Hi! So this is my first time posting and writing on any Reddit forum, most of my writing will be short, teasing if you want to call it that. If you see anything you think I could improve on, tell me, please. I’m always looking for ways to better myself. Enjoy :-)
“I need you”. He reaches down and grips her hips, squeezing roughly to show her just how much he means it.
She holds her breath. The simple yet euphoric touch sends shivers through her body. “Then take me”. She whispers softly, whimpers mixed as his fingers ghost over her hips, to her tummy and stopping right below her bra.
“Oh, I will baby girl, that’s a guarantee”. He then plays with her chest in a gentle yet firm manner. Squeezing and massaging. Pulling and twisting slightly.
She loves when he gets like this. Dominating yet soft, demanding but caring. When he gets in this mood the level of pleasure during their scenes multiplies tenfold.
“Please… “ she breathes out with a stutter, chest heaving as he lets his hands travel all over her. “What was that?” He replies knowing full well what she said, what she means. He just wants to hear her say it.
“I- please, I can’t”. His hand grabs at her ass, pushing her into him and then grinding down on her slightly.
“Please what, baby girl,” the pet name gives her butterflies. “you gotta tell me so I can know”. She whines, tilting her head to the side so he could, hopefully, take advantage of the opening. He almost takes her bait yet he resists and stops all stimulation. “Come on tell me what you want,” he whispers into her ear, “tell me what you need. He finishes with a growl. He lets his hot breath blow over her ear before licking and nibbling it.
She lets out a shaky breath, closes her eyes and tilts her head down. “I need you to touch me”. It’s nothing above a mumble, and she should be grateful that he isn’t spanking that peachy ass for it.
“Louder”. His strict tone is played down by the hand resting on and lovingly stroking her head.
She looked him in his eyes. “I said that I need you…I need you to make me feel good. I need you to touch me, to take your pleasure from me. Use me”. He cocked his eyebrow up with an amused smirk, watching her stumble over her words and her face flushing was just so cute. After a few seconds of silence, she squeaks out a meek “Please?”.
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/cnp0ni/the_build_up_fm