This was almost eight years ago and had been drinking so the details are a little fuzzy, but I thought I’d share. For the story I’ll call myself M and her A.
A and I had known each other since elementary school and since we were 18 or so there had been a sexual tension between us but for various reasons neither of us had ever made a move (except for once but that’s a different story). So fast forward a few years and I had moved out of state for college and was back in town for thanksgiving. I had decided to go out with friends and made sure that A was invited as I had a goal for the evening. We went to several bars and harmlessly flirted with each other and when it was time to leave we decided to go back to her place. A short pause about us; we were both 21 at the time myself about 6 feet and 159 pounds ( you can look at my other posts if you’re curious about my dick). A is about 5’6″ small Cs and red hair.
When we got back to As place we put on a movie (couldn’t tell you what) and started to catch up. That lasted all of about five minutes. We started making out and let me tell you she had a passion about her that made kissing itself great. As normally happens hands started moving and layers of clothing started coming off. A started kissing down my body and took my hard cock in her mouth. After what felt like awhile but was probably only a couple minutes I started to feel that I was going to cum so wanting to extend things decided to return the favor. A had a pretty good body, but she has a beautiful pussy and it tasted delicious too. I preceded to eat out her delicious pussy until I felt that I was ready to go. After rolling on a condom A climbed on top of me and began to ride my dick. The site of her beautiful breasts, her tight pussy squeezing my cock, and finally having my dick inside the girl I’ve known since 6th grade was almost to much to stand so we switched to missionary so I could try and control a little more. Unfortunately that didn’t work and I came very quickly and due to the booze and euphoria fell asleep right away.
Fast forward a few hours and I’m being woken up because apparently my dick has grown hard and is pressing against A and she wants to go again. I only had one condom with me so this time was going to be raw. I put my dick back in to A and as great as she had felt before it was totally different this time. We proceeded to fuck for a bit when I felt that feeling again and asked her where she wanted me to cum. A said that she wanted my cum deep inside of her and I was more than happy to oblige. I kept fucking A and shortly thereafter pumped several ropes in to her.
Any feedback you have is welcome as this is my first time posting here.
Source: reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/687pp0/my_first_time_creampieing_someone
Would like a bit more length. Possibly more dialogue if you can remember it. You want to describe the sex in detail, sure, but the build up should be even longer, creating tension. It’s what makes for a good erotic tale. Because, at the point of climax, we can all release. ?
Using initials is unnatural and does not make sense to your readers. It is actually very distracting because your reader has to think about what that letter means. It would be a much more natural flow for the reader to only see a name, not a letter.
Besides, we’re not going to know if A is Angelita, Amy, or Anna. Just pick a fucking name.