stomach. Biting every once in a while, because pleasure + pain is the best.
I slowly work my kisses around your boobs while I take your bra off. I start to kiss you around the boobs and I can see your nipples getting hard, but I won’t kiss them yet. I’m gonna tease you. I trail the slightest tip of my tongue on your nipples to tease you and they keep getting harder and harder while you begin moaning. I take my hands up to your boobs and squeeze them while gently pinching your nipples.
I continue toh squeeze both your tits with my hands and continue to suck and kiss your nipples now.
I take your shorts off and I turn you over to bend over on the table.
Kissing your ass, spanking it, squeezing it and biting it. I slowly start grazing your inner thigh, reaching close to your pussy but not touching it yet. Where’s the fun in that, yeah?
Now, after a bit, I slowly start to move my finger over your pussy. Entering it ever so slightly before I move the finger to your clit and rub on it.
Then with every passing second, I increase the pace at which I’m rubbing your pussy. My finger now enters your pussy deeper and deeper with every passing second. I keep doing this while I pull your hair and pull you towards me. I continue to finger you harder and harder and faster and faster while you keep moaning louder and louder.
I now turn you around and start to kiss you again. I have one of my hands squeezing your tits and pinching your nipples, while the other hand is fingering you.
I start to put the second finger in and you start to moan louder. Within the next minute I have all 4 fingers inside you while my thumb continues to rub your clit, all of this causes you to have your first orgasm.
One hot night in July [MF] ][solo]
Hi this was going to be a story going back and forth between the minds of the two characters, but it ended up being very long so might do it in multiple parts. Also this is my first story so be kind! ?
My room is always so hot in July. It’s 4am and I’m just lying spread eagle in my underwear staring at the ceiling. I rent a tiny room I pay way too much for on the top of floor of a shared house, which seems to be more of a greenhouse than anything else. I live with two girls which sounds amazing but to be honest we’re all almost always out of the house and don’t hang out much, besides, I’m quite quiet anyway.
I share the top floor with one of my roommates, but her room is massive in comparison to mine, I have no idea how she can afford it. Our rooms seem to have been connected at one time as there’s a cheap painted piece of wood nailed into the space where a door would normally be in the corner which means that sound travels between our rooms pretty easily.
Time Traveling Temptations PT1 (MF) (Time Travel) (Squirting) (Creampie) (Facesitting)
(Short story written for my wife’s fantasies. Part 1 of a series. Comments and feed back are more than welcome. Otherwise hope you enjoy it as much as she did reading it and I did writing it.)
**Time Traveling Temptations PT1**
Diana wiped her forehead with the back of her hand as she took a step back from her lab table. She sank backwards into her battered but worn comfy chair and exhaled long and hard. Her fingers shook and her pulse raced. This was it. It was done. Finally.
Kicking backwards and spinning her swivel chair as she let out a celebratory cheer. The joyful celebration echoed around her large lab, empty save for the piles of machinery, cabling and power sources. She took it all in as she spun and spun before slamming her feet down and scooting back to her main table with glee. Her fingers gripped the edge of the table as her face was drawn close to an elegant hand and wrist device. The sleek white surface glowed with internal power, emitting a soft white light. She slipped it onto her hand delicately and fastened the wrist straps.
Long fictional story about a woman I previously had a crush on. Written in my teenage years so don’t hate ??
The evening was picturesque, the sky beautiful and the water warm and relaxing as they both lay under the waterfall; shaking, post orgasm and deeply satisfied.
It could have almost been a movie.
The water flowed around them relaxing their sore, sensitive muscles. He pulled her supple, perfectly formed body into his arms, enjoying the touch of her soft breasts against her body and the warmth of her centre against his still semi hard cock.
He smiled thinking of taking her again, as she kissed him gently, feeling her soft lips on his. He thought “there’s plenty of time for that later” and kissed her back, biting her lip gently, letting her know his thoughts.
As he bit her lip, she smiled mischievously thinking how this scene of calm and tranquillity was shattered recently, his warm cum inside her enhancing the memories of the intense afternoon they had just shared. They both reminisced on the afternoons events…
Earlier that afternoon…
He stood, mesmerised as he watched her under the waterfall, the flow cascading over her curves, her grace superior to nature’s rarest of sights.
Beth’s pleasure
I was in my study when I heard Beth turn off the shower and within seconds I could hear her reach for the door to come out. She had no idea that I’m in the room and in the mirror, I can see her wrapped in the towel. While she bent over to search for something on her dresser, I stepped behind her, lifted her towel, to have her cute little ass ready for me.
I slowly go down on my knees and start to trail kisses. All the way from the ankle, to her calves, to her thighs and ending them just a little above her butt. I circle around her pussy, blowing in my warm moist breath and I sense her body warming up and Beth getting hornier. I start to kiss her thigh, second by second, biting it, giving hickeys before I grab hold of her butt. I start to kiss her ass cheeks, kissing them, biting them before I give a small kiss to her pussy.
I get up, we’re face to face and we can’t stop kissing each other. Our hands moving all over each other’s bodies. I put my tongue in her mouth and she starts to suck on it and then she put her tongue in my mouth and I reciprocate. I lift her up and sit her down on the dresser. I slowly unwrap the towel from her body while I trail kisses down from her neck all the way to her stomach.
The build up (FM)
Hi! So this is my first time posting and writing on any Reddit forum, most of my writing will be short, teasing if you want to call it that. If you see anything you think I could improve on, tell me, please. I’m always looking for ways to better myself. Enjoy :-)
“I need you”. He reaches down and grips her hips, squeezing roughly to show her just how much he means it.
She holds her breath. The simple yet euphoric touch sends shivers through her body. “Then take me”. She whispers softly, whimpers mixed as his fingers ghost over her hips, to her tummy and stopping right below her bra.
“Oh, I will baby girl, that’s a guarantee”. He then plays with her chest in a gentle yet firm manner. Squeezing and massaging. Pulling and twisting slightly.
She loves when he gets like this. Dominating yet soft, demanding but caring. When he gets in this mood the level of pleasure during their scenes multiplies tenfold.