[f] [First Person] A [succubus] begins to come of age. (This is a beginning to a work in progress, feedback welcome) [No sex yet] [Draft] [Incomplete]

This is my first story of this sort, and one of my first fiction works, for that matter. I haven’t gotten far into it, and was looking for some critique on what I’ve written so far. What I’ve written at this point is ecchi at best, and I promise as it goes on, it’s gonna get a lot more dirty.

This is meant as a setup to the story, before anything really happens. I’d like some feedback, and suggestions regarding my style, voice, etc.

There are definitely some spots I already cringe at while reading, but I’d like to hear from you.

Morning Protest [ff][masturbation]

I wake to the sound of running water. She’s taking a shower. Despite knowing she’s in the other room, I impulsively reach my arm over to her side of the bed, hoping to feel her skin. When my hand reaches nothing but ruffled sheets, I can’t help but feel disappointed that she got up to shower without me. I throw off my covers in a sort of pouty protest, and look to the washroom door, ajar, as steam starts flowing out. I could join her.. but why reward her for abandoning me like this? 

I hear her clothes hit the floor, the shower curtain open and close. The thought of her slender naked figure, water trickling down her curves, might make this peaceful protest harder than originally planned.. Her and her boy cut, jet black hair. Freckles covering her face, shoulders, back and arms. Her petite figure, with soap and water tracing the shape of her perfectly pert little breasts, capped with their delectable pink nipples that fit the shape of my mouth so well..

Doctor Natalie [doctor][orgasm][helplessness]

“Please come in,” I heard in response to my gentle knocking on the door.

I hesitantly reached for the handle, took and deep breath and entered the room. I saw doctor Natalie. My attention was immediately drawn to her beautiful and professional look. She was a young, slender woman with average sized boobs, sharp facial features and full pink lips.

“Please take a seat,” she told me pointing to the chair in front of her.

I walked to her and sat on the chair.

“What seems to be the problem?” She asked.

“I recently felt something on my testicle. Something like a lump and I don’t think it was there before,” I replied describing why I came here.

I left out a few details, like the fact that I noticed the lump when I was masturbating. I didn’t think it was important and mentioning it to the doctor would only make me more stressed.

“I understand. Did that ever happen before?” She asked.

“No,” I replied truthfully.

“Any genetic diseases in the family?” She added.

“No,” I said once again.

I met a goddess at a Music Festival, Part I (MF, casual encounter, sensual).

By midday, the sun’s rays were warm, but the gentle crispness of the air reminded you it was still spring. The first thing you notice here, at Melody Park, are the towering, almost mystical oak trees. The attendants collecting cash for parking and directing traffic are wearing tie dye, dreadlocked, and greet you with a smile and a warm, “welcome home.” I have to remind myself to let go of my tension of my high stress life, and submit to this magical, welcoming place. With a deep breath, I park my car, gather my gear, and walk through the gates, where I’m now under the canopy of oaks.

Along with my group of friends, we scout a prime spot to pitch our tents, and assemble our hang out spot for the weekend. This is my first time at the Renewal music fest since my separation. My friends know that I may need some time to wander on my own this weekend, which is already beginning to feel liberating. Once we are all set up and settled, we sit under our group canopy, passing around a couple joints, and sharing our anticipations for the festival. The little amount of sun that crept through the oak trees is disappearing, and the night of music, dancing, and releasing tension is about to begin.

Emma Stone’s Free-use Feet for Public Funding (Part 2) [MF, Dub-con, Voyeurism, Cumplay, Free-use, Feet, Socks, Scentplay]

(A short addition to my introductory post. I strongly recommend reading Part 1 first to provide context if you haven’t already, it’s not very long. I’m not sure on the sub’s policy of providing links so you can just find part 1 through my profile if you need to. Again, this is niche fetish stuff so definitely not for everybody, but I’m always open to suggestions and criticism.)

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**News Article Extract: “Blackmail: The Dark Side of Free-use Feet?”**

Emma Stone’s lawyers have today alleged that the so called “Free-Use Feet” arrangement of their client have led to a whole slew of sexual assaults and bodily violations through the use of blackmail. The concerns raised indicate that although the law only permits “free-use” of the subject’s feet, this freedom may also be used to coerce or blackmail the subject into additional sexual acts…

…”He wouldn’t let her sleep… He would threaten her that unless she complied, he would tickle her feet all night long for multiple nights in a row… Unless she complied with his demands”…

…So far the governmental body behind this new campaign for public funding have declined to comment…

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The Christian Girlfriend Part 3 [MFF]

It had been a few months since Mary and I started having sex, she was open to trying new things but she also exactly knew what she liked. If she tried it and did not enjoy it we were never doing it again. Tonight was date night and we decided to go to our usual bar. Our relationship was still a secret, so we tried to avoid places we knew our family and friends frequented.

We were sitting in a booth enjoying some food, drinks and conversation. The bar was large, had live music and was dimly lit. The ambiance and the company was amazing. Since it was a Tuesday it wasn’t as packed and the music was also more mellow.

Mary sipped on her drink and nonchalantly asked, “Where to tonight?”

Since we couldn’t meet at each other’s homes we’d find isolated places to make out or just outright have sex. My favorite one so far had been the detached garage at her place, I snuck in at two in the morning and she bought pillows and blankets to lay on the cold floor. We fucked right behind her dads vintage Porsche. Hers was in a classroom at her college after hours. We role played the teacher student act there and had to run towards the end when a security guard came by. That chase left us so excited we fucked again in my car after we escaped. The excitement of being caught really elevated the experience.

A fateful flight [MF] [Indian]

Arun had just spent two weeks at his hometown of Chennai, and was headed back to work in the Bay Area. He said his farewell to his parents at the entrance of the airport, and headed towards the Baggage Drop counters. As he awaited his turn, he started planning the next few days at work and at home and realized how excited he was about going back. He was looking forward to work on the next project at his Software Engineering job. His job wasn’t exactly rocket science, but it paid reasonably well and was well respected in the community. Something he hoped he could use to his advantage towards scoring a date soon.

“Sir, I can assist you now.” The attractive female airline representative said with a smile.

His Check-in bags weighed a ton, but he swiftly placed them on the luggage belt.

“Wow,” she said, “you are really strong.”

[Story][FFF/FFM] The Unicorn’s Other Horn 2 [Transformation][Unicorn TGTF][Futa Unicorn]

Hello friends! This is my first post to this subreddit but I have a good number of submission to r/transformation. However my content is all stories so I thought maybe you all would enjoy seeing my stuff. Today I bring you the sequel to [The Unicorn’s Other Horn](https://www.reddit.com/r/transformation/comments/ew0y6o/story_the_unicorns_other_horn_futa_unicorn_tf7000/), a delightful tale of transformation into a Futa Unicorn. So if you love transformation, give it a read! If you’re a lover of regular erotic fiction, give it a try anyway, you might find you like it.

[The Unicorn’s Other Horn 2](https://www.deviantart.com/prettypettypet/art/The-Unicorn-s-Other-Horn-2-829470999?ga_submit_new=10%3A1580963453)

Be sure to also check out my [Deviantart](https://www.deviantart.com/prettypettypet) for all of my stories.

I also do commissions, details [here!](https://www.reddit.com/r/transformation/comments/d425fl/unbound_fantasies_is_doing_story_commissions/)

A Casual Pleasantry

Just a quick little jotting of words. Feedback would be lovely:)

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Sitting in the corner chair, I am reading my book–a Hemingway collection–as she elegantly

approaches the seat across from mine.

An older woman, late thirties maybe, with a light brown complexion and dark hair. She smiles–

her smooth, glossed lips parting. Her dimples accentuate her soft face in a beautiful manner.

I pull out my notebook and look down, beginning to take notes of the casual, unknowingly

delightful encounter.

She lets out a deep sigh and sits down, her lovely curves filling out her skirt and blouse.

“Hemingway, eh?” The question directed at me, I look up just as she is uncrossing her legs,

to shift her body. I try not to stare as her legs open, but I am absolutely delighted by her

lacy pantyhose which run up her perfect thighs.

I manage to utter out a dazed “yeah,” trying my absolute hardest not to show the hot redness

I feel approaching my cheeks.

FORTNITE or CYBER SEX? [CYBER][MF][CHAT]

I’m a “gamer girl” I work nights at the local pizza place my usual day consists of me waking in the morning grabbing my breakfast turning on my PC and watching my favourite streamers on Twitch or YouTube while I eat.

After that I either jump on Fortnite to do some daily challenges or watch some Pornhub and get off then jump on Fortnite. Today I was undecided I was really keen to get the new skin so wanted to earn some vbucks but at the same time was really wanting to get off.

I decided no I don’t have time I better get online and smash out some missions. Lucky for me my friend Jo was online he’s high level on Save the World and we would get through the missions quickly together. I send him a message asking if he wants to do some missions, he replies “yeah sure give me a minute”

I start a party and send an invite. Jo joins and I say “Good morning” he replies “Hey Candy” his voice oh my…. and the way he says my name…I really should have got off before I got on.

“I sent an invite”