The Business Deal – Part 15 – [MF][MF][Seduction][Cheating][Non-Consensual Consent][Swapping]

Part 15

“Lily, Sun, would you mind if we just had some time to ourselves to clean up?” Jon asked

“Whatever you wish sir. It was a pleasure sharing this time with you,” Lily said.

“The pleasure was all ours. Thank you very much for everything.”

Lily and Sun left the room and closed the doors gently behind them. Jon took Ellen‘s hand and walked her to a side bathroom that held the shower. He got the temperature just right and stepped in pulling her after him.

“Is everything OK?” Ellen asked.

“I just wanted some time with you alone,” Jon replied.

Jon took the soap and slowly began lathering Ellen’s body. He did so in an attentive manner but not in a sexual way. Ellen followed his lead and they methodically rinsed themselves of the nuru gel. After a final rinse, Jon we’re standing very close to Ellen. He reached out his hands and placed them on her sides.

Jon pulled her close so the front of their bodies pressed against each other softly, intimately. The only sound was that of the shower and the water reading upon the dark shower tiles. Jon just looked into Ellen’s face, his eyes roving about her. He brought a hand up to brush the hair out of her face that the shower water had pushed down.

Ellen was silent, wondering what was going on in Jon’s mind. For all of the sexual excitement between her and Jon and between her and the people here at the club, this is the moment that she remembered most later on. Closeness, tenderness, the loving way his eyes searched her face for whatever he was looking for. The world has melted away nothing existed except the two of them at that moment in

“What are you thinking?” Ellen asked.

Jon remained quiet. He did not answer her for a few seconds and then stretched that silence into a couple of minutes. She felt his arms move. They encircled her into an embrace that she returned. They’re warm wet bodies pressed against each other tightly. Without words, they shared all that it happened over the past 24 hours or so. Wordlessly, they stood there for several minutes.

“I know I have already told you this once, but I wanted to tell you again how much I appreciate everything that you’ve done,” Jon said.

“Of course, Jon,” Ellen replied. “Anything I could do to help.”

“I’d say you did a lot more than just help. You kept me together from really losing myself.”

“I hope I was able to give you that support. I love you both so very much.”

“Ellen…” Jon’s voice trailed off.

Ellen loosened her in embrace so that she could look Jon in the face.

“Yes Jon? What is it?”

Jon seemed to struggle with the words. He finally said, “Do you know what else Maia has in store?”

“No, I don’t. I would have no doubt if she found another couple for us or pulled two or three of her best girls out and had them take care of you all night.”

Jon was silent again before he responded.

“Ellen… Can we just go home now?”

“Of course Jon. Is everything all right?”

“It’s just… I haven’t been able to be with you tonight. And that’s all I want. I just want to be with you.”

With the shower running Jon could not see Ellen’s eyes tear up. The entire time she was with Nolan she felt detached. Nolan was a very kind lover and she enjoyed the time with him. But she had to really shut out which she knew Jon was doing and then to hear them so loudly was a deep cut. Their time with Lily and Sun was sort of time together but she still felt like she was detached. She had focused so much on taking care of Jon in an even way, like what she imagined Tami was asking, she never thought gave much thought to anything else.

“Yes Jon. I would like that very much as well.”

“I hope Maia doesn’t get too upset. I’m sure she really pulled out the stops for me, for us. It’s just…”

“Just what?”

“I think….I think I made some mistakes. I think I really fucked up and I kind of feel really lost, like, a lot of this stuff it’s just not me. And I mean this has nothing to do with you at all. Every moment I’ve had with you has been incredible. It’s just… I don’t think I should have come here. And as cool as Anna was, I think that was something I shouldn’t have done. It felt good at the time but I was angry and hurt. And I’d like to think that it’s the same for Tami. I’m sure she had to do some things that she didn’t want to do. I know her, I know what she’s done in the past. But…I don’t know if this was all what she had in mind. I don’t know.”

Ellen fought back additional tears. She completely understood, but it didn’t make it any easier to hear him saying it. She didn’t realize fully what the risks were Friday. she still would’ve made the same decision even knowing the consequences, but it hurt all the same. That some part of him probably felt like she was a mistake.

“I’m upsetting you. I’m saying this all wrong. I’m sorry. Shit. I’m sorry. I wasn’t meaning to hurt you.”

“No, Jon, it’s fine. I know the deal. It’s just really hard having gotten to know you this well and I don’t know how, if I can, turn it off. I would never get in the way of you two. You’re my friends, my dearest friends. But please don’t think that this was a mistake. I don’t think I could handle that.”

“What? Mistake? No! No no no no, Ellen, shit, no, that’s not what I meant. Christ, Ellen…”

Before he could finish there was a loud knock on the door.

“Come in,” Jon said.

It was Maia. She swept in and then closed the doors behind her.

“Jon! Ellen! Quit hiding out in here. I have some people for you to meet outside. I’ve told them all about you.”

“Hold on a second. We’re just finishing the shower. Will dry off and come out.“

“Alright but make it quick.“

Jon turned off the water and they dried themselves quickly. They put on robes that were hanging on some hooks just outside the shower stall and walked out to talk to Maia.

“There you two are. Hurry up and get some clothes on. Actually, you probably won’t be needing them for too long so just come out like that. Victoria and Kevin aren’t wearing much more.“

Jon looked slightly embarrassed but finally spoke up to her.

“Thank you Maia. I really appreciate everything. But I think I want to take Ellen home now. I really want to spend some time with her alone.”

“What? But Jon, I had plans to finally make you my little plaything tonight. It will be so much fun. For both of you. Ellen, I found a lovely man with a lovelier package. All yours!”

They laughed a little. “Thank Maia, that’s very kind. I think I’ve hit a point where I just need to be in my space.”

Maia looked at Jon in an annoyed tone, but also looked at the way Ellen wouldn’t meet her gaze. Something was going on and she didn’t want to jump in the middle. Perhaps it was time to let them be to some degree.

“Jon, I completely respect that and understand. No one ever forced here. But please. Stay and just relax, you and Ellen. Together. Have some drinks. Some dancing. And I have a room ready for you to spend the night. No pressure at all. But I’ve missed you so much. Compromise? Ok?”

“Well…”

“Yes Maia. We’ll stay,” Ellen replied. She looked at Jon. “No offense but the house is a mess.” She smiled as she said this. “Let’s just enjoy an evening out for a bit then we can get some sleep. Head back tomorrow morning.”

“Alright,” Jon said, smiling. “For you.”

“Well if you won’t let me get you naked then get dressed and come out. I have to go break some hearts.”

Maia left and Jon looked at Ellen ready to finish their conversation, but she held her hand up and placed her finger on his lips.

“No, I’m done with that Jon. I can’t anymore. Not right now. Please. Let’s just do what Maia said. We can talk later.”

Jon thought of saying something, anything. But he saw the look in her eyes. He had screwed up and had to let it lie for now.

“Ok, but maybe later.”

“Sure. Maybe. No promises.”

They finished dressing and returned to the main room. The next hours were fun. Simply fun. No pressures from anyone. They did see some outrageous acts and erotic displays but they did not participate in anything.

They finally retired to their room. Jon silently undressed Ellen and she did the same for him. They lay together entwined, not speaking. Their hands wandered aimlessly with small touches and strokes. At some point, Jon turned to Ellen and kissed her. It continued and they made love, sweetly and passionately. It wasn’t long. Just enough to be close. To finish this chapter of their own lives. When they were done they held each other in bed.

“Thank you. For everything,” Jon said.

“Thank you as well, Jon. I had a lovely time.”

“I have no idea what will happen tomorrow. Today? Whenever.”

“I do.”

“What?”

“We’ll wake up and be together. Then breakfast. Then lunch. Some cleaning. Some reading. Anything but sex. I just want to be with you like that. When Tami comes home I’ll give you space and we can talk later. It will be ok.”

“Ok, I can do that.”

“Sleep now. But Jon?”

“Yes Ellen?”

“Don’t let go of me tonight. Always hold me. All night. Please?”

“Yes Ellen. All night. Goodnight.”

——————————-

Tami watched the waves crash one after another. The rhythm was hypnotic and calming. The sun was just beginning to creep up through the clouds over the ocean, turning their color from dark gray to warmer reds and yellows. Tami had been unable to sleep so she had walked to the beach and sat in the sand to clear her mind. It wasn’t working.

It was Sunday. Today she goes home. Today she sees Jon and they start to figure this out. Figure out how they get their lives back together. If they can. So many unknowns to consider and find a solution for today. It was overwhelming so she tried to blank it all out of her mind as best she could.

My god, how did I get here? she thought. A couple of weeks ago my only concern was a barbeque with the neighbors. Now I’m doing my husbands boss for money, I’ve had a foursome, a swap and pegged a woman. Holy fuck.

Tami shook her head and laughed at the incredulity of it all. Just amazed at the events of the weekend.

Waves continued crashing onto the sand. The ocean had been doing this day after day no matter what the stupid humans on the dry land were doing with all the games they played in their small amount of time. Endless waves shaping lands and beaches.

Tami wondered who she was. Who was she ever? Party girl one year, then Jon’s wife, then a plaything, now…what? She didn’t know. She replayed the events over and over and tried to find the moment when she should have gone left instead of right. There were a lot of moments, but nothing stood out in of itself. It all ended up with Jon fired or in jail. She didn’t have her a choice.

No, there was a choice. She made that choice. Any number of paths might have been available if she had just taken control of the situation, but she hadn’t. She gave in and let others control her. That was over, she decided. She was taking that back somehow. Just had to figure out how.

Her mind drifted back to last night. Not in a bad way, quite the opposite in fact. The way they touched her, the way they moved their bodies around her. She visualized the moment she entered Becca with the strap on. What a feeling. Is that why Stephen and Michael did all this? For that rush of putting their stupid penises in something? She couldn’t deny it was fun, but to go through all this effort? What a waste. Still, she would never forget that night. Never.

She didn’t want to forget. She split the experience into two and called it good. She would have been fine not to be there, not being an expensive escort. She would have loved her life just fine. Tami was angry with Stephen, disgusted by Michael, and enjoyed Becca. But…if she had to be there then what an experience. What a rush. And she wouldn’t be embarrassed about that anymore. It happened. She came here and it happened for whatever reason. Ok. Time to move on then.

Tami looked at the time on the phone. It would be the middle of the night back home so she figured Ellen would get the message she was about to send later in the morning. She wrote it out and hit send.

“Hey Ell. Almost done here. I’m not going to be doing anything else today. I’m done. Especially after last night. If Stephen has a problem then we’ll just have to figure that out. I’d say he got his money’s worth. Flying back later, be home by 6. Will be dropped off. Going to drink all night with Jon, then we can do that Monday night ourselves? Hope you guys are good. See you soon.”

Tami realized that they were likely lying in their bed together. Her bed. That made her shudder a little but she worked to accept it. She loved Ellen, but she’d be getting a new bed when she got home. Fuck, a new everything in their room to restart things. Lying there. Like a couple. Something she never got her time here. A small pang of anger hit her over this, but she quickly suppressed it. She didn’t want to walk down that path just yet.

Her phone buzzed. A call was coming in from Ellen.

Huh? That’s weird. She should be asleep. Worried that something was wrong she answered.

“Hey Ell, what are you doing up?”

“I was about to ask the same thing. Figured you were up pretty early.”

“Couldn’t sleep. Too much on my mind. Got a little but not enough. So I came down to the beach to think and figure shit out.”

“I was wondering what that noise was. Like static or something.”

Tami laughed. “No, not static. Waves. They just keep coming in and coming in. I love watching them.”

“I can imagine,” Ellen replied.

The conversation was stilted as neither expected to be talking to the other at this point so they were unprepared. There also seemed to be a distance between them that Tami heard in their voices. They were friendly but she didn’t detect anything warm in Ellen’s voice. Perhaps she was just tired and not catching her. After all, they were both up pretty early.

“I thought you’d get my message later on, sorry if I bugged you. But it’s good to hear your voice. I’ve missed you so much.”

There was a split second pause from Ellen’s end. “I miss you too Tami.”

Tami didn’t hear any emotion in Ellen’s voice. This troubled her.

“So,” Ellen continued. “What the hell was last night about? I got your message and it kind of freaked me out. Did Stephen really have another couple over?”

“Yeah, Michael and Becca. Mike is another big shot finance guy and I guess Becca is his girlfriend. She was me a couple of years ago but comes back on her own. Go figure.”

“Oh wow. That’s must have been awkward.”

“At first yeah, but over dinner they seemed real nice. Becca was super friendly and I think it was solely her that got me through the night. Michael…he was, uh…is I mean, is…a really nice guy, bit older and has a nice laugh.”

“Ok, weird that you make them sound like old friends. But whatever. So, what did you guys end up doing?”

Tami thought, oh you know, the usual. Came back, some drinks, made out with Becca, traded eating our pussies out, then got tag teamed by the guys, fucked Stephen within an inch of his life, then got blindfolded while they touched me, right before I rode Mike on the floor and Becca shoved a dildo up my ass and Stephen made me suck him off. Oh, and then we did it all over again and I fucked Becca’s ass right before both guys came on us. Then bed!

She told Ellen about the drinks and that was it.

There was a silence on both sides before Ellen spoke.

“Ok, well, it sounded like you freaked out and you guys were going to do a swap or something. Maybe threesome? So, bullshit, what really happened?”

Tami was quiet and tried to choose her words carefully.

“Well, it wasn’t quite a swap. It was more…groupish I guess. And I did end up having sex with Michael.” A long pause. Then she continued. “And Becca I guess. But I didn’t end up doing much and then got to bed for a while.” Would she keep asking questions?

“So, you did swap or not? What did you do?”

Tami paused again before speaking. “Well…I guess we swapped in that I went to bed with someone else besides Stephen.”

“Damn, Tami, that’s crazy. And he just sprung this on you?”

“Yes, had no idea until we got into the car for dinner.”

“Wow, alright. Pretty much like we figured.”

“What did you figure? You and Jon?”

“Well, you said swap and other couple. So I figured you were doing something pretty intense and crazy so I did what you asked and took care of him. And then later he kind of figured it out and he was pissed but he calmed down after a while.”

“How did he figure it out if you didn’t tell him?”

“Oh, well, when we went to Maia’s he just sort of put two and…..”

“You did WHAT?!?” Tami was flabbergasted that they had gone to Maia’s. She had figured Ellen would take care of Jon and stay home and that would be it. Going to Maia’s….that seemed a bit much.

Ellen was quiet for a few seconds as she realized that perhaps telling Tami about Maia’s was a mistake. This might have been what Jon was afraid of and she just made the big reveal.

“Um, well, yeah, we went to Maia’s.”

“Why the hell did you go there?”

“Well you were going to be with another couple and you said to make sure he gets what he needs to stay even or whatever.”

“That didn’t mean fucking Maia’s!! Jesus Ellen.”

“Well I’m sorry, I was trying to do what you asked and he…”

“I didn’t ask you to take him to a sex club and fuck a bunch of women.”

“Ok, first, yeah I took him there but Maia understood what was going on and thought she could help Jon…”

“You told her what was going on?? Jesus she’ll tell everyone!”

“No she won’t and I think you know that. She has to be discreet. She wouldn’t start blabbing things all over the place.”

“You know she has a serious crush on Jon, right?”

“Well, it didn’t come up beforehand, and in any case what if she did? He didn’t do anything with her. She said he was safe.”

They lapsed into silence again and each woman silently frustrated with the other.

That’s when Tami heard a noise in the background. A kind of thumping followed by what she thought was a laugh and woman’s voice.

“What was that? Who’s at the house at this hour? Oh my god, did you guys bring someone home? To my home?”

“No, of course not,” Ellen responded. “I had to step out of the room to not wake Jon and some people ran down the hallway, lord knows why, probably mostly stragglers at this time.”

Tami stared into the ocean trying to make sense of things. It was hard and she went back and forth between anger, rage, hurt, betrayal, you name it. She felt it.

“Stragglers? So then where the hell are you?”

“We’re still at Maia’s. She offered a room and we crashed.”

“YOU’RE STILL THERE?” Tami yelled into the phone.

Ellen sensed that everything was falling off the rails now. This was not what she expected. She thought Tami might be a little upset, but this anger was way more than she bargained for. Her initial reaction was to apologize and beg forgiveness. But then she realized Tami hadn’t revealed what happened at her place. It should have been just as much as her and Jon did, but how can she care anyway?

“Well, yeah, Maia didn’t want us to hit the streets driving so we just slept in a spare room and then Maia gave us…”

“Holy fuck, Ellen. How many women did he fuck then at the club?”

Ellen was starting to get annoyed amd even a little angry. Tami was taking a serious attitude about what had gone on at Maia’s and she wasn’t feeling it.

“Ok, first, you are going to have to calm the fuck down and stop with the yelling and shit. I don’t appreciate it.”

“YOU don’t appreciate it? I don’t appreciate you taking my husband to a sex club to fuck a bunch of women?”

“Well I’m sure he didn’t appreciate knowing you were about to get railed by another guy outside of Stephen and having no idea why or what was happening. And maybe he didn’t want to have to get another god damn phone call when you’re fucking him!”

Tami was stunned into silence. She knew in the back of her mind what she had done but had tried to block it out. She had no idea that Jon and Ellen knew what had happened though.

“What..what do you mean?” Tami said barely holding tears back.

“Jesus Tami.” Ellen paused. Then said, “I was with Jon when you called. We weren’t doing anything, sort of. I mean we had just finished but not doing anything. Ok, anyway, he had you on speaker. I heard the whole thing. I knew what you were doing and I am just…just fucking amazed at what you did.”

Tami was silent. Her mind raced at anything she could say to justify what had happened. It was bad enough Ellen knew what had happened, she would now never tell her that she had lost control and squirted after they hung up. That would be the end of everything she felt.

“I didn’t want him to do that. He was…fucking me from behind and…” the words were coming hard for her. She was trying to figure out what was too much and what would make things worse, but there was nothing good about it. “…and he had a blindfold on me so I couldn’t see anything. His wife calls and he answered while still…in me. He actually talked to her while he kept going. Then he hung up and said my turn. I said no way and next thing I know I hear the dial tone and heard Jons voice before I could think to do anything.”

“You could have just hung up. Or told him to stop and get off you and take the phone someplace else. But you didn’t. I don’t know. Maybe…maybe you got off on it.”

Ellen’s comment stabbed Tami through her guts.

“I didn’t get off on it and I didn’t want it to happen. I didn’t want anything of this to happen. I didn’t ask for anything of this. I just want to go home.”

“I know you didn’t Tami. I know, but this whole thing has been a train wreck from the beginning. It’s been really hard.”

“Oh it’s been hard? I hadn’t noticed.” Tami said sarcastically. “Being told your husband is going to be fired and you lose your home or he goes to jail unless you spread your legs and get fucked whenever he wants, yeah totally not hard.”

Ellen was quiet, but it was a quiet rage. She knew she had no place to say this, no real reason, but she had to say it and finally speak her mind. The anger and rage at everyone was hitting her. At Tami, sure, but also at Jon. Realizing what she had done for him only for him to essentially say it was a mistake. She was done.

“How about being asked at a moments notice to come over and spread your legs for your best friends husband and get fucked whenever he wants because his feelings are hurt that his wife chose to run off with his boss for a weekend.”

Tami felt slapped across the face. Hard.

“You asked me to do something really out there and you were hoping I’d do it based on our friendship. You relied on that, Tami. All the things we’d done. You pulled me in specifically to have sex with Jon, not just for him. But to make you feel better about your choice. It didn’t really occur to you what I’d feel after. When this is done you and Jon pick up the pieces. And I just go back home.”

Tami was speechless. There were no words she could form to respond to Ellen at that moment.

“So yeah. I did what I could. I got pretty creative, I thought, for short notice. And it was cool until your message about the other couple. Then I panicked. And I made a choice to take Jon to Maia’s. So I guess we both made choices in a panic that didn’t pan out so well.”

She stopped and could just hear what must be waves in the background.

“So, was he just with you or…anyone else?” Tami asked.

“Well Tami, it’s Maia’s. A lady named Anna, and I was with her husband Nolan. Great guy and was a lot of fun, although he didn’t appreciate Jon making Anna heard all the way across the whole club. And the nuru massage was something else so…”

No sooner than the words were out of her mouth than she realized her mistake. She had the moral high ground and she got cocky and rambled. It felt like she was taking to her friend about her own exploits and not those of her supposedly pining husband. Ellen had said too much for that moment. Maybe it would have been better later but not right then.

Tami stiffened at Ellen’s words. Anna. A name now. And he fucked the shit out of her. And then the Nuru. Jon’s fantasy. Taken. His…first. With someone else. All these men taking away her “firsts” against her will.

“Anna. Nuru. That’s great. That’s fucking great.”

“Tami, you listen to me. You listen good. I can hear it in your voice. You’re mad. You probably feel wronged. I get it. I do. But Jon has essentially been a sad fucking mess all weekend. He wants nothing more than to be with you. The ONLY reason he did anything was because I showed up and you made him promise to listen to me. And I listened to you. If you hadn’t, he would have sat in your house and just destroyed himself and…maybe even worse.”

Tami left her self pity just long enough to ask, “What? Is he ok? Did he…do anything? Oh god!”

“No, Tami, no, sorry. I just meant that’s how torn up he was. I was with him and it worked like you wanted. But the phone call really was hard. And Maia’s, that’s on me. He never asked. He never even thought about it. But once he saw that, he knew something else happened with you. He lost control. With Anna…all I’ll say is I think he took a lot of anger out on her. He let a lot out. And the Nuru, that was Maia’s idea. And yeah, that was bad I guess. But know this.”

Ellen took a deep breath and continued before Tami could say anything.

“Maia had more planned. But he stopped. He said no. He chose to stop and wanted to go home. He said it wasn’t him. That it was a mistake and he went too far. He stopped Tami. For you.” She didn’t add what Jon had said about going home with her or what happened later. “He loves you more than life itself and just wants you home. You had better not believe anything else or I will rip your tits off.”

Tami had a quick snort of laughter, even amongst all the pain. Ripping tits off was a joke going back to college. It was a way of saying, ok enough bullshit. This is the way it is, no more arguments or the other person will “rip the tits” off the other.

She got it. She wasn’t happy but she understood. Wasn’t she in the exact same position? Her mind went to entering Becca. To the phone call. To the beach. To…everything. It was all fucked up.

It was all true at the same time. She could be mad at being here, yet loved being with Becca and even a couple of things Stephen did. She could be hurt that Jon fucked Anna and yet love him so much still. Having this experience and yet wanting nothing more than to be home with the love of her life. Jon still was. Never anything else. But she could also be mad.

Mad at losing her agency. Her control. She was ashamed she whored herself out, but didn’t want to be ashamed anymore of the things she enjoyed. It was all true at the same time. A conundrum wrapped in an enigma served piping hot on a dinner plate.

“Ok ok. I get it, Ell. And for what it’s worth I am really sorry I got you in this mess. I just didn’t know who to turn to so quickly for something this huge.”

“It’s alright Tami. I can’t say I blame you. It’s just been hard. Jon can be a little whiny and mopey at times but really only when his boss seduces his wife. Outside of that he’s everything I thought he was. I think if we can limit the promotions by sex we should be good.”

They laughed at her joke. It broke the ice. They will always be friends. Always be family really. Tami knew they would probably be closer in the future as well. And that was all true.

“Deal. Next promotion Jon gets on his back and we go to a resort.”

“You got it!”

“Listen, I’ll let you go. I know it’s way early there. I’ve got some things to finish here and then I’m out. Then home to you guys.”

“Ok. Please travel safe. Any chance you want to tell me what you want to finish?”

Tami considered and finally said, “No. It’s something for me. Closure. A way of putting it all back into a box.”

“Mmm. That doesn’t sound too encouraging but I’ll let it pass. Maybe after a lot of wine later.”

“We’ll see. Bye Ell. See you soon.”

“Bye Tami.”

Tami hit the end button and was alone again.

For me. Something for me. She considered the time, her options and her future. She decided on two things. That would be the last of it. Then she was out.

She got up, brushed the sand from her body and walked back to the house as the first rays of her final day as the old Tami hit the beach.

Continues in Part 16

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3 comments on “The Business Deal – Part 15 – [MF][MF][Seduction][Cheating][Non-Consensual Consent][Swapping]

  1. Even though Jon playing with Ellen’s feelings while he’s married is pretty fucked up and tami and Ellen got into a fight, both parts had wholesome moments to them which I quite enjoyed reading after a bunch of back and forth stressful situations. I like how Jon comes to realize that fucking randos isn’t him (even though he wants to love on Ellen), but you get with what I’m saying that at least he recognizes that. I also like that tami is able to really think about everything in both her and Jon’s pov in which she feels for him and really remembers the actions that she did in how they are “equal”. It’s good that they both are able to realize that they fucked up in their actions and it’s good that they both did so that it’s not just tami looking like the bad guy, they both had their wrongdoings. Great job!

  2. I really get the feeling that tami thinks she can tow the line, and it won’t end well.

  3. Fantastic writing! My one concern is a saccharine sweet happy ending. Just too much has gone down to and between Jon. Ellen, and Tami for them to recover.

    Whatever happens, I can’t wait for the next chapter.

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