The Wife and The Gym

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Tyler was staring at the ceiling, he noticed it had the same water stain it always has. He meant to fix it but never got around to it. He then turned his attention down to his lap, there she was on her hands and knees. She was slobbering on his cock as he ran his hands through her raven black hair. He leaned back and let out a sigh of content. “You’ve really gotten better at this Betty!” He smiled. She started to lift her face to look at him and he woke.

He laid on his back and looked to his left. There she was, his wife with Lori. Her long and flowing blonde hair covering her back. He looked down to notice that there was some pre-cum that had soaked into his shorts. With his wife still asleep he crept to the bathroom to take a shower and finish himself off. Tyler had a sexual desire that could not be quenched. He stood in the shower and jerked himself off until he finished, making sure to not moan to alert Lori to what we was doing. He toweled off and got back into bed. He then started to spoon Lori until she noticed him there and awoke in a daze. “Baby… come on I’m tired” she whispered. He moved himself closer. His cock now pushing against the black lace panties she wore. “Oh hunny… seems as though you brought your friend.” She smiled. “Well okay, have your way with me!” She moaned as she grabbed at his cock. He turned her over in haste as to look at her busty chest. She had perky D cups, just perfect for him to fuck. He preceded to kiss her up and down from her ample tits down to her now growing wet panties. He did not eat her out just yet. He licked at her pussy over her soaking wet panties, she was moaning for him to move them. “Stop moaning!” He yelled, “I’ll do with you what I please Lori.” He smirked as he reached over to the night stand and grabbed some lubricant. He coated her tits with it and slicked up his now raging hard cock. “I’m going to fuck your tits until I explode.” Tyler said. And he did just so. She pushed them together to make more friction as he pumped his 8 inch cock into them. The entire time he fucked her tits he was leaning back and simultaneously rubbing her over her panties. Lori started to suck his cock as it popped in and out of her tits. This forced him over the edge and his cock spewed hot cum all over her oiled tits and her glistening lips. “Holy fuck babe” he exclaimed. “Sorry hunny bunny” she giggled. He was happy but he was not yet done. “Lick it up for me while I watch.” He sat back and watched her push the cum into her mouth. “Good girl…” he moaned as he stroked himself to get harder. “Now, come over here and take off your panties.” Tyler commanded as his cock grew hard. Lori stumbled over as she removed her panties and walked closer with his hot cum still in her mouth. “Spit the cum onto my cock and jerk me with those panties until I cum for you again…” Tyler smirked. She smiled and obey properly, she wrapped his cock in her soaking wet black lace panties. She then smiled and spit some of his cum on the tip of his cock. “Sorry baby, I swallowed some!” She giggled. Lori started to stroke him faster and faster. She grabbed his balls and started to massage them as well. She felt them start to tighten and fill with cum. Tyler leaned back, “Holy shit baby, you need to slow down!” Lori heard this and started to stroke even faster. She spit on his cock and started to pump him faster than she ever had before until he erupted. “Fuck!” She screamed out with a smile. “You had so much cum for me babe!” She smirked as she walked away swaying her ass side to side as she left him in ruins. That was the last thing he saw as his eyes closed.

He awoke an hour later, his cock covered in dry cum and her panties glued to him like papermache from his cum. “That bitch” He smirked. Tyler got up and hopped in the shower. He got cleaned up and as he was toweling off for the second time that morning he heard a slapping sound. He got nervous that he was not alone in his house. He put on the towel still dripping wet and walked toward his living room where he heard the sound resonate from. He peered in only to see Lori on her back with her legs spread open fucking herself with a long flesh colored dildo. She was so wet that he was surprised the carpet was not ruined. He was mad that she was fucking herself instead of her riding him. He did realize he did it to himself though. He was always so self centered. He did realize that he put on a few pounds and said to himself that he is going to go to the gym to better himself.

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