You might want to elaborate on the details a bit more. Spend a little time fleshing out the characters. By all means when you get to the part where things heat up, don’t scrimp on the details. Other than that, great story!
A regular Jackie Collins. I’m still confused though why the stuffed dog was constantly be re-positioned.
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You might want to elaborate on the details a bit more. Spend a little time fleshing out the characters. By all means when you get to the part where things heat up, don’t scrimp on the details. Other than that, great story!
A regular Jackie Collins. I’m still confused though why the stuffed dog was constantly be re-positioned.
Great story though!