Operation Malfunction : Stephanie vs Ashley : work in progress

*This is my first ever story. Please please give me feedback! I haven’t even run this through a spell check or anything yet. It’s slow going as i find my voice. I’ll likely continue and at least finish this part one of this story. but I’d love to hear what you think so far about this plot and characters as well as any constructive criticism of the writing.*

*Any similarities between these characters and real life people and events are purely coincidental.*

*Also please don’t steal my work :p.*

*This story is heavily inspired by the “dress off” series by enf_cavalier. You can find the storys here -* *https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1628377&page=submissions*

High school in a small town can lead to strained social relationships. Everyone knows each and over the years cliques form and resentments deepen.

Ashley and Stephanie grew up in one such town. By the time high school rolled around each was firmly entrenched in separate social circles.

Ashley and Stephanie had some elements of their appearance in common. Both were blonde with fair skin. Ashley was the taller of the 2 at 5’8″ and had striking blue eyes and long straight hair. Ashley had a toned body and perky breasts (large A cup small B cup) Stephanie was 5’4″ and had long but very curly dirty blonde hair. She was less toned and you could say she had a “little extra” but not fat (Around 130-140 lbs). Stephanie had C cup breasts.

Bottom line- neither girl would be considered unattractive by any means.

If you had to quantify such things, i guess you would say Ashley was the more popular in school. It wasn’t that she had more friends but her social circle was comprised of cheerleaders, football players, and fellow members of the yearbook committee.

Stephanie’s social circle was more of a mixed bag. She hung out with some of from the athletic crowd but also some “computer geeks”, theater kids, and Advanced placement students.

The two girls never really liked each other going back many years. No one thing caused this initial dislike. It was mostly a product of incompatible personalities and many small perceived slights over time.

Both Stephanie and Ashley were equally happy following there own interests and going their own way until senior year of high school. Jacob moved to their small town and within a few weeks was going on dates with stephanie. Jacob also became close friends with Ashley and her clique of friends.

Not unlike many high school romances over a couple of months the spark died out between Stephanie and Jacob and they broke up. Stephanie suspected that this had something to do with the amount of attention Jacob was giving Ashley and her friends.
The breakup freed Jacob to spend all his free time with Ashley’s circle.

No cheating took place but this was the beginning of bad blood developing between the two.
As time went on Jacob became a true part of Ashley’s clique. He even joined the yearbook club.

Hostilities rose to new heights when the yearbook was published. Stephanie name had been butchered in the book spelling it “stuffaknee” (horrible autocorrect blunder)and a white blotch “accidentally” distorted part of her face in her picture. Stephanie suspected petty sabotage.

Things got out of hand when Stephanie “accidentally” tripped Ashley while walking up to the stage at graduation. Not just stumbled… full on feet leave the floor sprawling across the floor in front of hundreds of people. Ashley’s temper got the best of her and if fellow student hadn’t stepped in a full on fight would have broken out right there.

Fast forward to summer after senior year. Ashley and stephanie ran into each other in the lobby of a tech company each had applied to work with. The company, “Nanotech” specialized in microscopic bleeding edge nanobots. The job opening was just for a receptionist position but in a small town it was a great opportunity to make some money before college. Neither had known the other applied so it was quite a shock for both to come face to face.

“What the hell are you doing here, stuffaknee?” questioned Ashley, clearly annoyed.
“Im here for the job, why are you here? i think they might want people without shit personalities greeting clients”, retorted Stephanie.

Months of resentment coming from both sides had clearly reached a breaking point and things were about to explode. The two moved toward each other but before either had a chance to lunge Dr. Reynolds stepped through the doorway.

Reynolds had heard the commotion and stepped between the young woman. “What the hell is going on in my office” demanded the Reynolds..

Stephanie regaining her composure but still overflowing with anger spat, “this idiot has no business representing you or your company.”

“Screw you bitch” Ashley screamed as she attempted to reach around Reynolds.

“Enough!” Reynolds forcefully stated with as much authority as he could muster.
“Why would I hire either of you if this is the way you behave?”

The girls refusing to make eye contact with each other and remained silent.

A thought occurred to Reynolds “as it happen, we do have a project in which the assistance of 2 individuals will be required… I have some details to work out but if you’d both return tomorrow at this time I will have a proposal ready for you. Now, please leave before you hurt your chances of employment further”

With that Reynolds stormed out of the office leaving the girls perplexed.

Neither girl was sure how to react but still refused to share there thoughts with each other. Both stormed out of the office without a word unsure if they would be returning the next day.

The following day both Ashley and Stephanie found themselves in an office sitting across from Reynolds.

“Thank you for arriving at our appointment on time and leaving each other in one piece.” Opened Reynolds.

“Thank you for having us”
“Thank you for the opportunity”

Again, neither girl made eye contact with the other.

“I take it you girls do not get along?” Questioned Reynolds, knowing the answer.

“That’s an understatement.” Confirmed Ashley.

“Is there no hope for reconciliation?” Asked Reynolds.

“No” both girls said concurrently, finally in agreement about something.

“In that case I might have a solution to resolve this little war once and for all, while also furthering my research and serving as a job interview for you both.” Reynolds explained.

Reynolds saw he had both girls attention so he continued with confidence.

As you know this company specializes in specialized nano bots. We need some people to field test their capabilities. I have devised a head to head competition for you girls to work out your differences and test these nanobots.

The winner of the experiment will have a place within nanotech. The loser… well the loser wont want to show her face in this town again.

Do we have an agreement?

Ashley was watching a timer tick down from 60 In a an empty sterile office within nanotech. Ashley was dressed in white t shirt sports bra and jeans. She knew that on the other side of the building Stephanie was waiting in an identical room wearing identical clothes provided by nanotech. These clothes were laced with millions of microscopic self repairing and replicating nanobots.

It was explain the previous day that this competition would consist of a series of head to head contests. The contests would continue until a final winner was determined. Each contest would decide which contestant would be that rounds subject in the nanobots testing. Reynolds didn’t go into detail but promised losing rounds would lead to major embarrassment.

The promise of the job was nothing next to the desire for each girl to see the other humiliated and knocked down a peg. Each agreed to the terms with little hesitation.

Now as the clock ticked down the final seconds each girl was filled with a desire to put “that bitch in her place”.

A voice began speaking to both girls. It took them a moment to realize that the voice was somehow coming from their clothes. The nanobots were acting as speakers projecting Reynolds voice.

“Your first challenge begins now. ”

—-

“Remember, I am monitoring you through the nanobots. Any cheating or actions against the spirit of the competition will result in penalties. If you for give up or quit from this point forward you will suffer the consequences the same as if you had played out and lost the competition.”

Reynolds voice continued, “Your first task is simple. solve this riddle and arrive at the location before the other. “A ‘fine’ place, which often has branches. ”

The clock hit zero. The doors unlocked and the game was on.

Ashley raced out of the building and into the streets of her small town.

The towns annual beer and sausage festival happened to fall on this day so the streets of the town were packed with people operating and shopping at various food carts.

Ashley began racking her brain. ” a fine place that has branches” Ashley repeated out loud to herself. Ashley’s mind went immediately to fine dinning restaurants that are often featured in tv shows and movies… but her town has nothing that upscale. And what about the branches? Trees have branches. The town has a beautiful town square with with a large oak tree in the center. Surely that was the fine place with branches the voice was describing?
Ashley took off running as fast as her tones legs would carry her. She couldn’t wait to put that ugly bitch in her place. Hopefully whatever was in store for her would put her in permanent hiding far away.

Stephanie smiled to herself. She knew the answer to this clue. Maybe her circle of friends weren’t the club goers or the partiers but she did spend some time hanging out out with friends at the public library . The library was one of the many picturesque building bordering the town square. Stephanie took off running toward the library. It was only a few blocks away and she hoped Ashley would find the riddle more difficult than she had.

As she ran she wondered about the promised penalties for losing. The clothes she was wearing were conservative (they offered full coverage, plenty of support and were well… unremarkable and avaerage) but she had no idea what the full capabilities of the nanobots were.
Stephanie was no twig model but she wasn’t ashamed of her body. Real woman have curves and she’d gotten plenty of positive comments on the few bikini photos of herself that had made their way only social networks over the years. Still… she had a nasty feeling about these bots.

Stephanie made a turn into the square and saw Ashley sprinting into the square from a side street about 50 yards to the right.

“Shit!”, Stephanie swore. From her position Ashley would reach the library before her.

Ashley saw Stephanie and they made eye contact. Ashley with a jolt of adrenaline turned and sprinted toward the tree. She knew she would easily beat Stephanie in a footrace. She was taller with less beer legs and was more fit. She smiled as her feet pounded the pavement and straight blond hair whirled in the breeze. She couldn’t wait to see what the first penalty would be.
Ashley reached to the tree and turned back toward stephabie… but Stephanie wasn’t there. She twisted around and saw her under the entrance to the county library. Why was she there? Had she not even tried to out run her? What the hell was going on. As her mind raced she felt something against her legs.

“Oh fuck…”

Stephanie couldn’t believe her luck when Ashley took off sprinting in the wrong direction. She thought for sure she had lost the first challenge. Now she was watching Ashley suffer the first penalty of the game.

She smiled As she watched the material that made up Ashley’s jeans seemed to be melting of in places. Whole sections would slide off her legs or fall to ribbons around her ankles. The nanobots were working up from the bottom shredding the jeans like hungry piranha. What were once sneaker length jeans were now knee length and rising. The material was still traveling above her knees when Ashley tried to grab the material to stop the destruction. This did no good as the denim just disintegrated at her touch. The material finally halted its upward journey up Ashley’s tan toned legs when they resembled something close to denim boy shorts. These Jessica simpsons daisy dukes look modest.

The fragments of cloth were scattered by the breeze caught the attention of a number of passers by. Stephanie watched as a few craft beer enthusiasts cat called at the blonde hottie with the exposed legs. Fortunately for Ashley her shirt was still intact and reached a respectable length so the severity of her predicament was largely hidden.

Stephanie smile somewhat evaporated when Ashley made eye contact with her from across the street. The look Stephanie was receiving was murderous.

Reynolds voice again spring forth from the nanobots. “Well done girls, it appears the first experiment was a success! Stephanie takes round one and as we’ve seen Ashley has paid the price. I know it’s not fun to lose but remember, this is for science!”

” now prepare for round 2″

” you’ll both notice that there’s a festival going on celebrating this towns rich history of gluttonous drinking and eating. Adjacent to the towns history museum you will find an inflatable gladiator dueling arena. If your not familiar with the glorious art of pugil stick fighting then i will explain. You each take a stick and stand on a platform. Your goal is to use your weapon to knock the other off their platform. First contestant to manage this 3 times wins round 2!”

Stephanie knew she wasn’t the most athletic person in town but this actually looked like it might be fun. Stephanie picked up her stick and hopped onto the platform. As she turned to face her opponent she hoped that Ashley’s recent loss of clothing might distr–.

::WACK::
The nearby crowd of onlookers let of a gasp as Stephanie’s world turned upside down and the inflatable plastic rushed up to meet her.

Ashley looked smugly at Stephanie sprawled across the stadium floor. She hadn’t given Stephanie a chance as soon as Stephanie had stepped up on the platform Ashley had aimed a long arching swing that caught Her directly in the jaw.

“One point for me” laughed Ashley as Stephanie stumbled to her feet still clearly wobbled.

Hoping for the same result Ashley Aimed another thunderous blow toward Stephanie as she climbed back onto the platform on shaken legs. This time Stephanie managed to duck the attack and return a swing of her own.
Stephanie’s counter attack was off balance and Ashley didn’t even have to dodge. She took the blow on her left shoulder and lunged with her stick straight forward catching a still off balanced Stephanie in the stomach. Stephanie lost her footing and found herself off the platform and on her back.

“Maybe you should spend less time reading about things and more time experiencing them and you’d have better hand eye coordination” taunted Ashley.

Stephanie climbed back on the platform and faced her opponent determined to teach her a lesson.

Ashley Aimed yet another heavy blow at Stephanie’s midsection. This time Stephanie braced for impact, dropped her own stick. And CAUGHT Ashley’s swing. With all her might Ashley wrenched backward and pulled the over-extended Ashley face first off her platform.

Ashley could feel eyes on her backside as her tshirt rode up her back as she lay sprawled across the stadium. She couldn’t believe Stephanie had the coordination to pull that move off. She quickly rolled to her feet , straightened her clothes and climbed back on the platform.

The next round was a violent flurry of back and forth swings. Stephanie had regained her composure and Ashley was more determined then ever. Both girls were working up a sweat and tiring when Stephanie swung wildly at Ashley.

Ashley saw her opportunity. This time she was the one to drop her stick and grab Stephanie’s. Stephanie wisely let go immediately rather then suffer the same fate as Ashley minutes before.

Unfortunately for Stephanie this left her without a stick and at the mercy of Ashley. Ashley smiled as she twirled Stephanie’s weapon. Ashley began raining blows down on a defenseless Stephanie. With nothing to block with she could only dodge. Stephanie danced from side to side but finally Ashley smacked the side of Stephanie’s head stunning her. With arm Arms flailing to keep balance there was nothing she could do to prevent the vicious uppercut that landed flush on her chin. Stephanie’s head snapped back, she saw stars and fell backward off platform on her back.

Ashley twirled her stick once more, gave the audience a wave and hopped down from her platform victorious.

Stephanie shook her head to clear the cobwebs. The spectacle of the contest had attracted more then a few spectators. Whatever embarrassment Stephanie felt about being knocked silly in front of the crowd was quickly replaced by a sense of dread when she felt the subtle itch around her ankles.

Still flat on her back Stephanie looked down to see her pants shred before her eyes. She know what to expect but she still let out a anguished groan as her legs were forcibly exposed for all to see. She went beet red as confused onlookers clapped there approval for her transformation. Stephanie stood up and vowed to herself that Ashley would not have the satisfaction of embarrassing her further.

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