A Parting Gift [Straight][MF]

Originally posted this last week as a response to a post on /r/DirtyWritingPrompts and have since posted it to an erotic fiction site, but I thought I should post it here to get some critiques and advice on how to better my writing as its been years since I've written anything. Please let me know what you think!


The day grew hot as Felix sat down at his desk to take a break from packing for his summer trip to Greece. He had gotten a job as a research assistant over the summer, and his flight was leaving in two days. He should have had it done earlier, but procrastination was always his strong suit, along with gaming and looking up random historical facts on the internet. Although now, as he opened up his laptop, history was the furthest thing from his mind.

Instead, he clicked the folder titled 'Frontline Tactics 2', and then opened the 'Sound Files' folder. Though instead of sound files, he found his stash of torrented porn. A few years earlier, his younger sister had accidentally found his downloaded porn, which he hadn't taken any precautions to hide, and got him grounded for six months. After that he had decided to keep it well hidden, and made sure to keep it behind fake folders. Even though he was 19, he still would prefer to not get in trouble over it.

She (f)inally did it for (m)e.

I've told my wife many times of my fantasies of eating her pussy after it's been filled with cum, and how if it's my cum I always chicken out after I finish.

So I'm away on vacation for about a week and I made sure not to finish myself because I was hoping for a great blowjob upon my return. Usually I finish her with my mouth two or three times and then we decide how I'd like to finish but this time she had other plans. I come home to find her wearing some sexy lingerie and ready for action. She takes my cock in her mouth to get it nice and wet, not that it needed to be anymore wet as she was virtually dripping already. The aroma was intoxicating. She quickly pulls me down on top of her and deep inside her. She starts talking dirty telling me to fill her pussy with cum so I can clean it up. She knows this will make me finish fast. And so, unable to hold back I cum what feels like the biggest load of my life inside her. She slides up and down on my cock for a few extra strokes, then says, "are you ready to get to work?"

My roommates girlfriend is a babe

It was the middle of summer between my junior and senior year of college. I have a part time job, but that leaves me a lot of free time. I have a roommate, but he went home to work for the summer. This leaves my apartment all to myself. I’m not used to that at all. It almost feels too lonely. I try to invite friends over as much as possible. This day was no different. It was another 90 degree July day so I invited some friends over to spend the day at the pool. It was my normal group of friends. A couple guys from the dorms freshman year, a girl I have been friends with since high school, and my roommates girlfriend, Maria. I was really surprised that Maria showed up. She is friends with all of us but she doesn’t hangout with us much without her boyfriend.

The music festival [M/F]

Long time reader of this sub, I guess the time has come to share some of my stories.

This one takes place almost 10 years ago, in a really hot summer were the nights where like 80 degrees. Me and my girlfriend at the time went to a music festival. Besides one band that we really wanted to see, the festival was near a river and the temperature was more pleasant.

Claire has this amazing green eyes, and this heroin chic look. Very slim with small perky tits and a little round ass that I loved to caress. So usually after a few drinks she starts to get drunk and it’s a really thin line between the drunk horny girl and the no fun drunk girl.

That night, after the 3 or 4 beers she starts to kiss me and pressing hard against my body, this is a sign because she’s not a big fan of public displays of affection. After a great concert from the band we went to see I tell her that I’m getting cold and ask her if we can go get my jacket.

Craigslist True Story

Put an ad on CL recently looking for a F or CPL for a BJ.

Had a couple respond and arrange a meeting. I drove to an empty parking lot along a busy road as instructed and waited. I was nervous and excited at the same time and even considered leaving once I saw they were 10 minutes late, but boy I am glad I didn't!

They pulled up in a large White pickup truck with a crew cab. I got out of my car and walked towards them. The wife opened her door and jumped out. She was about 5'5" with shoulder length blond hair. She had very short tight Jean shorts on and a large loose white T shirt that barely concealed her large tits. She smiled, gave me a quick hub and told me to climb in back.

The husband moved her front seat as far forward as it would go to give us room. They asked me to sit in the middle and pull out my cock.

The husband adjusted his mirror so he could see my cock and told me how nice it was, even though at 7 1/2" I feel I am fairly average.

Feelin’ His Way Through [mm][oral]

"You wanna stay over tonight? Mom's makin' pizza." Tad hoped it wasn't obvious how badly he wanted Mark to stay over. The last time Mark had rolled over in his sleep and put his arm around Tad's waist. Feeling his friend's breath on the back of his neck gave him the biggest boner he'd ever gotten. And thinking about it when he rubbed one out was better than anything he'd felt.

"Sure. Lemme call first." Mark put down the xbox controller and pulled out his cell phone. "Hey Mom. Yeah, I got a 96. Tad asked me to stay over. Naw, his Mom his here and makin' pizza for dinner. Thanks, I'll see ya tomorrow." After hanging up the phone, he picked up the controller. "It's cool."

"Cool," Tad said, hiding his smile. "Lemme go tell Mom."

Jumping over the couch, he jogged out of the living room and stopped in the kitchen. His Mom had changed after work and was all dressed up. "You mind if Mark stays over tonight, Mom?"

"Did you remember I had a date tonight?" she asked.

"We're just gonna play xbox. It's no big deal."

Kate Part 1, The Party

Just a little prelude to the story, there was a girl I spoke to frequently from college (for this story) named Kate. We started talking down the lines of sexual experiences and such and to my surprise she was rather innocent, yet open to trying new things. She even had some "fun" with one of her professors at university frequently. She would tell me about how she would go into his office between classes and he would pound the hell out of her while she tried to muffle her screams of pleasure from his office. Well being a cocky son of a bitch I told her that every single girl I have ever been with has ALWAYS told me I was their best orgasm. Not saying this was a lie or anything although it peaked her interests.

(24M/19F) Having sex with one of my students.

Hi everyone. I decided to create an account to share my story.

This all started a few weeks ago. I am a 24 engineering student, in order to get a few bucks I give some maths lessons.

In January I had a call from a 19 years old girl who wanted maths lessons to prepare for her exams. She's called Sabrina, average size, long raven hair, dark eyes a really cute smile, she was pretty thin with a kind of bubble butt, and the first time I met her, her cleavage seemed really stunning. She was always wearing sexy clothes: tight tank tops, bit see through shirts, fancy dresses, leggings, tight jeans. Lessons were cool with her, she was hard working and she was really smart, we appreciated working together. After 2 mounths of having lessons twice a week we were like friends. Once after a pretty intensive 4 hours lessons about improper integrals, I offered her a beer, we were talking about everything but maths, mainly of our respective lives. Since that beer, every time she came to my place, she was wearing some even more sexy clothes.

Good Christian girls wait until marriage…but I’ll take it in the bu[m] [f]or you

I was really good friends with Laura all throughout middle school and high school. We ended up going to the same college together across the country and became even closer. She was a pretty religious girl and hung out with pretty religious friends who I ended up getting decently close with.

Her room mate sophomore year was this gorgeous blonde named Melanie. Mel was about 5'4" C cup breasts and a thin yet remarkably curvy figure. She was rather flirty and whenever I would come by their apartment she would flirt heavily with me. I had always thought she was joking because she was dating one of the biggest guys on the football team. So, naturally I assumed it was with everyone. One more thing about Mel…She was kind of bitchy. She looked down on a lot of people and had a certain air about her. The kind of "I'm a hot Christian girl that will tease you until you beg…then do nothing because I'm saving myself" air about her.

A walk in the park [F/M]

This is from last summer. There was this girl, with whom we had a kind of a BDSM relationship thing going (Dominant/submissive).

So one night, at quite a late time, we went to the park. It was really quiet, but still the thought of getting caught was exciting. I stripped her naked and tied her on a tree, her back facing me at first. I had the whip I usually used with me, but I thought it would be better to just spank her using a branch. We were both overachievers and it seemed a good idea haha. So, I started spanking (or whipping?) her with a branch, while she counted every blow, thanking me after each one. If she would make a mistake, I would start all over. She did make some mistakes so the total count was a lot! After I was done, her ass and back were red and stinging in the most pleasurable way. Pain was never an issue with her

After that, I untied her, got her on her knees and tied her hands on the tree, above her head. I also tied her torso, so that she could not move. Which led to oral play. Of course, during all that verbal humiliation was happening.