Step Sister Corruption Question [fictional, question]

To my avid readers,

I’m toying with the idea of maybe doing a special chapter that’ll delve into the mind of my new character Sabrina. Mind you that chapter won’t come up until high 140’s low 150’s as I’ve already made chapter plans up until then.

I know I’ve done chapters through the eyes of the Ginger, Summer and Kelly.

What do you avid readers think?

Leave your thoughts below.

Also if you have chapter *suggestions* please put it down below and I might try to incorporate it.

Please be inputting only for Step sister Corruption and none of my other series.

Thank you and I look forward to your feedback.

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/nsim77/step_sister_corruption_question_fictional_question

8 comments on “Step Sister Corruption Question [fictional, question]

  1. When you say ginger do you mean have or am I forgetting a past character

  2. Keep doing what your doing and ill keep reading. Sabrina for me is a character that I can definitely see evolving but I am not totally fond of. Also more brynn would be good which I think we may be getting in the next few chapters.

  3. Definitely, especially if she’s going to become more of a main character rather than a “guest feature”.

  4. i don’t think I’d like her viewpoint as she is right now. I figure it would just be running commentary on how slutty/whoreish the things she has done were. If between now and 150ish she evolves to be more comfortable and free it might be nice for her to have a retrospective on how she has changed and how she feels about it!

  5. I like her as a side character, kind of like gave, Kelly, and summers classmates. I see the character developing but more in a Morgan style of character where she’s king of always around but never really gets a viewpoint of her own. I feel like the story is already spread out over enough main characters that adding many more might spread it a little thin, as it is already it’s a very slowed down pace from what it was. Don’t get me wrong, great story and love the character building but any more points of view in my opinion might just make it a little bit to slow for me. Keep up the great work though, been following since the start and very entertained, might read the whole thing though again for fun.

  6. Well thank you avid readers for your input on a *possible* chapter where you would get to see through the eyes of Sabrina.

    All of you made great points but I think one of you kind of hit the nail on the head that having a series only focus on the main characters of Summer, Kel and Gabe should be key. While it has been fun writing through the eyes of the Ginger mom she isn’t the main focus she having her come in and out has been few and far in between to where it’s nice to see her every so often but added the view from any of the side characters might be stretched too thin.

    So thank you everyone for your input.

  7. I can’t speak for the others but I don’t really care about Sabrina. I would love more about Ginger and the professor’s daughter. Also what’s going on with the lab experiments?

  8. I feel like a family getaway could be nice sub plot while Summer is out with Morgan

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