This is the third story I’ve made, please tell me anything i need to improve on.
“RIIIING!”
“RIIIING!”
“Hey, I’m on my way. You can stop calling already” Hazel says.
“Well could you hurry up, me and rose have been waiting for a while. All that’s here are those two weirdos from chem.” Victoria says.
“The ones that sit in the back?”
“Yeah, they kept gushing about the tutor so we stepped outside.”
“What’s their problem? Fucking each other not enough anymore?”
“I’d put money on that bet. Hey, I thought you stopped driving that old truck.”
“I did. I’m driving a sedan now.”
“Well, someone just pulled into the parking lot. Get here soon, gotta go.”
Hazel puts away her phone and drives for another 10 minutes to the school. She parks her car and walks into the school. Inside 2 women were sitting down, kissing each other. Hazel walks to the other side of the room and sits down. She pulls out her phone and sends a text to Hazel.
“Where are you?”