Going Places – Longish

*This is an early draft of a work in progress. I am trying to write about the process of how two people begin to negotiate a female led relationship. This isn’t the first time I’ve written from a Female POV (I’m a guy). But I’m always nervous when I do so. It never feels right. Any feedback, especially from other writers would be appreciated. Things like is the dialog believable? Does the woman sound too mature? Stuff like that.*

*Enjoy! (I hope!)*

01 In Charge

We had been on our third date, and I had decided I liked him well enough to go a step further. We started kissing on my couch in the living room of my apartment. Always the gentleman, he allowed me to set the pace. And soon enough I was stroking him through his trousers.

I broke our embrace, “Take off your pants”. Quickly Karl stood and dropped his trousers around his ankles.

“Underwear too!”

My [M] Domme[F] likes ass play.

My owner is very much into anal, both giving, and oddly, receiving. Whenever she is in the mood (Sex is NEVER something I am allowed to initiate), she will stroke and tease me to an erection. If I’m not lying down, she will push me onto my back and mount my face. Mostly, she masturbates with my face, though I try to lick and kiss whatever part of her my tongue can reach, unless she tells me to lay still. She might have two or three orgasms in this way.

She then slides off of me and down to my dick. Facing me, she will produce a tube of lubricant and grease me up, stroking me in such a way that I feel that I am about to burst. Then she smiles and lubes up her asshole.

“Good boys don’t come without permission, and you won’t get permission!” Sometimes I just nod an affirmative, other times, I will say something like, “yes ma’am, I want to be a good boy”. It all depends on how I read her mood.