My short story.. please critique it and help me out (my first one)

The Millionaire Secretary

Laying there, covered in sweat…breathing heavily…. I can’t believe that we were together, even if it was only one night..
Ugh, working at this office has been a drag! Computer typing, paperwork, coffee day in and day out. I’m Milla by the way. I’m just your average secretary for this big wig company. I consider myself an average 28 year old plus size woman. I’m about five foot seven;230 pounds.. give or take. I’m not your average kind of lady. I have my hair half shaved and have a different color every month. My wardrobe is a little more eccentric than my working counterparts. I like wearing loud colors,tight skirts, you name it! You give me patterns and I’ll give you fashion! I got this job because my girlfriend knows the owner of the company. Yeah, I have a girlfriend but we have an unconventional relationship. We’re bisexual and don’t mind sharing partners.We met at a party over two years ago and the sparks flew. I was her first black girlfriend but color doesn’t really matter. She loves me for who I am.
Back to my day at work..

Ruined wedding leads to big surprise

I was due to be married to my long time partner, she had really pressured me into putting a ring on her finger but I had lingering doubts. She wasn’t a very sexual person from day one, she said she had no fantasies whilst I had needs and was up for most things.
Despite all the necessary arrangements being made I was realising that I couldn’t consign myself to a life of very little sex and decided to speak my long time friend to see what she thought.
My long time friend was very different to my wife to be, she was beautiful, brunette and petite with a great figure and real lust for life and a twinkle in her eye. She had married in her mid 20’s and moved to the opposite end of the country, she was the one that got away but we’d always kept in touch and we were a good ear to each other’s problems.
She said she thought I would be sad without a sex life and i should think carefully about what I was about to do.
I called the wedding off the next day, much to my fiancé’s devastation. It cost me a fortune but felt I’d made the right decision. I’d booked a few weeks off work so decided to go on my honeymoon by myself.
Arriving in St Lucia I made my way to the hotel, it was an amazing 5 star all inclusive set in amazing grounds with a sea view. On arrival in my room I opened the balcony to find my hot tub looked out at the sea and the mountain. It was full of petals and the room was decorated for our arrival as a couple. This made me a little sad but once I’d eaten and had a few beers I sat in the hot tub as the sun went down thinking of the future ahead.
The next morning I woke to the sounds of birds and the sea crashing against the shore, I had breakfast, booked a massage for that night and went off to explore the island.
What a place, I walked for miles and decided to walk on the paths leading towards the mountain above the beach, it wasn’t too high but had great vantage points above the beaches. Suddenly I reached a beach that was very secluded, down on the beach were a young couple, early 20’s, good looking and nobody else, they were unaware of my presence as the girl was clearly stroking her clit with her bikini bottoms nowhere to be seen. I couldn’t leave but made sure I had a good vantage point. Her fella strode over and whipped out what I can only describe as the biggest cock I’ve ever seen, his girl devoured it and worked his shaft hard, she was clearly an expert and by the amount she was getting in her mouth had no gag reflex. I was getting hard and with nowhere to be seen I started to stroke my cock slowly. Down on the beach the girl was now riding the guy and his massive weapon and was clearly close to the edge, he turned her over and she was facing me as he impaled her from behind. She came hard and her screams were surely heard by others. I couldn’t contain myself much longer, and as her boyfriend came all over her tits I found myself shooting my load too. I must have made a noise though as the girl looked up and saw me. Luckily she just gave me a smile, got up, grabbed her boys hand and went to clean off in the water. I popped my shorts back up and decided to head back to the hotel barely believing what I’d just seen.
After a few hours sleep and a meal the masseuse arrived. She was extremely beautiful and told me to strip to my underwear, I was wondering if I could contain my excitement but laid face down on the bed and felt her remove my boxers and place a towel over my backside, she then told me to wear some headphones which were playing calming music and placed a face mask on me so that I could be completely relaxed.
The massage started slowly and it was exactly what I needed, she worked her magic and slowly took away all the stress that the previous weeks had built up. After about ten minutes of massaging the top half of my body she started on my calves and slowly worked her way up the body. Admittedly I could feel an erection building and she obviously noticed as she kept brushing it as she worked up the inside of my thighs. She motioned me to turn over and suddenly I felt very exposed, all of a sudden I had two pairs of hands massaging the front of my body and I felt like I was going to burst. What happened next shocked me as an oily finger suddenly started working it’s way into my ass, the shock made it feel amazing and another hand started to work my shaft, I could now only feel one pair of hands and felt a little confused but was enjoying this way too much. The finger in my ass was replaced by two and expertly massaged my prostate as the masseuses lips suddenly took my cock into her mouth, the sensation was amazing and I couldn’t last long at this pace. Suddenly the sucking stopped and fingers taken out, I could now feel what felt like a cock touching my hole, it obviously wasn’t real though and the rubber shaft breached my defences, this had never been done to me before and the first few minutes were a mixture of pain,confusion and extacy as she picked up the pace. She was now pounding me hard, it felt amazing but after a few minutes she stopped, removed the strap on from my ass and proceeded to climb on me and lowered herself on my cock.
My potential wife was a distant memory as she bounced on my cock, I felt myself getting close to the edge and my breathing was getting ragged, sensing this she jumped off my cock, got me to my feet and proceeded to suck my cock until i shot my load all down her throat. I nearly collapsed at the intensity of the orgasm I’d just had. All of a sudden my headphones were taken out and the blindfold removed, my eyes adjusted but could barely believe what I was seeing, stood in front of me was my lifelong friend, the woman I’d wanted to fuck my whole life.
She just said that she couldn’t let anybody else have me. She’d left her husband, jumped on a plane and told the hotel she was my new wife and when they asked if I still wanted the masseuse she accepted but secretly met the masseuse to hatch her plan. Needless to say we spent the few weeks, fucking and sucking all over the island and I suddenly realised that this was the life I’d wanted with the person I wanted and life was good. TBC

[F4M] A Moment Of Silence [barely legal] [dd/lg] [Daddy] [Babygirl] [Teen] [Consenting Nonconsent] [Sleep sex] [cum on my face] [cum on my tits] [please, daddy]

My names Red and I’ve got maaaaajor senioritis. Nothing bores me more than these stupid lectures but if i don’t graduate, Daddy would be pretty disappointed in me.

He works so hard at the bar just to afford housing and food and on top of that is trying to launch a Shopify webstore so he can quit and work from home.

He works evening shifts and doubles on the weekends and when he’s home, it’s straight to his computer.

My only job is to get good grades and do my homework. I should consider myself lucky.

I wish i repay daddy somehow. I feel bad cuz he spent a lot of money on me last week to make sure my 18th was the best birthday ever. And OMG it was. Everybody came and it was a lot of fun.

…All thanks to daddy…

(d….Ed….)

“RED!!”

Huh?

I jolt up from my desk. And look around the classroom. My face flushes and i can feel the judgemental stares of my peers.

“Looks Red’s name matches her face!”

A wolf’s tale

The first I knew that I was being hunted was the arrow that sliced my shoulder. Its silver tip burning the skin as it grazed the flesh near my neck. Another couple of inches and it would have been my throat.

I spun round and scanned the tree line, the nails of my hands extending into claws. A slight tingle in my eyes and I was sure they had taken on their sky blue colouration. They always did when I released the wolf within. I controlled the power and urge to let my lupine side free. Many of my kin had met their end because they weren’t able to keep their beast under control.

I watched the tree line for signs of the next attack which I was sure would come. Ethereal fingers of fog glided through the tree as the waning moons light shattered and broke on the outstretched limbs of oak and pine, falling to earth in silver shards.

I allowed my lungs to fill with the night bourn smells of the forest. Two scents caught my attention, another wolf. A bitch if my nose didn’t deceive me and the fragrance of roses.

Euphoria Hotel P7: Sexy Nightclub Adventure Leads to Naughty Couple Swap (MMFF) (orgy)

Aaron and Angela needed to refuel at dinner, preferring to just watch the activities around them while they ate. At a nearby table, a dude had dropped an employee’s shorts and was enjoying dessert off of his erection. In a booth on the corner, a tanned muscular guy was alternating kissing an equally muscular dude and a small athletic girl. Behind Aaron, Fabian had decided his dinner companion was his first course and spread her onto the table to eat.

After dinner, they showered and changed to hit the resort’s night club. Angela was admiring herself in the mirror and said, “what if we try to find another couple tonight?” Aaron walked over to drape his arms around her. “What did you have in mind?” “We grind up against other guests at the club and find a sexy couple to bring back here and play with.” She smiled devilishly.

Like everything else at the Euphoria Hotel, the resort’s club at times felt like a normal night club, but had that sexual Euphoria Hotel flair. Plenty of people were dancing and drinking, but others were openly taking advantage of the hotel’s openness. On the way to the bar, they walked around a topless girl bobbing her mouth in time to the pounding bass on a guest’s dick.

Staying Employed, Part 9 (mmf)

I woke at 2:30am in a panic. My back was caked with dried cum and it was pitch black. Groggily I threw on my original clothing, stuffed the newer items in my duffle with no mind to folding them, and scurried out the door. The stranger (could I still say that?) had been nowhere to be seen. He must have left after our encounter. Half running down the hall, I frantically pressed the elevator button, racing to retrieve my car from the valet.

Somehow I didn’t get a speeding ticket on the way home. I snuck into the house as quietly as I could. In the living room the TV was on, and Keith was asleep on the couch. With the light sound of his snoring fading in the background, I tiptoed to the bathroom where I had a quick shower, scrubbing away at my back with hot water and soap. I took care to clean up any remaining lube from around my ass, too. Feeling raw both physically and emotionally, I dumped my clothes in the washing machine and crept to bed.

My first go at erotica (P.S. I wish I was the redhead)

The campfire shone brightly in the pitch-colored night. The Milky Way was painted above them as a vision of beauty. The woods around them were a comfortable barrier between them and the outside world. Slightly intoxicated college students, of a certain social status, were exchanging gossip and ghost stories. Lust filled couples were leaving the company here and there. Returning to dorms or looking for a private spot to fuck.
Before they knew it, just one girl remained with three of her senior classmates. The breathtaking redhead was meek and coy. The scene was evocative of a sacrificial lamb and three lions. She knew each of them well and had often fantasized about being dominated by each of them, far more often than she would care to admit.
They carried on, laughing about baseball practice, seemingly ignorant of her presence or existence. It was thrilling for Scarlett to be ignored. Desire burned in her belly and she felt her panties saturate, her pussy was soaked and throbbing. She stood up to leave. Brad, the alpha of the group lifted an eyebrow, “Where are you going, Scarlett?”
She felt her whole body burn, she laughed timidly, “I was just going to drive home.” It came out broken, evidently displaying her desire.
“You’ve had a few of those.” Tanner gestured to the Michelob Ultra hanging loosely in her hand. Logan stood up, “Let’s drive her home.”
Scarlett couldn’t hold back a flirtatious grin. She was perfectly fine to drive but a wanton plan was starting in her brain, a way to make her fantasy of a gang bang happen. She had been, unabashedly, living in a dream world for months. Riding her dildo and training her throat and asshole all night, pretending to be used by the womanizers. A virgin, she had been saving her first real dick experience for the most attractive but sadistic men she could find. A true masochist, she longed to receive the pain-pleasure combo she had been dreaming of. “I wouldn’t want to be an inconvenience.” She lied.
“It’s really no trouble”, Tanner asserted as he pushed the button on his keyfob to unlock his Land Rover parked nearby. She led the way up the hill, conscious of making her ass jiggle invitingly as the guys followed her. She smirked at the unintelligible noise of whispering.
“What are y’all doing after this?” She asked hopefully, keeping her back turned.
“Just headed back to the house,” Brad said flatly, jabbing Tanner and looking pointedly at Logan. The cool breeze confirmed that Scarlett had saturated her leggings. Logan opened the back door for her as Brad and Tanner got into the front seat. As the car lights came on, Scarlett’s wetness was pretty apparent to Logan. “Are you okay?” He asked uncomfortably, likely thinking she had pissed herself.
Scarlett, feeling brave, retorts, “Ya, honestly I’m pretty horny.”
“I’d say so,” Laughs Tanner drawing his attention to the matter.
“She’s a drunk freshman, don’t even bother with her she’ll say she was raped,” Brad remarks, looking annoyed.
“I’m completely lucid, and I want all three of you to take turns fucking my virgin holes.” Scarlett retorts, gaining confidence from the looks on Tanner and Logan’s faces.
“Only if you let us record it.” Brad challenges as Tanner started the car and pulled onto the main road. Logan had already started rubbing her clit through her pants.
“I’d want a copy for myself,” She smiles as she starts stroking Logan’s hard-on through his jeans. “Being gang-banged is my biggest fantasy.”
Brad places his phone on the car mount and turns it on video mode. Logan pulls his massive veiny cock. Scarlett eagerly starts applying suction to the head and stroking the shaft lovingly. She drools all over him, as she messily massages his perfect dick with her silky throat. She caresses his supple balls as he grabs her by her ponytail and uses her mouth and throat roughly. He groans as she gasps, sputters, and enthusiastically sputters all over him. Brad, continues to record as Tanner pulls into the driveway of the massive frat house.
“We’re going to keep you to ourselves slut.” Tanner announces as he kills the engine. “I don’t think you can handle us anyway, being a virgin and all.” He hops out of the SUV and opens her door. Logan pulls his cock out of Scarlett’s mouth and Tanner roughly snatches her out of the vehicle and throws her over his shoulder. He smacks her round, fat ass multiple times before he carries her through a back door, up some stairs, and into a private den. Logan and Brad, close behind secure the door and set up their phones to document Scarlett’s deflowering. Tanner throws her onto a leather sectional and pulls his shirt and pants off. Excitedly, Scarlett stands up and gives them a show. She lets her hair down and flips it, she slowly sways back and forth as she unbuttons her flannel. She lets it slide off her shoulders to reveal she’s not wearing a bra. Her bare perky breasts were a perfect handful. She pinches her nipples and shakes her tits invitingly at the trio. She turns around and bends over, shaking her ass as she strokes her long legs until her slender hands rest flat on the floor. Brad begins to spank her rippling booty. Tanner kneels in front of Scarlett and starts fucking her pretty little mouth and slender throat. She gasps and chokes, gangs, and cries as his huge cock slides in and out of her wet orifice. He pulls out suddenly and rewards her with his hot milk all over her perfect face and wanting tongue. She laps up what she can gratefully. Logan enters the scene and commands her to remove her soaked leggings. Scarlett pulls her thong up high to where it parts her pussy lips. She pushes her fat juicy lips together and wetness seeps out of her. He bends her over slightly as he pulls her panties down her smooth ass. He commands her to spread her plump cheeks and present what she has to offer them. She exposes two exemplary holes. Her cunt was so wet she appeared to have already came.
“My pussy feels so hot and it’s aching for dick.” She moaned mindlessly, grinding her little snatch against Logan’s raging boner, begging lustfully for cock. Brad appears in front of her and begins to brutally pound her fragile throat. She squirts all over Logan who had been grinding the tip of his cock into her pussy her several minutes while he rubbed her succulent clit.
“Let’s stretch out her asshole,” Brad suggests. He sits on the sofa and strokes his cock. “Come here, princess.” Scarlett kneels before him and starts spitting and slobbering all over Brad’s curved dick. She turns around and starts grinding her ass and pussy all over his dick.
She claps her cheeks against him and begs, “please fuck my virgin asshole, please Brad, PLEASE. This is all I’ve dreamed of all semester. Destroy my pure, perfect holes. I want you and all your friends to use me as a cum dumpster.” He eases his saliva soaked cock into her asshole, which was beginning to gape and beg for penetration. At first, it hurt her constricted opening, but once he was inside, she couldn’t control herself. She gasped in pleasure, “FUCK ME HARD!” She shouts. Laughter and cheers were heard from downstairs. There was knocking at the door. As Scarlett was riding his cock reverse cowgirl, Logan began to caress her tits while she teased him with slow licks from his gooch to the tip. She wrapped her soft, plump lips around his huge dick, pushing it deeper and deeper down her throat until the entirety of his dick was in her throat and his balls were slapping her chin.
“Can you swallow my balls too?” Logan proposed as he forced his dick even further into her until he could slip his soft testicles into her accommodating mouth. She gagged helplessly until he decided to reward her with oxygen.
The door unlocks, a few other frat boys enter the scene and survey the exchange. “Do you want to fuck my whore throat too?” She teases, shaking and bouncing her stupendous rear all over Brad’s cock. “Too bad. You just get to watch me fuck these three and jack off.” She gloats brazenly. Brad grabs her across her chest and waist with his dick still deep inside of her ass. He forces her onto the ground and starts hammering his cock into her as hard as he can.
“Shut up stupid bitch,” He orders as he leaves angry red handprints on her swollen ass. He invites a newcomer to spread her legs open and fill her pussy. “I tell you what to do, you’re a fuck toy.” He grabs a fist full of her hair and brings her head up to his, “you’re my slave now,” he whispers into her ear. I can show anyone what happened here today, but I won’t, as long as you’re a good little slut,” He mocks. Scarlett can’t help but laugh triumphantly. She had won. She felt so lucky to be a good little slut for them. She couldn’t hold back any longer, she came again and she moaned and screamed and scratched the floor. Hot white cream spilled out of her vagina and she cried out “God, yes, make me cum!” Her legs shook and she quivered in delight. The man fucking her pussy came deep into her as did Brad into her ass. They pulled out and she pushed their loads out of her holes to make an appealing cream pie.
They continued to torture her with orgasms for the better part of the next hours, each having his way with her willing holes as often as he desired. When she was done she was covered from head to toe in sticky cum, with bruises all over her fine tush and body. She appreciatively pleased each of them and was rewarded with more cum than any girl could ever hope for. Her fantasy was finally fulfilled, her purposed realized. A perfect, willing cum slut to apathetic masters, who could properly keep the precious brat in her rightful place.

[Request] A family is very open to each other, buys an RV, and gets friends and their pastor to join in

It was a serial will lots of chapters (50+).

There’s a mom, dad, two sons, and a daughter. They also had a girl staying with them named Lexi because she couldn’t live with her dad. They buy an RV and go take nudist trips. They meet another camper (Lexi’s dad) and get them in on the fun. Their Pastor Jim also finds out and joins in too, regularly.

I Miss Sexting Part 3 [MF, Sexting, Toys, Teasing, Female Masturbation]

*Lucy, I’m sorry but I won’t be home for at least another 3 weeks. My dad has broken his leg and needs me to stay.* Alex. She hadn’t heard from him for two days. He hadn’t acknowledged the picture of her wet pussy and plugged ass. She was mad and decided not to respond to him. If she did, she would only start a fight and that wouldn’t help anything. Instead, she looked at the message she had received from the stranger just before the one from Alex.

*I think we should have some fun today.* It was quite late already, and she had to work in the morning, but this would probably help her to sleep. She decided to reply and get off before bed, explaining she had to be up early for work. They had been texting at least a few times every day for almost a week now. Her pussy was instantly wet at the sight of a message from him. She had used the bottles again last night and was enjoying using slightly bigger things in her pussy.

She got what she wanted and more … [FMM]

We have been talking on reddit for a while now and you’ve asked me to bring a friend to yours when you are all alone and waiting for us.
I text you that we are at the door and ready for you. You open the door to us in tiny lil lingerie teasing us with what will happen I step forward and grab you by your tiny waist and fat ass and whisper in your ear that we are going to use your sexy body for our pleasure now.

I grab you by your hair and push you to your knees and instruct you to suck that cock you have been dreaming of. You unbuckle my belt and reach in to grab my growing cock. You start to lick up and down the length of my cock getting it rock hard. I am done with your teasing and shove my cock deep down your throat.
Do you gag?

Doesn’t matter we’ll teach how not to of ruin your makeup trying. While you struggle to take all of big cock you go into a trance of horniness knowing that you have another cock to please.
You reach out to my friends slacks and pull out his long cock too. Holding it your hand just makes you so wet that your panties are soaked.