(I apologize in advance for any typos, this was done entirely from an app on my phone. Feedback would be wonderful!)
She finally reached her vehicle parked along the treeline. Fumbling around in her purse, her fingers wrapping around the cluster of keys. For a moment she stood by the driver side door, the sun was setting in the distance, a beautiful mosaic of oranges, yellows and reds. She leaned back and closed her eyes. It was a beautiful night but it had been such a long day.
She was burnt out on her job. Working a desk for 10 hours a day, her supervisor not the most congenial person she’d met, weighed on her. She was thinking through the day. The man had gotten onto her for some of the simplest mistakes. A typo on an email she had needed to proofread for him that had gone out to the district; a numerical error that she had fat fingered had a price quote with a $10 discrepancy; and she had forgotten his dry cleaning two days ago and he was still upset about that, bringing it up twice today.