This is my first post and it is the opening to a book I am writing. Please give me honest feedback!
Tyler was staring at the ceiling, he noticed it had the same water stain it always has. He meant to fix it but never got around to it. He then turned his attention down to his lap, there she was on her hands and knees. She was slobbering on his cock as he ran his hands through her raven black hair. He leaned back and let out a sigh of content. “You’ve really gotten better at this Betty!” He smiled. She started to lift her face to look at him and he woke.