First time writer, please read [ MF ]

Hi guys, basically I had a chat with my girlfriend yesterday and I was telling her I used to love to read the naughty letters in the back of porn mags when I was a kid and I told her I would have a go at writing a short erotica story for her one day. She asked me to go for it. I wrote a little something on my commute to work. She loved it and I decided to send it out into the big bad world.

I haven’t proof read it so I’m just going to post it here and any feedback would be greatly appreciated. It’s a fair read by the way. Thank you.


I was behind the C block of Madame La Forte’s reform boarding school for girls, a place where I have worked for the past 18 months as resident handyman. The pay is decent, I can keep to myself and there’s always something for me to do.

I was busy putting the bolts back in when I heard “Hey Jimmy” this is nothing new as the campus is full of pre and post pubescent teens and apart from a few older professors there’s not many men here so I usually do get things shouted. I pay no mind as I have a niece about their age and wouldn’t dream of touching them inappropriately.