Category: eroticliterature

“An Ode to You” Poem [Written for a Female Audience][Rom][Bd?](Seeking Criticism)

I wrote this for a user in Dirty Pen Pals who wanted a poem in order to “evaluate” potential candidates. The user wanted something “cute, sexy, and erotic,” and I tried to hit all three bases (yes, pun intended). Would you mind having a look and telling me what you think?

Narrator is male, writing for a female audience. I used the code formatting so the spacing would work as intended.

I’d appreciate any thoughts or comments. Thanks.

From there we came,
Whence we came,
Thus we came, together,
I came to get you,
For now and to come,
Never was forever better.

Here is a preposition:
To come, on you, in you, with you,
Twisting words in the hope
We’ll read and write about how
We’ll wreathe and writhe about.
A passionate oath binds us both
And you will be bound,
Arms, wrists, feet, tied: rope
Wrapped around the bedposts,
Wrapped around you,
Wrapped around me.

You are mine and I am you — I forgot where you end and I begin. Read more »

Midnight On The Fire Escape [mf]

Eden was a little chilled on this winter’s night. The petite brunette was wearing skimpy lingerie under her coat in hopes that her lover would want a midnight booty call after her shift at the airport. But when she saw him with another woman, she went to find other action in another stranger’s arms. She decided to try her luck at an after-hours club located in a row of three story brownstones with closed businesses on the first floor. She scurried around the dirty snow and down slushy walk, around the corner to the alley behind a closed pool hall where she climbed the back stairs to the second floor. She knocked on the door of club Infinity, an illegal after-hours club she’d been in twice before and after being let in, she moved from room to room with a beer in her hand looking at the groups of rough looking men playing pool, drinking beer and snorting coke from their fists. Weary women lounged on the worn couches, legs spread as an open invitation to partake upon their skanky goodies. Read more »