A little shower scene I put together for a friend, give me feedback! (Based on Truth)

Hands grasped the sliding glass door, pushing it open in a mad scramble. Low moans escape her lips, she can feel his hard member pressing into her, slipping around her dripping crotch. Her hands, wrapped around his shoulders, her legs around his waist, she felt the cold tiles of the shower hit her. Gasping, he turned the taps, water flowing over and over them. Tongues circling each other, his hands roaming up and down her body. Fingers finding a nipple, he tweaked them, making her moan into his mouth. Kissing down her neck, he nibbled lightly, causing her to jump and groan. Looking into her eyes, he asked her "Are you ready for me, baby?" "Yeeeeeeessssss oohhh fuck, hurry up already!"

Smirking, he reached down, angling his hard cock towards her before thrusting all the way inside of her in one go. "Ahhhhh! Fuck yes! Keep going! Harder!" Spurred on by her words, reaching down to cup her arse cheeks with his hands he picked up the pace, thrusting deep inside of her, watching her moan and squirm. Freeing one hand, he found her clit, hard and sensitive. He rubbed it, hard, making her moan and clench down on his cock. "Fuck yes baby! I'm cummminnng!" "I'm not done yet, let's try something a little different" he said, with a grin. Letting her down from her perch, she made a small sigh as he slipped from her body. "Bend over sweetie." "You dirty bastard, hahaha!"

She bent over, spreading her legs and placing her hands on the wall for balance. He aimed the shower jet right at her crotch, causing warm water to cascade down over her pussy. "Ohhhhh that feels good." Kneeling behind her, he leant forward and gave her one big lick from bottom to top. Standing behind her, he lined up and pushed all the way in, hard. She grunted and then groaned, only making him swell in size. He thrust faster and harder, pushing it all the way into her, balls slapping her clit causing her to gasp even more. "I'm gonna cum baby, I'm gonna cum again!" He reached around and squeezing her boobs, tweaked her nipples. She cried out, clenching on him again. "AHHHHHH!" He pulled his cock out, and she turned around, taking it in her hands and jacking him off. His cum spurt out and landed on her chest in great big shots, leaving her sticky and panting. "Well… that was awesome" "Hahahahah! You dirty bastard, you said we'd shower to save water!

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/228sk3/a_little_shower_scene_i_put_together_for_a_friend