The Business Deal – Part 11 – [MF][MF][Seduction][Cheating][Non-Consensual Consent][Swapping]

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Part 11

Ellen woke from her nap, still naked against Jon. It was around 6pm. What woke her was a text notification.

She got up and went to get her phone. She saw it was from Tami and she was almost instantly awake. All her previous messages had led her further and further down a rabbit hole. What did she need now?

She clicked on the notification and the message popped up. Ellen quickly scanned the message and shook her head. No. No way. What the hell was going on? What the hell had Tami gotten herself into? What had she gotten herself into, thought Ellen. It was all spiraling so quickly. She reread the message and tried to make sense of it.

“Hey Ellen, so things are crazy right now. I don’t know what’s going on or how to explain it but I’m in way over my head and it keeps getting deeper. I can’t explain right now. I know I’ve said that a lot. Like I haven’t already. Please know how much I love Jon and that this is absolutely the worst thing, I’m sorry. I think Stephen is setting me up for a threesome or a swap or I don’t know what the fuck. Had dinner with some other couple and they went to the house. Stephen said some things. I think they got something planned and I’m worried. Worried I’ll feel something I shouldn’t. Remember Dylan sophomore year? Like that. I just know I love Jon more than anything and wish I was home. I can’t be. Ellen, please take care of Jon. Anything. Please. You’ll always be my friend, right? Please Ell. Just help me get through this. I’ll message you tomorrow. Thank you. Love you ell.”

Ellen looked at Jon still sleeping, spent from the afternoon. She wasn’t sure how he would take this. He would know pretty quickly what it meant. Maybe. Still, it was a huge deal and she considered her options quickly. Dinner and movie night was probably out. If Tami was really getting into a group thing…fuck. This was bad. She decided not to tell him just yet.

Dylan was one of Tami’s boyfriends sophomore year in college. He was trouble. Kind of pushed Tami around and into some things she wasn’t always comfortable with, but Tami loved him, and, more importantly, loved his dick. Ellen tried to get her away from him, but not before a night when Dylan had taken her home and his friend Kyle came over. One thing led to another and she had a threesome with them. They had worked her over pretty good from what Tami had told her. She said it was both exhilarating and tough at the same time. It had pushed her beyond boundaries. Later, she had adjusted to those boundaries and felt like she was changing in a weird way. In the end, it pushed her to end things with Dylan finally soon after.

So what could she do? Ellen couldn’t play house again with Jon. He needed something more. Something where he could have something intense and maybe even extreme so when Tami told him about what happened (if she ever tells him), he could have something to be on par. That is what Tami had wanted anyway in the first place. Keep them equal. So what would be equal?

That’s when the thought struck her. There was a risk. Jon would freak when he saw where they were going. He would make the connection to Tami right away and she would have to handle that when it happened. She looked at her watch. She would have to rush a bit and get there before too late. She could do it, but it would be tricky. She realized, though, that she would be doing it for Jon, not Tami. She loved Tami still, but the hurt of the phone call was still fresh. The incredible hurt it caused. So for Jon she would do this.

For Jon, she would take him to Maia’s sex club tonight.

Maia was a friend of theirs that they had met during college. She was a free and open spirit, sexually liberated during college and it was something that had bound them all. When they graduated, and Tami and Ellen settled into normal lives, Maia remained the same. Eventually, at lunch one day, they asked her what she was up to.

“Me and Matt are opening a sex club downtown in the warehouse district.”

Ellen and Tami almost choked on their lunch but Maia had explained everything fairy matter of factly. People like her and her partner Matt needed a safe and clean place and so she modeled it on a European club they had visited two years before. It would be luxurious and membership driven. A private club where anything went but was safe. Maia had invited them both to join and while they did for Maia’s sake it wasn’t a regular thing for them. Tami and Jon had gone a couple of times just to hang out but never engaged in any activities.

Ellen had gone a few times with a boyfriend here and there and had fun. She had a couple of threesomes, FMF and MFM. They were exciting, but her last boyfriend was not too into the club, so it had been a while. Maia’s was very popular and Ellen was worried she wouldn’t be able to get in on short notice. She had to try so she stepped outside and called her.

“This is Maia.”

“Hey, Maia, it’s Ellen. How’s it going?”

“Ellen! It’s been ages? How are you girl?”

“Doing good, as well as anyone I suppose. Listen, I know you got a lot going on but you got a minute?”

“Just a minute unfortunately, sorry. Getting ready for the crowd coming in tonight. What’s going on? You sound kind of off.”

“No problem, at least that answers my first question. You still have the club then?”

“Of course! I think there’d be riots if I were to ever shut this place down. There’s a lot of horny people out there. Are you looking at coming down?”

“Sort of yeah. Would you have room for me and a guest?”

“For you, of course! We open at 8 now, but most people don’t really come in until 9ish. It’s going to be a full night but I always leave wiggle room for last minute friends like you!”

“That’s awesome, thank you Maia, I appreciate it.”

“So who’s the lucky guy? Can’t be Brett, Mr. ‘I’m not going to some dungeon to watch old people fuck,’” she said in a deep mocking tone.

Ellen laughed. That was her last boyfriend that didn’t want to go and who she had dumped a while ago.

“No, not Brett. He’s history. It’s a new guy. Or an old guy, I guess.”

“A new old guy? An ex or something?”

“No, not like that.”

“Well no worries. You’re more than welcome. And call Tami for me. It’s been a while and I’d love to catch up with you guys tonight. And be sure she brings Jon with her. Maybe I can finally talk some sense into them.” Maia laughed at her own joke, which was mostly a joke.

Ellen was silent as she contemplated how to explain that it would in fact be Jon but not Tami tonight.

“Ellen? I’m sorry did I say something wrong? Oh god! Did they get divorced and I didn’t know?! Oh shit I am sorry about that.”

“No, no, it’s not that. They are together. Well, sort of.” Ellen was losing her nerve but was too far in to get out on her own.

“Sort of? What do you mean? Having problems?”

“Umm, not really but sort of…god I am terrible at this. Maia, I really need your help. I can trust you right?”

“The lady who runs the largest sex club in the state and has a lot of politically connected people attend that would kill me if it ever got out that they were here? Yeah, I think you can trust me. What’s going on? And the truth. What’s going on and how are Tami and Jon sort of but not really having problems?”

Ellen took a deep breath as she tried to figure out a way to explain everything. It took a moment and Maia waited patiently.

“Ok, so here’s the deal.” Another pause. “So. Jon’s boss made him a proposition. He wanted to spend the night with Tami in exchange for a promotion and huge bonus. Jon said no way. His boss said, ok you’ll be fired now. They just bought this house and they would lose it. Tami stepped up and told Jon she would do it. They argued, but she left with the boss on Friday. Except he tricked her and said actually he wanted a weekend. So she went for the weekend, but not before calling me and pleading with me to take care of Jon. And by take care of, I mean that…” deep breath, “I’ve fucked Jon all last night and today. But then today the boss made Tami call Jon while he was fucking her and Jon heard it all. Then they got off the phone and Jon is just ruined. That would have been enough but then I got a text from Tami saying something was going to happen tonight with the boss and one of his friends, which I took to mean there’s probably another guy, maybe a threesome or swap or some shit. She has been big on keeping it ‘even’ or something. So she asked me to take care of Jon, because I love Jon and her so much but now that I am actually doing it and calling you I am not sure if this was what I should do and I was going to give him a nuru massage tonight but now that’s spoiled and I’m freaking out and she could be getting spit roasted right now while Jon is hurting and I….”

“Stop!” Said Maia loudly.

Ellen stopped and was breathing rapidly. Her whole speech had come out in a torrent and she wasn’t sure what she had said and if it made sense.

There was silence except for some clinking going on from Maia’s side.

Finally, she spoke. “You are absolutely to bring Jon here tonight. I will take care of everything. You come with him, wear something nice, but I will take care of everything else.”

“I’m sorry for dumping this on you, I don’t even know if this made sense.”

“Ellen, I’ve seen everything. Everything. Typical big cheese guy power trip. They think money makes their shit and dick better, preying on people like that. The people I have come here, I interview them. I vet them. This place exists to get their rocks off without hurting other people like this boss of Jon’s is doing. Sometimes they get in, I don’t like it. I want people to be free with their bodies and sexuality, not forced open for someone else’s grins and giggles. I can accept that some people do this, ok. But this time it happened to someone I care about deeply. Did you know when I first wanted to make this club Jon got me investors?”

“No, I didn’t know that. He or Tami never said anything.”

“She knows. And it was a life saver. I owe him everything and I’m not going to let him down tonight. Just tell me one thing.”

“What’s that?”

“What’s Tami’s intention? Is this a one-time thing or will she have to do this once in a while to keep his job?”

“I don’t know. I know she wouldn’t have asked me to do this if she was planning on leaving him. I think she truly believes they can work this out.”

“OK, if she had just been doing this as a lark or not care about Jon then I wouldn’t let him come back to her. But…she was really forced into this? The boss threatened him?”

“That’s what she told me. I believe her. Her voice…it was so different. I’m sure she’s not being raped or assaulted or anything, but yeah. She said it would be bad if she didn’t go and she had to save what they had.”

“Alright. Wow. I never would have expected this from her, but the world is fucked up sometimes. Doesn’t matter. I live in the moment, you know that, and tonight it will be Jon’s moment. Tonight he will be a king, I can promise you that. Be here by 9 and bring a bag with a change of clothes for both of you. You’ll be staying all night.”

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The car arrived back at the vacation home and dropped off Stephen and Tami. There were lights on in the house and as Stephen opened the door she could hear a couple of voices. Michael and Becca must’ve already arrived and gone inside. Stephen walked into the house and began talking to the other couple.

Tami stayed at the entrance to the house. Her mind was a whirl of different emotions and thoughts. Despite everything that had already happened and everything she had done for Stephen to this point, she knew there was something much different about tonight. Something that would leave a lasting impression on her soul for the rest of her life.

She knew this had nothing to do with Stephen. She felt confident about being able to lock the experience with him away to not let it affect her marriage to Jon too adversely. Michael was another story though. For him, she felt an attraction and that was what worried her. Maybe the wine had acted her, but it was a boost, not a reason for the attraction. Under normal circumstances she would’ve noted the attraction and not given it another thought with the exception of maybe bringing his face up when she needed a small fantasy on her own. She never would’ve pursued something with him while she was with Jon under any normal circumstance.

This was not a normal circumstance. She had already whored herself out to Stephen and done things that she didn’t think that she could do. Tonight will be in an environment where Michael was available, willing, and she had already gone far down this path, her resistance to being with him much weaker.

Weaker, she laughed in her head to herself. Try nonexistent. She realized that there was no question she would be with Michael at some point. Either alone, in a threesome, or a small swap, she would be feeling him in her and…she wanted that. The problem she had was how she felt about it and how she would feel when she returned to Jon.

This actually felt like cheating because he wasn’t a part of Stephen’s coercion. She could say no to him she felt and not have any repercussions. However, she didn’t want to say no and if she was in for a penny she was in for a pound. She also laughed at that pun in that she expected to be pounded by both of them fairly soon.

She knew that it would be important to rationalize what she was about to do in order to be able to leave this here when she left. Michael was from another state completely so she had no fear of running into him locally, but what if he visited? What if he called? What if he arranged for her to come to him? Would she be able to resist?

She thought of Jon as she always does. All the things that they had planned to do, the home that they had finally purchased. These things were real and these were the things that she wanted above all. It helped that Jon was still a much better lover overall than what Stephen has shown her. It wasn’t as if something was missing and she was finally going to get it. She had everything. So why did she feel that she needed Mike?

Being with Stephen had changed her sexual needs and appetite in ways that she did not anticipate. She had thought it would be a fuck for a night and then back home. Even after realizing it would be a weekend she knew that it was just sex and that Stephen didn’t care for her and she did not care for him. Sure she had orgasms that anybody could have those when properly stimulated. I didn’t mean she wanted to have them anymore with him or that she would think about them too much.

Yet, Michael still hung there in front of her. This was something that she would remember she felt. Something that would always be there in her mind. She needed to grasp onto something, some emotional anchor in order to be able to come out of this with her marriage intact and her soul mostly intact as well.

She finally settled on the fact that Michael obviously knew that she was married and that Stephen must do this fairly often. He was a willing accomplice in Stephen‘s game. Therefore, he was definitely not the dreamboat handsome older businessman that she would pine for. In the end, despite his attractiveness he was really no better than Stephen. She did not gather from Becca how they had ended up together, perhaps she had also taken an offer and clung to him like Stephen said the other woman had done with him.

Tami could feel the slight change in her attitude. Yes, that was it, she thought. I can be attracted to Michael but in the end he’s really no different. A man willing to lie, cheat, coerce, and pay to be with another man’s wife and not have any compunctions. She could let what would happen happen and then be able to wash it off like she would wash Stephen off. He was a part of the contract she had signed and it would be nothing more.

In this extreme circumstance, she decided to believe all of that.

She summoned every ounce of love and trust into her mind and told herself that this was for both of them and that she really did have no choice in the end. Fired, jail, no future. At least now they had a chance. She thought of some semblance of vengeance against Stephen eventually. But would that vengeance make up for all that she had done and all that she would do tonight?

Her final thought before she stepped over the threshold and into an evening that she could not anticipate, was not a confident one, rather, a desperate plea.

Please let me be right about this. And with that, she stepped through the doorway and closed the door with a soft click. She turned and began to walk down the hallway to the other voices.

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Ellen shook Jon a couple of more times until his eyes finally opened.

“Hey sleepyhead, do you wanna get up this afternoon or what?”

“Man, how long was I out?“ Jon stretched and set up on the bed next to Ellen.

“Not too long,“ Ellen replied. “But I don’t want you to slip away the whole evening. We’ve got a lot to do.“

“Oh yeah? And what do we have to do besides have a little dinner and get back into this bed all evening.“

“Well if you have to know…I’m not gonna tell you.“

“Oh ho! So that’s the way it’s going to be.“

Jon grabbed Ellen and pulled her back down to the bed and rolled himself on top of her. Ellen squealed a little bit with laughter but was quickly silenced by Jon’s mouth as he kissed her passionately. They made out for a few minutes before Ellen was able to pull herself together.

“ OK OK. I do have something in mind but that’s a surprise.“

“Considering the surprises I’ve already seen I think this is when I should probably just shut up then follow your lead.“

“Now you’re getting it,“ Ellen said. “Just follow my lead and you will have a great time. First things first. Get in the shower while I pick out some clothes for you.”

“Shower alone? That doesn’t sound like a great deal.“

“Just take your time a little and I’ll see you in there. Just want to get a headstart.”

“Hmmm. Ok, but don’t take too long.”

Jon stood up and walked into the bathroom, closing the door. Ellen sat quietly on the bed. Tami and Jon’s bed. It would be impossible to try and describe all the thoughts going through Ellen‘s head at this moment. She was trying desperately to focus only on the small things that she had in front of her, including getting Jon ready to go to Maia’s.

With a great sigh Ellen closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and stood up and went to a dresser. She opened it and found it was Tami ‘s. She sighed again before closing it and going into another drawer. In this one she found several pieces of Tami‘s lingerie collection. She smirked at some of them as she had been with Tami when they were purchased. It was bittersweet knowing the effort that Tami and her had put into selecting something for her and Jon to share, only for this to be sitting unused and cold while she did God knows what with another man.

Considering it would take too much time for Ellen to get over to her own house to get ready, she decided she would borrow some of Tami‘s own clothes, including some of the more frilly lingerie. She searched until she had found but she was looking for. A red satin set that Tami had purchased last January for Valentine’s. It was a two piece semi corset and panty set. Ellen was just a little bit bigger in the bust then Tami so it would be a tight fit, but she could make it work for the short time she expected to be wearing it.

She then went into the closet and found a red dress that she knew Tami kept for extremely special locations. She hoped Jon would not freak out when he saw her wearing it but would approach that when she had to.

She found Jon‘s clothes and rummaged through until she found a suitable outfit for the evening. He didn’t have any type of sexy lingerie but his black Calvin Klein boxer briefs would have to do. She put him in an all black suit, white shirt, and red tie. She always believed a man’s well done suit was the same as lingerie for a woman. Ellen laid these things out on the bed and then went into the shower to enjoy Jon.

“I was wondering if you were ever going to come out.”

“Just had to get a few things ready.”

“Do I get any kind of hint as to where we are going?”

“Nope. And if you keep asking questions you won’t be getting any of this.” And she reached out and grabbed his cock in her hand.

Jon sharply inhaled at her touch and fell silent. He was not a dumb man. Ellen would’ve liked to have done more, however she wanted to save him for the evening, much to his disappointment. She did stroke him a bit and went down on him but only let him get so far. Finally, she sent him off to get dressed while she tried to do something with her hair.

When Ellen emerged from the bathroom he was sitting there in his suit. She had seen him any number of times in a suit. While always being impressed, this was different. He wasn’t waiting in the living room with him while waiting for Tami to join them. He was dressed like this for her and that made her feel very different.

Jon saw the red outfit that Ellen was wearing and immediately recognized it. He opened his mouth to say something but quickly shut it. Ellen didn’t know exactly what to say at first either so they simply looked at each other for a minute.

“You look amazing,” was what Jon finally said.

“I didn’t have time to get home to find something myself. I hope you don’t mind since I’ve borrowed something from her for a night before.”

“Of course not. I’m glad she left that one here. The ones she left in was bad enough but…. I’m just glad you’re here to use it since…” he was almost stammering and Ellen just walked to him and held his face in her hands. She kissed him to shut him up.

“They are just clothes, Jon. It’s me inside them and you in this suit. That’s all that matters right now. Got it?”

Jon swallowed hard and said, “Got it.”

“Good. Let’s go get a light dinner. I’m thinking Tommy’s, they have lots of great small dishes.”

“Sure,” said Jon. “Light dinner, huh? Ok, I’m not asking anything, but sounds like something physical might be coming up.” He grinned from ear to ear.

Ellen smiled as well, but was torn inside. He seemed happier and brighter. Whatever had happened this afternoon seemed to have been put behind for now.

Only for me to wreck it again soon, thought Ellen. But that can’t be stopped now. In fact, this whole thing, which seemed like it would take forever, would be over with within the next 24 hours for better or much worse. Just have to make the best of it right now.

They got into Jon’s car and they drove to Tommy’s, a bistro near downtown that they had visited often. They sat by a window and ordered some drinks and began to talk about anything but Tami and what she was doing. Jon and Ellen laughed and drank and ordered several plates of food. Ellen was having the time of her life. As much as she knew Jon, he was still surprising her. She had to catch herself more than a few times as she actually saw themselves as a couple rather than just friends. It was bittersweet, but she was taking the sweet as best she could.

It was now almost 9 as they had talked away the evening. Ellen knew it was time to go. She asked for the check and Jon gave the waitress his card.

“I’ve had a fantastic evening, but I hope we still got some fun things planned,” he said with a smirk.

“Oh we do. I promise you that. Hope you aren’t planning on falling asleep before 2am at the least.”

“Whoa! 2am, that does sound like someone’s got some plans. I think I will just throw myself at your mercy. What do you have this time? Sexy cop that arrests me? Sexy nurse to take my temperature?”

“You wish! No, something much better. Promise.”

“Well, after this afternoon I trust you implicitly. My heart and soul and…other parts of me are all in your hands.”

“Perfect. Then you are all mine, big guy.”

The waitress returned with his card and they left soon after. As they got into the car, Ellen turned to him.

“So, before you start, we aren’t going back home, not right away.”

“Ok, sounds interesting, although you may just be delaying my ravishing of you by only minutes.”

“Well, you say that…”

“Uh oh, what do you have in mind? Sounds dangerous.”

“Just head down the street and turn left onto 12th.”

“Um, ok, can I…” Ellen cut him off.

“No, you can’t. Just drive,” Ellen said.

“Ma’am yes ma’am!” Jon laughed again and started down the street.

They started down the street and soon turned onto 12th. Jon was smiling the whole way. Once on 12th, Ellen told him to make a left in four blocks. This was a business area, an older industrial area, safe, but without anyone around.

Jon lost his smile, and was more bewildered than anything, until he saw the street name where he was to turn. He slowed and furrowed his brow as it didn’t click with him right away where he was. However, when he did turn on the street he could see the destination up ahead where other cars were turning into a driveway through a wall that ran around a large yard and building.

Jon immediately slowed and pulled to the side of the street and put the car into park. He sat and stared straight ahead, looking at the cars entering Maia’s parking lot. There was silence in the car as Ellen remained quiet. The trum of the car’s engine was the only noise that could be heard.

Finally, Jon spoke without moving his head.

“So. She ask you to take me here or is this your idea?”

“My idea.”

There was additional silence.

“Did she say if she was going to a club herself then?”

“No, she wasn’t. I know that.”

“But she was doing something where you felt taking me to Maia’s would be equal or ok to do.”

Ellen paused trying to figure out what to say. “Something like that. I don’t know that part exactly, but this seemed like the best idea.”

Another couple of minutes passed. Ellen was starting to question everything now and worried that this would turn into a disaster.

“Does she…does she still love me? Does she still want to come back, to be with me?” Jon asked difficulty, through a broken voice.

“Oh, Jon, yes, absolutely yes. You have to understand she has made that clear. Perfectly crystal clear. This is not easy for her or you, it’s not fair. Not in any way. But above all, she wants you more than anything.”

Jon waited. “Why?”

“Why what? Which part?”

“All of it. Why did she say yes? Why did she suddenly say yes to a weekend without talking to me? All she said was there was a change and she had to do this and she couldn’t explain. Just to trust her. By that point what could I do? She was already gone. My boss was going to fuck her crazy. I know the stories about him. He’s talked about what he does with women. There’s no way she’s coming back without always thinking about fucking him over me. And I have to see that smug prick every day now. He knows if I quit then the cost of him fucking Tami was almost nothing. If I stay, then he can force her to be with him again and again and I’m a fucking cuckold. A laughingstock in the office. He’ll tell everyone. I know he will. Why? What did I do that she ran off with him?”

“That’s not it at all Jon. She did not leave you for him. She is not happy in any possible way. She wants nothing more than to come back to you and be with you. Only you. Forever.”

“Yeah, sure. And yet here we are at Maia’s.”

“Jon, I am going to tell you something, Tami didn’t say not to tell you, but I am going to since I trust and…” Ellen almost said ‘love you’ but caught herself. “…believe in you.”

Jon finally turned to her. “What?”

Ellen sighed deeply and faced him. “Tami told me that when she got into the car, Stephen showed her some papers. The papers showed that you had stolen money and done other things and that if she didn’t go with him for the weekend he would show them to authorities and get you arrested. She had seconds to decide what to do or he would call someone at the office and have them sent. So she had to make a decision right then and that was it.”

Jon was quiet but his stare was daggers. Ellen almost felt afraid, she had never seen this look on his face before. It was another few seconds before Ellen spoke again.

“You have to understand what pressure that is. And you have to also understand how she could do this. Women are always pushed and pushed in some way or another. Tami and I dated a lot before you guys met. She’s told you about some things she’s done and you’ve been ok with it because it was her past and she did a lot of that and more with you herself. In her mind, as I would do in mind, this guy is no different than some drunk frat guy. Yeah, you hook up, maybe he cared enough to get you off, it may have almost been fun, but when it’s done you blank it out of your mind and move on. He’s just a memory that you don’t think about. He isn’t worth it no matter what he did in bed. I don’t know if this helps. Maybe you’ve done the same with a bunch of girls back in the day. I don’t know. I’m not going to assume. But I can tell you, we have had bad situations where we got through it and then put it all away and moved on. I know her. When she gets back it will be done. She won’t be pining for him or anything. It will be done and I promise you, from what I get from her, this will never ever happen again. I promise.”

Jon was quiet through this all but no less mad. He turned and stared forward again, deep in thought. Finally, he spoke.

“You’re right. It won’t happen again. Stay in the car. I need to make a call.”

“Jon what are you going to do? Please don’t call her or Stephen. Nothing good will come of it right now.”

“I’m not calling him. I’m sure his dick is in some part of her right now. I’m calling someone else.”

“OK, I’ll wait.”

Jon got out and dialed someone. Ellen could not see him clearly as he walked behind the car and away from her. He was gone for several minutes. Ellen was starting to get worried when he returned to the car.

“Who did you call?”

“Doesn’t matter. I was just taking care of something. OK, let’s go to Maia’s. I don’t know what you have in mind, but tonight I am not who I was. I am up for anything tonight. I know she is either going to do a threeseome or something more, so I want that and more. It’s my time. It’s all I can do and we’ll just have to wait and see what happens tomorrow. OK?”

“OK, I’m sor…”

“DON”T SAY YOU’RE SORRY!” Jon said loudly, not quite a yell.

Ellen was startled into silence.

“I’m done with sorry and being pitied. I just want to have fun and let loose. That’s all. OK?”

“Ok.”

He drove forward and turned into Maia’s parking lot. They gave the valet his keys and they walked to the front. A person upfront recognized and guided them to a side room where Maia was waiting.

“Jon! Ellen! How fantastic to see you!” She kissed them both on the cheeks and hugged them.

“It’s great to see you, Maia. The place looks great,” said Jon.

“All because of you my dear.”

“No, all I did was help up front. This is all you.”

“Well, now it’s all for you. Tonight you are going to be treated as a king.”

Jon looked at her and then at Ellen. “You told her the situation then?”

Ellen looked between them awkwardly but didn’t speak.

“Yes, she did, she trusted her old friend, as you will. Do you trust me?”

“I’ve been asked that question a lot lately. I guess the answer is yes of course.”

“Jon, it’s a bitch. It’s an impossible situation, but tonight you leave your troubles outside. You are in my place, my arms, and tonight you think of nothing but the pleasure I will give you. Tomorrow is tomorrow and I can’t control that. Only the now. Are you with me?”

“I am, in more ways than you can imagine. Let’s do this.”

“Perfect! Now, first, take this and swallow it.” It was a small green pill. Jon was dubious and glared a little at Maia.

“Oh please, just trust me. You have a long night ahead of you. It is better than the blue one by miles and helps in many other ways. Hasn’t hit the market, some mucky mucks with a pharmaceutical company make it on the downlow for some special clientele. If they released it publicly, women would never know a night’s rest from all the bozos taking it. However, you will take it for me.”

She handed him a small glass of water and after a small hesitation, he drank it down.

“Wonderful! Give it about 15-20 minutes and then yowza! And now, please step into my home.”

With that she walked to a set of double doors and opened them to a dimmed and multicolored filled room. Figures were barely visible everywhere drinking and laughing. Jon extended his elbows and each woman hooked their arms through one and they walked together into the room.

Continues in Part 12

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/nm9gta/the_business_deal_part_11

4 comments on “The Business Deal – Part 11 – [MF][MF][Seduction][Cheating][Non-Consensual Consent][Swapping]

  1. Holy shit! First of all I like the way how you switch between both stories because it splits its up evenly to where you hear both sides of the story on the same day. Also I might get hate from this but it might change in what might happen but I think michael is gonna make me dislike tami by the end of this story. And Jon, the way you wrote Jon is incredible on how he is doing this to numb the pain and now just want even with everything she does because he can’t stand the sound of his boss fucking his wife on the phone. Just wow!

    Bold prediction: Ellen ends up falling for Jon and tells him she loves him. And I don’t like this, but either or both Jon and tami find out that maybe they are better off with the one they are attracted too. Not Stephen tho, cause fuck Stephen!

  2. First off, as always, Fuck Stephen.

    Was not prepared for the character switch. We have been evenly seeing each side, and to see both in this story was a crazy twist.

    I am suddenly hoping that Maia is used in the revenge aspect, but I suspect our boy Jon is already on the case. Don’t mess with Jon!

    This story has become our addiction. I suspect things are about to get very hot and heavy on both sides, and hopefully we won’t see our heroes shattered by the rocks in the end.

    Stephen, do your worst, for Jon and Tami will do theirs!

    Yeah, this has totally become my go to story!

  3. Since two other people have already done so, I’ll join in as well.

    FUCK STEPHEN.

  4. > I’m sure she’s not being raped or assaulted or anything, but yeah.

    So, initially I thought you were shying away from describing this as rape because it makes the horror of what Stephen is doing to these women too stark (especially when paired with the whole “Stephen is so good at sex that the wives end up coming back for more” bit). Similar to how FPS shooters tend not to have people getting maimed and wailing in agony whilst they slowly bleed out, it’s pretty common for non-consent/NTR stories to just elide the more grisly bits of rape. But, no, the characters (and you?) apparently don’t actually think Stephen is a rapist. Which is absurd. The man is **forcing** a woman to fuck him, repeatedly, under **threat** of sending her husband to jail. Christ, you even include “Non-consensual” in the story tags. It’s especially jarring the way both primary female characters keep launch mini-speeches about how Jon can’t understand the pressures of being a woman, but then those same women turn around and act like using duress to compel consent isn’t rape.

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