This is the third story I’ve made, please tell me anything i need to improve on.
“RIIIING!”
“RIIIING!”
“Hey, I’m on my way. You can stop calling already” Hazel says.
“Well could you hurry up, me and rose have been waiting for a while. All that’s here are those two weirdos from chem.” Victoria says.
“The ones that sit in the back?”
“Yeah, they kept gushing about the tutor so we stepped outside.”
“What’s their problem? Fucking each other not enough anymore?”
“I’d put money on that bet. Hey, I thought you stopped driving that old truck.”
“I did. I’m driving a sedan now.”
“Well, someone just pulled into the parking lot. Get here soon, gotta go.”
Hazel puts away her phone and drives for another 10 minutes to the school. She parks her car and walks into the school. Inside 2 women were sitting down, kissing each other. Hazel walks to the other side of the room and sits down. She pulls out her phone and sends a text to Hazel.
“Where are you?”
No response. She sits there waiting, the room is filled with the sounds of sloppy kisses. After a few moments, Hazel gets up and walks over to the girls. “Hey, freaks.” She says as she shakes 1 woman’s shoulder. They turn and look at Hazel with a grin. “when is the tutor showing up?”
Hazel asks.
“Miss Carter?” They say in sync.
“Um, sure…”
“She’s prepping some new girls at the moment.” The first woman says.
“She’ll be done in a few.” the second woman says. “You can wait with us if you’d like!”
“Alex!” the first woman whispers, hitting the second woman. “I know it’s hard but-”
They freeze looking at Hazel.
“We shouldn’t be talking about this around you. Miss Carter will explain it for you.” The first woman says.
“Whatever, just wake me when this is over with.” Hazel says, walking back to her chair.
Hazel closes her eyes and drifts off to sleep. She sleeps for half an hour and is woken up by a large bang. She sits up and the two women scramble, fixing each other’s clothing. The sound of heels clamping down the halls grows louder and louder as the two women try their best to look innocent.
“Miss Carter!” The two women say.
Miss Carter walks around the corner and greets the girls. Rose and Victoria follow behind her with big smiles stamped on their faces. They sit down next to the two women. Miss Carter turns to Hazel and smiles.
“Hazel, it’s good to see you came.” She says as she walks closer.
“Sure, so I have a question,” Hazel says.
“Don’t worry hun, all your questions will be answered. Just follow me.”
Hazel gets up carefully and follows Miss Carter.
“Emily, sweetie!” Miss Carter says.
The first woman gets up in excitement. “Yes?”
“You may tag along this time.”
Emily jumps in excitement and runs down the hall with Miss Carter and Hazel. She holds Miss Carter’s arm and looks back to steal some glances of Hazel. Hazel glares at Emily as she looks at her, but this doesn’t sway Emily’s interest.
“You got a staring problem?” Hazel whispers
Emily giggles. “Just a bit excited.” She says.
“What are you two up to?” Miss Carter asks.
“Nothing…” Emily responds.
Miss Carter stops and turns to Emily. She put her hands on her hips as their eyes make contact. “Don’t lie to me. You don’t want to miss this opportunity again. Do you?” She says.
“I-I was… I was staring…” Emily admits.
Miss Carter sighs. “Go sit with the others.” she commands.
“No! Please, I’ll be good! I promise!” Emily begs.
“Go! Now!” Miss Carter yells.
Emily lets out a few sobs before walking away. “Sorry about that.” Miss Carter says as she begins to walk again.
“Her and that Alex are still so vulnerable. I should wait a bit longer before I let them help teach a lesson.” Miss Carter says
“You have students. That teach your lessons…” Hazel says.
“When they are ready, when they have learned so much what more can you do other than help others.”
“If they are so smart, why do they come to tutoring.”
“They do what I just said hun, they teach others. I haven’t had any helpers this year yet but Emily is ready to be one.”
Miss Carter opens a door to a classroom and holds it for Hazel “she just needs a bit more lessons.” Miss Carter says walking in after Hazel. She closes the door and guides Hazel to a desk. “Enough about her, how about you?” She asks.
“What about me?” Hazel says taking a seat.
“Well, your friends told me you all don’t want to be here. Said you were all falling behind.” Miss Carter says.
“Yeah, Miss Bowie told us we had to go to these classes until our test scores improve.”
“Well, I’ll have you know. There are other ways to get your scores changed.” Miss Carter says.
“Like what?” Hazel asks hesitantly.
“Well, you still have to come to tutoring…” Miss Carter says before stoking Hazel’s Shoulders. Giving her a massage. “But I’ll make it worth your time…” She says.
“I’m not sure about this…” Hazel says.
“Your friends are. They even convinced each other of doing it.” Miss Carter says. “And if it’s good enough for them…” She slides her hand down Hazel’s body and slips it into her pants. “It’s good enough for you…”
“I-i guess…” Hazel says, weakly. Her head started to throb as Miss Carter kept talking. Miss Carter slowly starts to finger Hazel, making her moan. “Y’know, you’re a tough nut to crack hun…” Miss Carter says. She starts to fondle Hazel’s breasts. “But I love a challenge…”
Hazel’s mind went into a spiral, “what was going on? Was this right? It feels right. Everyone thinks it’s right. Maybe it is…” Hazel could only produce soft moans in this state. She felt every moment of pleasure but couldn’t feel the world around her, the only other thing she understood was miss carter.
“Tell me, hun, are you a virgin?” Miss Carter says. “Nooo…” Hazel says. Miss Carter on Hazel’s lap, looking down at her. “Shame, but you can still be so useful…” Miss Carter says.
“Useful? I’m useful? I’m useful to Miss Carter. She is all I need to be useful for.” Hazel’s mind spins again. Miss Carter takes off Hazel’s pants, exposing her wet panties. “You’re so sensitive, I like that…” she says, putting her leg in between the girl’s legs. She takes off her shirt to reveal her breasts. “Not wearing a bra, are we? Well, I’m glad you’re used to it already…” She says. She rubs the girl’s body, finally taking off her panties and throwing them to the side. She kisses Hazel’s body, making sure to take her time on her sensitive areas. Hazel’s moan grows louder as they go on. She almost climaxes before Miss Carter puts a finger to her lips, stopping her moans.
“Sorry hun, but no orgasms today…” Miss Carter says. Hazel tears up a bit, feeling herself about to reach her peak. “I want you to cum as much as you did when you lost your virginity. I want to have that experience for myself…” Miss Carter says pushing against Hazel. “P-p-please…” Hazel cries. “Not today hun, from now on you can not cum until I say so…” Miss Carter giggles. “And every little thing I do to you till then, adds to it…” She says.
Hazel cries, wanting to cum badly. Miss Carter only giggles and kisses Hazel, which arouses her more. “No crying… just relax…” Miss Carter says. Hazel slowly calms down as Miss Carter plays with her. Miss Carter kisses Hazel and brushes her hair behind her back. “Tilt your head a bit hun.” Miss Carter says. Hazel complies and tilts her head to the side.
Miss Carter licks Hazel’s neck, sucking on it a bit. “Hun, one last thing…” Miss Carter says. “Everything i do next, I want you to feel your pleasure double…”
“Y-yes… Miss…” Hazel moans. “Misstress hun, i’m your misstress now…” Miss Carter says. “Miiistreees…” Hazel moans.
Miss Carter licks Hazel’s neck making her squirm in her seat. Miss Carter then bites into Hazel’s neck. Hazel gasps and squirms violently. Miss Carter sucks the blood from Hazel’s neck. Hazel moans loudly, trying to grip everything around her. Miss Carter lets go of Hazel. Hazel falls back breathing heavily.
“Soo tasty…” Miss Carter moans. She bites her wrist and brings it to Hazel’s mouth. “I think I’ll have Emily play with you for a while. She’ll get you ready for me…” Miss Carter says. Hazel licks at the wrist, getting just enough blood so she can turn. “Hazel hun, can you stand?” she asks getting off of Hazel. Hazel tries to stand but falls to the floor. “Noooo…” Hazel moans.
“How about you are a part of today’s lesson. How to make a victim feel good.” Miss Carter says, “you’re gonna love feeling everyone tease you.”
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/siajep/tutoring_lessons_pt2_ff