Originally posted this last week as a response to a post on /r/DirtyWritingPrompts and have since posted it to an erotic fiction site, but I thought I should post it here to get some critiques and advice on how to better my writing as its been years since I've written anything. Please let me know what you think!
The day grew hot as Felix sat down at his desk to take a break from packing for his summer trip to Greece. He had gotten a job as a research assistant over the summer, and his flight was leaving in two days. He should have had it done earlier, but procrastination was always his strong suit, along with gaming and looking up random historical facts on the internet. Although now, as he opened up his laptop, history was the furthest thing from his mind.
Instead, he clicked the folder titled 'Frontline Tactics 2', and then opened the 'Sound Files' folder. Though instead of sound files, he found his stash of torrented porn. A few years earlier, his younger sister had accidentally found his downloaded porn, which he hadn't taken any precautions to hide, and got him grounded for six months. After that he had decided to keep it well hidden, and made sure to keep it behind fake folders. Even though he was 19, he still would prefer to not get in trouble over it.