[MF] Doom Canoe [Outdoors] [Tension] [First Draft]

It made the tiniest popping sound when she fell. We were dragging the canoes onto the riverbed, stumbling across the smooth rocks. She broke her fall with one hand, and something in the way she moved made us stop. She didn’t cry or scream, just took one hand in the other and waited.

Her wrist is broken, D said. He was our guide on this four day excursion. Kaia looked down at Ella, at me, then back at her friend. We’d been on the river a day and a night, and no one was enjoying it. Even less now.

D finished binding Ella’s wrist and gestured to me and Kaia. 

Two options, he said. We go back downstream, wait for the next group. That’s three days.

Three days? Kaia shook her head in disbelief.

Or, I sprint to the pick-up, get her to the Ranger station, then the hospital. That’s one day, maybe faster.

That’s not even a choice, I said.

That’s not all, he looked at us. I gotta travel light. Put all our gear in your boat. You two have to follow on your own. You can’t go back with all that weight, the rapids from yesterday will sink you.

You Don’t Pluck The Ones You Love

[MFF]

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I met Starling while my buddy lived with this girl Anna. The two girls shared a dormroom in college, so they acted like they’d known each other forever. My buddy was already out of the picture when Starling visited again, so that meant just the three of us. We barhopped the first night, and Starling and I fooled around some after Anna passed out. She had the bedroom, and we split the couch, but it wasn’t very comfortable. I assumed the two of them talked, because Anna told us at breakfast the bed was ours that night.

“Can it be ours today too?” Starling and Anna burst out laughing.

Anna rolled up the weekly she was reading and mimed popping me on the nose. “Down boy!”

“And just what do you think would happen if it was?” Starling whispered loud enough for Anna to hear, with a plucky flick of her eyebrows.

“Do I have to say it?” I asked. Starling just looked at me with her small crooked smile. I leaned in theatrically and made sure no one could overhear us. The two of them leaned closer. “There’s only one thing that would completely satisfy me right now…” I paused.

One Ruins, One revives [MF]

My favorite kind of bar is an empty one, and 19Hundred20 is almost always dead. It gets an older crowd in the evening, and drunk bachelorette parties at night, but noon til five is all mine, usually. A bad breakup brought me back home, tail tucked between my legs, and Nan the bartender poured me one on the house. I watched the swirling dust in the light coming through the windows, and felt clear-headed for the first time in weeks. I had sworn off romance completely; since Madeleine, pretty girls looked more like landmines, or plague carriers.

So when the door swung open and she took the stool next to mine, I acted like she didn’t even exist.

“Hey man, I’m having a shitty day, can I have a smoke?” I pushed the pack over, set my lighter beside it, and kept my eyes on the flatscreen.

“Thanks,” she said when she came back in, returning my lighter. I grunted in acknowledgement. We sat there silently for a while, and I could feel her eyes on me.

“Hey are you alright?” she asked.

“Just fine.”

“Am I bothering you?”