Alice’s Closet Part 2.0 [MFf, inc, mast, voy]

**If you missed part one, [click here](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/92tt73/alices_closet_mff_inc_mast_voy/) to read it first. This part was too long for Reddit so don’t forget to finish reading it in the comments section. Thanks!**

“What was that,” Dad exclaimed as his head snapped towards the booming crash inside the room. He quickly dismounted off of Mom, kicked his pants and underwear off of his ankles, and made a beeline for the source of the noise. Mom bolted upright and frighteningly stared in the same direction. Dad pulled both sliding doors of slatted closet open and cranked back his arm with a fist, ready to strike the intruder.

“Wait,” Alice shrieked as she cowered in the corner of the closet still tangled in clothes. “It’s me Dad! Don’t hit me!”

“Alice,” Dad said confused before taking the fist he had balled up and extending it out with an open palm to help his daughter up. “What the hell are you doing in here… and why are you dressed like that?”

Alice took her father’s hand and he pulled her back up on to her feet, various pieces of her parents clothing falling off her body. “I… I… I’m sorry Dad. I came in here to steal money out of the jar and sneak out to go to a party.”

Alice’s Closet [MFf, inc, mast, voy]

“Hey listen,” Alice said to her friend over the phone while standing in front of her open closet naked. “I’m going to get dressed really quick and steal some money from my parents’ room before they get back from their ‘date night’ and I’ll call you after I’ve snuck out so you can pick me up… Mhmm… Yeah… Okay bye.”

Alice tossed her phone behind herself, it bounced on the bed before resting still. She ran her fingers through her long, black hair with red dyed tips, staring at her clothes. It was going to be her first college party that her friend helped get her invited to. Alice had one objective tonight, to get fucked. There were bound to be a lot of cute, older boys eager to have their way with a legal highschool girl.

Looking for an editor!

Hi fellow erotica fans! I’m working on my very first story as kind of a present for my boyfriend. We both love erotica, and have a bit of an incest fetish. This story is based off a number of our different role-play scenarios. I’m definitely going to give it to him once it’s finished, but I’m unsure if I’m actually going to post it to a site. Anyway, I’m looking to find someone, or maybe a couple of people, who would be willing to read my rough draft once it’s done and provide suggestions, edits and feedback! Please let me know if you’re willing to help, I’d be eternally grateful!

[M/F, Incest] Bad Behavior PT 1

Inspired by the Prompt ” A girl tries to seduce her brother, with their parents encouragement ” By cametopaf2

I encourage Feedback of any type via comment or PM. PT 2 will be coming soon!

Pt 1

They’d been up most of the night talking about it. It had gone unspoken for a long time before that, the very definition of an elephant in the room. Finally though, last night something had broken the silence. Ethan had been restless, tossing, turning , punching the pillow over and over again, until at last he sat up with a heavy sigh. Judy looked up at him, concerned and asked what was wrong, he flipped on the bed side lamp and gave her a long, resigned look and said “we need to talk about it. We’ve put it off too long.”

Judy frowned, shaking her head, “Talk about what?” she asked coyly.

“You know what. We can’t be in denial anymore about it any longer. It’s happening right now, under our nose and we both know it.”

“Oh…that. Ethan….please, it’s just a phase” Judy said, but her voice lacked any conviction.

[M/F Incest] Bad Behavior PT 2

“Hey bro, you in there?” Melissa called, knocking gingerly on the door. Her free hand held a six-pack of cheap domestic beer. Over the last few hours Melissa and her parents had discussed how they all thought she should approach the situation. After a few more cups of coffee, they all had it decided. Ethan and Judy had then gone off to shower and dress for work, while Melissa finally crashed on her bed to sleep off the effects of the night before. When the spins finally went away, she fell into a dreamless slumber. She woke after 2:00 PM, covered in sweat and crusted cum and with mouth filled with the taste of smoke and booze. She spent the next hour going throw the recovery rituals. Tall glass of water, asprin, weed, and a long, soothing shower. When it was all over she was new woman.

She slipped into a pair of lacy, pink boy-shorts and the nearly transparent, blue baby-doll nightie her mom had gotten her for her last birthday. She could hear muffled footsteps and the clatter of keys on keyboard behind the closed door across the hall. After grabbing the beers she walked across the hallway. There was a pause as she waited for the reply, and for a second she thought he might try to pretend he wasn’t there. Then her brother’s voice answered. “Yes? What’s up?”

Alice’s Closet Part 2.5 [MFf, inc, mast, voy]

**Sorry for splitting part two in half, [click here](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/92f875/alices_closet_part_20_mff_inc_mast_voy/) to go back and read it first if you need to.**

The teasing didn’t last long before Dad pushed his mighty manhood inside Mom’s dripping wet hole. Mom’s body shuddered as pleasure washed over her body the deeper he went in, intensified by the feeling of her daughter’s slick knuckles rubbing against her spine. Mom wanted even more contact. She took Alice’s free hand and pulled it to her wobbling chest, guiding Alice’s fingertips to her nipple. Alice got the hint and began lightly pinching Mom’s hard, pink, eraser tip nubs. “Oh fuck,” Mom moaned as Alice used her index and thumb to pull on Mom’s nipple before letting it go.

Dad started going faster, smushing Mom’s body against Alice with each thrust. He pulled Mom’s legs closer together and held them to his chest. The fact that it was his naked daughter sitting behind his wife was pushed completely out of his mind. All he was seeing now was a beautiful young woman playing with his wife nipples while touching herself. It was such an erotic sight, he wasn’t going to be able to  hold back much longer.

Alice’s Closet Part 2.0 [MFf, inc, mast, voy]

**If you missed part one, [click here](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/926y4t/alices_closet_mff_inc_mast_voy/) to go back and enjoy it first.**

“What was that,” Dad exclaimed as his head snapped towards the booming crash inside the room. He quickly dismounted off of Mom, kicked his pants and underwear off of his ankles, and made a beeline for the source of the noise. Mom bolted upright and frighteningly stared in the same direction. Dad pulled both sliding doors of slatted closet open and cranked back his arm with a fist, ready to strike the intruder.

“Wait,” Alice shrieked as she cowered in the corner of the closet still tangled in clothes. “It’s me Dad! Don’t hit me!”

“Alice,” Dad said confused before taking the fist he had balled up and extending it out with an open palm to help his daughter up. “What the hell are you doing in here… and why are you dressed like that?”

Alice took her father’s hand and he pulled her back up on to her feet, various pieces of her parents clothing falling off her body. “I… I… I’m sorry Dad. I came in here to steal money out of the jar and sneak out to go to a party.”

GH Lawrence. The best amateur author of written smut I have ever found.

GH Lawrence has only written two series, Built For One Thing and I Dare you. he wrote them many years ago and I have not found anything else by him ever sense. But both have plenty of content and are hands down the best erotic literature I have found to this date.
Incest is a prevalent theme in both his work so turn away now if you are strongly against that kind of stuff. But if you are only slightly opposed or indifferent to fictional incest then I highly recommend you give it a read because what GH Lawrence has to offer is fantastic.
Built For One Thing is the story of a hot, well built mom hooking up with her stud son and her two sisters joining in the last chapters. I Dare You has a super-MILF Mom and mega-babe daughter shagging their two football star sons/brothers with the main characters from the last story joining in the second half. I Dare You is slow to start but after chapter 8 it really takes off.
GH’s work hits on so many of the different themes and fetishes I like. Experienced MILFs with curves in all of the right places. Guys with great big cocks and balls that never run dry. A small but well rounded cast of participants with a range of different match ups. MF, FF, MFF, MFFF, MMMF, and MMMFFF. Blowjobs, anal, titfucking, cumshots and all that other good stuff.
But the best thing about GH’s work is his writing style. The sex scenes are long and drawn out but never feel like they are padded. Instead GH writes with a copious amount of detail into each encounter to the point where you can perfectly visualize what is happening. Every caress, thrust, or position change can be created in your mind’s eye. His description of events is down right delectable. You might read a paragraph over a few times just because how erotic it is. I can’t properly put into words here just how damn satisfying GH’s writing style is.
Here is a link to a blog that has the only full collection of GH Lawrence’s work that I know of. It has sent been active for a while and I worry that if it goes down GH’s work will be lost forever

Alice’s Closet Part 2.5 [MFf, inc, mast, voy]

The teasing didn’t last long before Dad pushed his mighty manhood inside Mom’s dripping wet hole. Mom’s body shuddered as pleasure washed over her body the deeper he went in, intensified by the feeling of her daughter’s slick knuckles rubbing against her spine. Mom wanted even more contact. She took Alice’s free hand and pulled it to her wobbling chest, guiding Alice’s fingertips to her nipple. Alice got the hint and began lightly pinching Mom’s hard, pink, eraser tip nubs. “Oh fuck,” Mom moaned as Alice used her index and thumb to pull on Mom’s nipple before letting it go.

Dad started going faster, smushing Mom’s body against Alice with each thrust. He pulled Mom’s legs closer together and held them to his chest. The fact that it was his naked daughter sitting behind his wife was pushed completely out of his mind. All he was seeing now was a beautiful young woman playing with his wife nipples while touching herself. It was such an erotic sight, he wasn’t going to be able to  hold back much longer.

“Daddy’s getting close,” Mom moaned looking back up at Alice. “I can feel him… uuuhhh… getting thicker inside me… Do you want him to… ooooohhhh God… cum inside me?”

Alice’s Closet Part 2.0 [MFf, inc, mast, voy]

“What was that,” Dad exclaimed as his head snapped towards the booming crash inside the room. He quickly dismounted off of Mom, kicked his pants and underwear off of his ankles, and made a beeline for the source of the noise. Mom bolted upright and frighteningly stared in the same direction. Dad pulled both sliding doors of slatted closet open and cranked back his arm with a fist, ready to strike the intruder.

“Wait,” Alice shrieked as she cowered in the corner of the closet still tangled in clothes. “It’s me Dad! Don’t hit me!”

“Alice,” Dad said confused before taking the fist he had balled up and extending it out with an open palm to help his daughter up. “What the hell are you doing in here… and why are you dressed like that?”

Alice took her father’s hand and he pulled her back up on to her feet, various pieces of her parents clothing falling off her body. “I… I… I’m sorry Dad. I came in here to steal money out of the jar and sneak out to go to a party.”