Hi, I’m fairly new to the subreddit but I plan on posting quite often. Recently I’ve started writing a story that has sex quite central to its plot and I need some help improving the way I write about it.
Can you point me to some communities that specifically discuss written erotica? Forums, podcasts and all kinds of other resources are greatly appreciated!
Category: eroticliterature
JOI I wrote for my long distance girlfriend.
If there is a better place to post this, please tell me.
I wrote this based on a phone sex conversation we had. Should I continue? I like this sort of thing but I haven’t found any way to categorize it, or what to call it. Enjoy:
I want you to sit back. Open your legs and show me.
Just do it. Show me what you’re wearing underneath your skirt. Get comfortable.
And touch yourself.
Over your panties give yourself a nice,
cozy rub.
Make it satisfying. Big breath.
With your hand pressing down, squeeze your legs together and roll your hips slowly around.
When you open your legs again, pull your skivvies aside and give me a peek at you.
With your other hand
pull up on your skin very gently, just a bit
and show me your clit.
Now pull back and forth on your skin. press in a circle.
Make your clit move, but don’t touch it. I want to watch. Don’t touch it yet.
Stop.
Listen carefully.
The teasing girl [M/F] (part 4)
It’s monday and I’m a work. My balls feel… full. It’s a sensation I never experienced before, similar to blueballs but much stronger and with something more. Nothing change beyond that, I’m still incredibly horny, maybe even more than before, and my mind is still constently full of sexual thoughts. Thuesday is the same, except I can’t stop thinking about my girlfriend in addition to random sexual thoughts, because I’m going to be with her for the night.
Since she came at my home this evening, she constantly teases me. each time she bend over to take something, her butt is toward me. She took off her T-shirt, pretending it’s too hot here. I can’t stop staring at her breasts and she knows it. Before we eat dinner she take off her bra to “feel more confortable”. While we eat she look me in the eyes with a face that mean “You can’t prevent yourself from looking at my breasts, you’re unable to look me in the eyes for more than five seconds. You don’t control yourself, *I* control you.” One hour after she is wearing nothing but a string. She sometimes touch my chastity belt. In the bed, she wants me to please her, with my hand at the begining, then with my mouth. I rub her nipples at the same time. I find myself extremely turned on by this position, her pussy on my mouth and each of my hands on her breasts. She have two orgasms, and during both I almost cum despite not being stimulated at all. After her second orgasm she decide to stop, leaving me with a deep frustration again.
Need help finding a specific erotica
So i need help finding this erotica i found a while back, and i’ve completely forgotten the name. Basically, it is about a man/widower who ends up seducing his next door neighbor and her daughter. She has other daughters but he doesn’t end up seducing any of them, though he may have had sex with the second oldest? I don’t quite remember.
It has like 8 to 10 parts to it, and it starts with the man seeing his niext-door nieghbor’s husband screaming at and abusing the eldest daughter and wife then drags them into the house. He goes over to investigate and finds all the doors locked but hears screaming. He ends up kicking down the door and finds the husband and 2 friends raping the eldest daughter and wife. He, using martial arts, beats all 3 of them and has them arrested by the police. The series then basically just follows the man around as he first seduces the eldest daughter then the wife and they just have a bunch of random adventures that end up with them having sex a whole shit ton (obviously). In the end he ends up marrying both the wife and the daughter through some legal loophole or something i forget exactly.
Omelas 2 – Stone Sacrifice 11: Bad News (?/F rp v oral anal)
Nothing happens in this chapter, it is purely world-building.
There is no scenes of sadness where someone she loves dies. It isn’t sudden, even if that happened.
There are no city-sized tentacles coming out of the bay. Quinn doesn’t see the city destroyed in an Urotsukidōji-inspired scene where said imaginary tentacles tear through buildings searing for something. In fact, she doesn’t even run for her life when thousands of tendrils decide that she is the one to rape.
Nope.
**[Stolen Sacrifice 11: Bad News](https://tsade.com/nine-sisters/omelas/omelas-02/chapter-11/)** (?/F rp v oral anal)
Days later, Quinn is anxious to return to her lovers after being grounded. Thoughts of sex floated in her mind. But neither Rober or Skein show up for a long time and she begins to worry. Have they abandoned her? Were they no longer interested now they had their ways with her? Or is the answer far more dire?
**Patrons**
I’m hopefully coming to the end of one commission. Just a little editing and a round or two and I should be up to asking for lovely questions. The next one is going to be *Puppy Mill 2: From the Shadows* (or some other shadow-related title), which has been commissioned. I’m thinking about introducing a number of new characters, new plots, and a couple things happening around the story. Since that is the $5 level for [Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/tsade), those will get to vote on various aspects of the new novel.
Surprise Encounter Part 2 [Mf][Mdom][anal]
I emerge from the bathroom to find her in my bed. I smile, taking in the sight. She is face down in the pillows breathing softly. I run my hand over her knee highs as I approach. Softly I caress her ass and she shudders slightly as I trace the handprint that remains. As I make my way up her back she moans quietly into my pillow and wiggles her ass. And like that, I want her again. I lay down next to her and she turns to reveal a sly smile.
“You look like the cat who got the canary,” I muse.
“I feel like that cat,” she laughs and buries her head in the pillow.
I am weak, but blissfully content. I would fuck her again in a second, but I need to hold back at least for now. I place my hand on her back and feel the rhythmic rise and fall of her breathing. I forgot how much I miss little moments like this. Her smell, her warmth, her breath can all be very intoxicating.
“These pillows smell like you,” she mummers through the fabric.
The Lusty Librarian & the Alpha Male [MF] [dominated] [alpha-male] [submissive]
I’d waited long enough for the last customer to leave, and decided to go look for him. He’d shown up a few hours ago and I noticed him right away because he was pure perfection. Now it was time to close and he’d gone missing. I locked the front doors and headed through the cavernous building to find him.
He’d left a book open on the table and it brought me to a halt. The Complete Illustrated Kama Sutra. It had been ages since I’d had sex (in the real world), and I felt a tingle between my legs. It really didn’t take much to make that happen because I was perpetually horny.
The place was deserted, except for that super hot man, and no one was looking, so I decided to check the smutty book myself and take it home for the night. Smiling, I picked it up, but gasped in surprise when it was swiped from my hand.
I spun in shock, my eyes wide. “Goodness. That scared me,” I complained, my heart racing. It was that sexy man, and he was standing very close, wearing a cocky grin. A thrill shot through my entire body at the sight of him.
Surprise Encounter Part 1 [Mf][oral]
There’s a knock at the door. I look at the clock. 6:27.
“Interesting,” I mutter to myself as I secure my towel and head toward the entrance.
I open the door and there she is. Through the dark screen I can see she is lost in her thoughts, but quickly looks up. She studies my outline and discovers I am in a towel.
“You’re early. I am not ready.” I say as coyly as I can.
“Sorry. I wanted to talk with you before we met up later.”
“I’m confused,” I exhale loudly, “You wanted to talk to me before we met up later to hang out and talk?”
She laughs nervously, “Yes.”
“Well then come on in and make yourself at home.” I open the screen door with a loud squeak and I catch her surprise at my body. It is not like it used to be when she last saw me undressed. The thin, lean frame has been replaced by a well defined mass of strength and muscle.
I smile at her reaction; I like how it feels. My lust flares up inside me.
Not sure what to call this
So, there’s a type of sex story that really appeals to me but I’m not sure what to search for. I understand it’s horrible and should never be done irl, but stories are just fantasy. I’m not interested in debating the morals and ethics of it.
Basically, I like the idea of a girl and a guy going at it, but partway thru he switches out with someone else without her knowing it.
What is this called?
The teasing girl [M/F] (part 3)
The next days, nothing special happen. Now I understand what my girlfriend meant : erection and erotic thoughts continue to be more common and stronger, but they are more endurable. It’s like I subconsciously learned that I can’t do anything to it. I start paying attention to details I didn’t care about before : any breasts bigger than the average, any clothes that shows a bit of the curves of a girl. It’s the same mental stage than when I’m masturbating, but it’s a lot stronger and it never stops. I just don’t control it, these thoughts can’t be shut down.