Obedient Ch. 5 (MF+)(Fdom)(mc)(humil)

Author’s Note:

This is the first chapter of Obedient I’ve posted to this subreddit. All the previous chapters are easy to find on my profile if you want to start from the beginning. I’ll link the first chapter below to make it easy to check out. This series leans heavily into humiliation and femdom, so if that’s not what you’re looking for, consider this your warning. Thanks for reading!

Obedient Ch 1: [https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/ri7fh0/obedient_femdommind_controlhumiliation/](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/ri7fh0/obedient_femdommind_controlhumiliation/)

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“Matt?”

I was staring at the spot where Sophie had just been like I was in a trance. Hannah was still on her knees right where Sophie had left her. She was waiting for me to tell her what to do. Sophie had left her cute, curvy friend for me and made her obey everything I said. Something about the way she was looking up at me from the floor made me want to try it out.

“Shit, Hannah. I’m so sorry. Please sit down.”

She plopped down on the floor right where she had been kneeling.

I went over to help her up. “I’m so sorry. You can sit down on the couch or wherever you want.”

Obedient Ch. 5 (MFF)(Femdom)(Mind Control)(Humiliation)(Cuckold)

“Matt?”

I was staring at the spot where Sophie had just been like I was in a trance. Hannah was still on her knees right where Sophie had left her. She was waiting for me to tell her what to do. Sophie had left her cute, curvy friend for me and made her obey everything I said. Something about the way she was looking up at me from the floor made me want to try it out.

“Shit, Hannah. I’m so sorry. Please sit down.”

She plopped down on the floor right where she had been kneeling.

I went over to help her up. “I’m so sorry. You can sit down on the couch or wherever you want.”

Hannah moved to sit on the couch, even with my very light suggestion. “Or not! It’s totally fine either way.”

She froze halfway between sitting and standing. “Which should I…” She started to ask.

“It’s fine, Hannah. Just have a seat.” She obeyed without hesitation. My cock started to stir, but I was trying to ignore it. I sat down next to her, “I have no idea how to do this. Sophie makes it look so easy.”

So, you want to stay? (Part 1 of 2) [Hotwifing][Cheating]

I repeated myself after you sat there staring back at me with weepy eyes. You felt guilty down into the darkest recesses of yourself – even in the place that made you think that what you did was a good idea to begin with. I’d never tell you that you could have gotten away with it; I hadn’t even had the slightest inclination something was amiss that day.

“So, you want to stay?” I asked, for the third time. I could tell that you were sitting uncomfortably on my couch. It was like you could feel the cushion pushing you off of it or something. I made sure that my voice wasn’t rising. I figured you’d calm down if I stayed that way myself.

You finally nodded. You didn’t take your gaze from my eyes as you did so.

“I have a proposition for you,” I said. You cocked your head slightly, and your thoughts started racing. What revenge or humiliation could I have in store for you? You felt like the price to stay would be some firm punishment of some kind, but you wondered what bridge would be too far. I suspected that you thought I would say something like, “spanking,” or, “I need the pass-code to your phone,” or, “I need time away from sex with you.”

Summer Break [MF]

“Eric that asshole…” I muttered as I walked into my bedroom. I was back home for the summer, after my first year at college. After unpacking, and with nothing else to do, I had decided to take a short walk around my hometown, Snowville, reacquainting myself with the familiar sights. Unfortunately, as I was doing that, I saw Eric and his girlfriend, Anna, walking hand-in-hand.

It’s not that I liked Anna, it’s that I simply disliked Eric. I have no idea when, but at some point, we simply began hating each other. It’s been so long that I can remember why it began, and I doubt Eric can either. It doesn’t matter either way. What annoyed me was that Anna had been the classroom belle during high school.

Everyone loved her for her sweet and gentle personality. Okay, maybe her busty chest and extremely pretty face helped her status as well… The fact that my long-term rival had bagged himself a beauty while I was still struggling at college, was irritating.

S.O.L. Games: Jump Ropes (teachers and 18yo senior women abducted for sex games on remote island replica of their school. kinda ‘choose your own adventure’) [mf][nc][rape][bd][exhib][Mdom][sad]

[Start with the Prologue!](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tfhqci/sol_games_begin_game_teachers_and_18yo_senior/)

Then read other chapters in any order!

Links to all my stories and more chapters to this story are in comments.

*Pronounced ‘soul’ games. First-person, creepy, non-chronological, episodic stories inspired by the anime “Euphoria”, the book “Battle Royal”, the show “Squid Games”, etc. In this one, I choose my childhood friend, a thin blonde 18yo senior.*

DISCLAIMERS

I’m just trying to help with these disclaimers! I don’t want to spring things on anyone. Back out now if any of this doesn’t sound like your kind of thing!

The POINT of my writing is to combine VIOLENCE, HORROR, and EXTREME TABOO themes, trying to creep myself out as I write. This whole story is told through the eyes of a VILLAIN. If you do not enjoy very dark themes, this is not for you!

This is a work of fiction. I do not condone any of the things I write about. All characters are 18+. Any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental.

FETISH WARNINGS

-Rape/Abuse/Violence/Non-con

-Creepy/gross Sniffing/tasting (feet, sweat, bodily fluids, everything)

-Blood

-Anal abuse

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Jump Ropes

The boot polisher [MF+, Fdom]

Chapter 1 – Meeting him

She looks out the window, waiting to see the neighbor boy return from the store. It’s been far too long since she had some fun, and she’s chosen him as her target. She throws a glance at the mirror on the wall, admiring herself. She may be 50, but she’s taken care of herself and has a body women half her age would be jealous of. And she has something those younger women don’t, experience. When she sees Peter walking up the street, she goes out to meet him.

“Oh, hi Peter.” she says with a seductive smile.

“Oh, uh, hi Elizabeth.” he stammers back.

He’s carrying two big bags, the weight of them making the muscle in his arms swell. She discreetly admires his body, thinking about what he would look like with less clothes on. She catches him staring openly at her legs, but she doesn’t say anything. Of course she doesn’t. That’s the whole point of her outfit, the short skirt and long boots working together to draw attention to her shapely legs.

“You have something there, let me get it for you.” Elizabeth says and points at his chest.

The Auction of White Prison Bitches (non-con, d/s, interracial, snuff)

John Allen, a wiry black convict in his thirties better known to the inmates by his nickname Mississippi woke up in his cell at first light. He was as excited as a kid at Christmas time when thinking about the event that was coming up today in a hidden store room just off the prison yard. He reached up to his cell’s bookshelf and grabbed his library borrowed copy of a book on the tactics and history of the black slave trade. It was a subject that had always interested and angered him, and he expected that the event he was so excited for would go a long way towards alleviating some of that anger.

He was of course looking forward to the auction of young white boys, fresh off the bus from county jails all over the state. The word on the prison yard was that there would be five or six new white boys to choose from. And to add to the excitement, only the first 20 black men into the room would be allowed to bid. Mississippi had been saving his money for months, foregoing his second greatest pleasure in prison, twix candy bars in order to outbid any of the other cons for the first white boy that caught his eye.

26 [M4F] She was supposed to be treating me for sex addiction, not taking advantage of it.

**PLOT** You were supposed to be one of the best therapists, at least according to the reviews.
I came to you looking for help, after years and hundreds of women, I’ve decided I want to settle down and start a family, but I can’t do that if I’m constantly thinking about sex. I was a sex addict through and through and I was coming to you for help.

You seemed pretty unassuming, * Dr. Sydney Ann family counseling*
There were no pictures of you online, but I assumed you were a female. I wasn’t sure how I felt about talking through all the sex stuff with a women, but you were supposed to be really helpful so I went through and booked my consultation.

The second I walked into your office, I could tell I didn’t make the right call. Sitting across the room, behind a big wooden desk was this fit, tight, middle aged women. Black framed glasses partially covered by her long, dark, amber hair. Smooth, long, creamy legs crossed under the desk, paired with some short black heels. The red blouse, tight and hugging her breasts.
* I can’t do this with HER, look at her. This is way too uncomfortable, I won’t say much this session and not come back again*

Mountain Friends pt. 7 (mf)

Thank you for those of you who reached out with kind words or questions. Please feel free to continue to do so. Feedback and advice are always appreciated. I’m still developing the skills to convey emotion, especially jealousy and humiliation.

[previous](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/tallqo/mountain_friends_pt_6_mfm/)
The afternoon flew by. Mostly it was just chatting and catching up while people got a little day drunk. We all had a dinner to make during the week and the first one was mine. I asked around if anyone wanted to hit the grocery with me but no one elected to come. I started to pull out when I saw someone waving.

I stopped and Alex hustled into the car. “Hey, I saw you were heading out alone and I felt bad.”

I smiled weakly, “Thanks Alex, I mean I get it. People are feeling toasty and going out in the cold doesn’t sound like the funnest move.”

I started driving and Alex reached out and put her hand on my leg. She had always done that when we dated and something about it was nicely, platonically intimate. I couldn’t help but look over at her, the warm light of the sun accentuated her features and she looked stunning. “I wanted to ask how you and Maria were doing.”

Young Woman Has Sex With an Older Stranger (M) As Her Voyeur/Coworker (M) Watches [M/F, Age-gap, voyeurism, Con, slight humiliation, Fiction, 2nd Person]

Like most nights you watch me, the man I’m about to fuck is new. I’ve never met him before, but that’s why I like it. We’re two strangers who know we can give what the other needs; he needs a warm cunt to cum into and I need a cock to bruise my insides.

As I pull on his hand to guide him to the bar exit, we don’t talk. We don’t need words right now, we both know what’s about to happen. His hand is warm around mine and I like the roughness of his callouses against my smooth palms. They’re big, but purposeful, almost graceful in their size; they’ll know exactly where to go. His fingers are thick and long, with a heavy, engraved silver ring on the middle digit. I wonder how it would feel inside me, how the brief coolness of the metal would feel along the warm walls of my pussy.