*This is an early draft of a work in progress. I am trying to write about the process of how two people begin to negotiate a female led relationship. This isn’t the first time I’ve written from a Female POV (I’m a guy). But I’m always nervous when I do so. It never feels right. Any feedback, especially from other writers would be appreciated. Things like is the dialog believable? Does the woman sound too mature? Stuff like that.*
*Enjoy! (I hope!)*
01 In Charge
We had been on our third date, and I had decided I liked him well enough to go a step further. We started kissing on my couch in the living room of my apartment. Always the gentleman, he allowed me to set the pace. And soon enough I was stroking him through his trousers.
I broke our embrace, “Take off your pants”. Quickly Karl stood and dropped his trousers around his ankles.
“Underwear too!”