Private critique with your (f) drawing teacher (m)

First time writing anything like this… I did it for myself but maybe someone else will like it

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You've been fantasizing about your drawing teacher Adam all semester. He's tall and muscular with beautiful blue eyes. You love the way he talks to you in class, showing his authority. Now you've finished a project late, so you have to go to his office to hand it in the next day.

"Hi Adam, I finished the homework that was due yesterday." He takes it but doesn't really look at it, just thanks you and puts it down. "I was hoping I could get some feedback."

"You know you could've gotten feedback from the whole class if you had finished it for the critique."

"I'm really sorry I got behind in your class, but I'm caught up now! I really just want to know how I can improve."

He looks up at you and his eyes linger at your cleavage on their way to your face. "I'll give you a private crit, but even if you revise it you've already lost points for being late."