Genuinely curious If my writing is good

So I wrote a smut story called Crossdresser in the Dorm Room, and I never really intended to focus my writing on erotic stuff, I just simply wrote it in between a lot of other writing stuff that will never get published. After finishing it I decided I would upload it and see how it went, but after I got screwed on my cover by someone on fiverr I really lost all my care for it. About a month later I checked to see what happened to it and was surprised to find 6 copies sold and about 250 pages read on kdp select unfortunately no one left a review so I have no clue if anyone actually likes it. I dont know if its rude but Id like to leave the link to my book in case anyone cares to read it

Anniversary surprise!

This is my first ever erotic short story so all feedback is encouraged and appreciated

It has been one of the best years of my life, being at university was freeing and my boyfriend was the only person to have ever made me orgasm! My plans for our anniversary included home made brownies, a hot bath and ever hotter sex. Seeing as he was at work all day I had plenty of time to engineer the perfect night in.

The Dream [MF] [BDSM]

The sexual tension was already building. Small touches, knowing glances. It was as if it was all a dream.

You were on your knees in front of the wood fire, admiring your handy work and basking in how proud you were of yourself for getting it lit it perfectly the first time. You look up at me and see me looking proudly down at you. I bend and place a finger under your chin, lifting gently. You take the hint and stand in front of me, still staring into my eyes.

My hand traces down your left arm to your wrist, gripping lightly. My other hand grabs your right wrist and I lean against you pushing you backwards against the closed door to your room. Before you can even register what is happening you feel our lips meeting and the passion takes you over, kissing me back deeply. You break the kiss and whisper into my ear all the confirmation I needed – “Thank you….Sir”

[MF] Let’s Make Our Sex Life Great Again!

I grabbed you by the pussy: only after you gave me permission, though. I’m no Yanker, babes, and I’m no monster; I was gentle with that THANG. I rubbed that kittie up-and-down: also side-to-side, like I’d do the feline one. Your cat won’t scratch or bite a nigga, though. (Hold up, let me back up a bit.) That there va-jay-jay of yours, it does bite. I bet that thang is a hybrid: a mix of Red Snapper, Gator, Alligator Snapping Turtle, Alligator Gar, and Snapple fruit drink: you’re sweet, too. OOMPH, OOMPH, OOMPH, girl: now, I really wanna grab your muff box, anybody looking? Can I just get a quick glimpse of it? I promise I’ll smother your derriere with my nasty face; I promise to manipulate your cunny patch with my evil presence. Afterward, I’ll testify against myself in court; I don’t give a damn. Just let this nigga gobble up your vaginal nectar. Let a brother’s tongue and cheeks run amuck down there: that place that you don’t let too many guys venture to (unless you’re a THOT). Even if you’re a bit promiscuous, don’t drop your head; this is America. It’s home to a cornucopia of folks. Do your THOTTIE thang, girl. Wave your flag; hold that bitch up high.

Any other Authors like this?

I just read [this](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07DMX85MF) and was kind of surprised to find it had a somewhat-original narrative voice (unlike everything else, which reads the same, you feel me?.)

Anyone who’s read this know an author who has a similar style? I need more.

The Car Adventure (Part 1)

**Natalie is sex deprived in this as they have been busy lately and haven’t had that much sex if it seems rushed that is why (both characters are over 18)**

It was around 11:50 pm when Henry and Natalie finally left the movie theatre, they had just seen a comedy and started chatting about it while they made their way towards their car.

As they entered the car Natalie started feeling rather cold and asked: “Is it okay if I turn the heater on?” Henry looked at her and simply nodded. It was a dark and cold night, Henry was starting to feel tired, they had just stopped at a red light when Natalie noticed her Henry was drifting in and out of sleep, she had a thought and instantly wanted to kiss him.

She continued to stare at his pink lips thinking about having her bright red ones touching them, she looked around and noticed that they were still stuck in traffic but it was very dark and no one could see them, so she made her move but ever so slowly. Henry unaware of the kiss that was about to happen was beginning to fall asleep again, when suddenly he felt Natalie’s hands grab his face and bring it to hers, their lips met as he felt her tongue enter his mouth, he was confused but eventually caught on, he started kissing back…Natalie was letting out little moans each time their tongues met.

For a friend, part 2 [C & H] [MF]

Five glasses clink together above a round table. “To Connor!” Heads are thrown back, drinks are downed, and my thirtieth birthday celebration begins.

This night I’m out with my coworkers: Kyle, Alice, Rita, and, of course, Hayley. A few more will join us later in the night. I’ve worked with them all for years, but it was Hayley who organized this outing. Hayley, who I haven’t been able to touch or kiss or fuck since our night in the hotel room two months ago.

I shake that thought off. Those few hours were never meant to lead into anything more.

For tonight, though, our plans are simple: drinks and some food at a local, rowdy bar. No great surprises, no grand expectations. It’s exactly what I want and need. Hayley knows me well.

It’s also a welcome break for all of us after an endless barrage of spreadsheets and meetings and the general bullshittery of a corporate environment. A bit of excess will do us all good. We’ve already put in an order for more appetizers than five people can reasonably be expected to consume, and a second round of drinks is on the way.

The Housewife and the Pool Boy, Part 4 [mmF] [oral]

Chad, her sexy young pool boy, and Rick, his fit and sexy (and equally young) co-worker had just filled her mouth and ass with cum the prior week, so she had no idea what to expect out of their “pool service appointment” today. How could you get better than showing an 18-year-old stud how to fuck in the ass and to show what it feels like to be deep-throated to another incredibly good looking young man? She wasn’t sure it could.

Today she was wearing a skin-tight white strapless sundress, that hugged her body like skin. Her blonde hair was wavy and she was barefoot. She didn’t look like a mom, she looked like a sexy woman who needed to be fucked very badly. And that she was!

They came wearing their uniforms, of course, but under his hat, Rick’s hair was parted under his hat, in a hipster gentleman type part. She liked it. They left their shoes (and Rick’s hat) downstairs and without speaking, they followed her up the stairs to her bedroom once again. Again, Rick closed the door behind the three of them.

The Woodworker and the Temp, Part 1

Steve. He stood 6’3” tall and had a total sexy dad bod. Thick chest and wide shoulders, strong but with some meat on his bones. He had a beard which was full and dark, like his head of hair. He was a jack of all trades at work, but his attention was focused mainly on building. Tables, chairs, desks, you name it and he could draw it up and build it, beautifully no less. He wore tight blue jeans and a tee shirt everyday, a silver measuring tape clipped to his belt, yellow leather gloves hung from his back pocket and a pencil was usually behind his ear.

He walked through the aisles of the warehouse, a clipboard tucked under his arm as he looked up, surveying the finished goods he himself had made. A cluster of voices came up behind him, along with the sound of feet scuffling the concrete floors.

“Steve,” a fellow project manager had walked up behind him and alongside him was a beautiful young woman. “This is our new temp. She will be following up on the order statuses and communicating with customers on your builds.”

Erotica writer currently taking custom kink commissions

Hello! I am currently taking orders for custom kink/fetish literature commissions! Have someone you cannot help but think about fucking? Have a fetish you are dying to have played out? I may just be the gal you’re looking for!

I am happy to indulge your kinks, fetishes, fantasies; Whatever turns you on, I’m thrilled to write. My limits include rape, animals, and anyone who is under-age.

Every story is 100% custom typed for you to meet your every desire. My rates are on a client to client basis & as based on kinks, as well as length.

Below I will share snippet of a story I wrote for a client, this way you can get a taste of my writing style & see if I am someone whose work you’d get pleasure from reading.

If you are interested I would love to talk with you. Email: lilithkmae@gmail.com

Yours,

LM