7 lines from page 77 of my BDSM story.

@MelodyParks90 challenged me to reveal 7 lines from page 77 of my current work in progress. So here, for your delight and delectation, are seven lines from page seventy-seven of "Order."

"'Take off your blouse!'

Louise started unbuttoning her blouse, top down. The mistress’ gaze didn’t leave Louise’s face, and Louise felt her heart racing in anticipation already, her small breasts heaving with each breath. She pulled the blouse off behind her, allowing it to drop to the floor. The mistress walked around her, kicking the blouse contemptuously to the side of the room. She ran a finger around Louise’s brassiere, around and under her breasts.

‘Off!’"

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/29i2h6/7_lines_from_page_77_of_my_bdsm_story

1 comment

  1. HAH! I love it!!! Plus I love these 7 lines, what a nice large tease for some cool stuff! TY for sharing!

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