Poem about oral submission (I’d appreciate feedback)

Hi, I’m working on an erotic poem and I’m not sure if I’m heading in the right direction. This is the first draft – I’d love to get some feedback. I want to hint about submission through my poem, and I don’t know if needs more descriptions or something.

You’re gentle caresses one moment

Harsh whips the next

Nestled in the sweet spot between

Love and abuse

For I’m a slave to pain

Treasuring the black and blue

Left behind by you

Gentle pretence doesn’t last long

Your eyes shine with fiery dominance

Commanding me silently

My lips slick with anticipation,

Greet you eagerly

As guttural groans escape your lips

My loins burn in response

Sweet wetness running down milky thighs

A carnal cry dying around your shaft

Hot wetness running down rosy cheeks

As I crave every inch of you

With every inch of me

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Taking in suggestions / requests

I’m currently taking in requests or suggestions for writing, to try and keep off the boredom of lock down. I will do anything with a few obvious exceptions. I can personally pm you the story (my insta is ellisboots2) or post on reddit when it’s finished, your choice. Please either say what you want in the comments or pm me on reddit or Instagram. I’m not a professional or anything, so I’m not looking for anything in return. Thanks!

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The Magic Box (A Jizzney Princess Parody)

*Once upon a time, in the vibrant kingdom of Analdelle lived a girl. With tanned skin and curly hair, she was often described as the most beautiful woman in all of the realms. Because of this impossible beauty and the power it had over mankind, the girl was able to fuck every man from Heare to Therr.*

“Oh, fuck this,” Nym stomped her foot, muttering to herself. “It’s the same story every day. I’m not fucking anyone trapped in this tower.”

She leaned onto the window ledge and gazed across the Big Bush, a vast forest that the crooked tower was nestled within. Although a beautiful blend of vibrant colours, the forest was a dangerous place to be; fiendish fae and mammoth monsters all called it home. Fortunately the tower was protected by the Wizards charms, and just for luck the door was locked at all times.

The Wizard (she didn’t know his actual name) was the only person Nym knew. She’d woken up in the tower on her eighteenth birthday, and he’d taken care of her ever since. There were memories of her life before that floated around her head, but like butterflies they seemed impossible to catch.

Diary of a Very Bad Girlfriend – Chapter 1 – The Discovery

My name is Jessica, and I need help. My life should have been great. Just graduated high school. Nice parents. Moving into my own place with my boyfriend before starting college. It should have been every girl’s dream. So why was I so miserable. Well, it had to do with said boyfriend. Toby. Nice guy. Caring and sweet. But he lacks in a few areas… well… one specific area.

He sports a three inch dick. Four if we’re being generous. And all he wants to do in bed is a boring old missionary position. To make matters worse, he thinks he’s some sort of love god. Yeah, I think love gods last longer than thirty seconds. And they can definitely offer more than just once a week. It was so frustrating. Why couldn’t this guy be the complete package?

My friend Rachel was the only one who knew about my frustrations. She decided that we should go to a party that was happening on campus that night. Plenty of beer. Great opportunity to meet our future classmates. I thought, why not? Rachel and I wore our tightest dresses to show off our bodies. Toby wore baggy pants and a stained sweatshirt. Total turnoff.

I’m Not Done Yet [nsfw]

Desi has been cowgirl riding me for 20 minutes now, and I’ve already nutted her twice. Could she possibly milk anymore out of me? My cock is throbbing, and my balls are painfully tight. She wants more and is expecting to get more as she continues her furious ride. Though I didn’t think I could, I explode once more, another load of semen deep inside of her. My third and my final load.
My brain literally feels like it shattered after that last blow. Thankfully, she had enough and gets off me. I’m so exhausted, all I can do is lay there, breathing heavily as my heart tries to calm down and my cock softens to a flaccid state of fatigue.
It’s only been a minute. A whole sixty seconds and I feel her wrapping her hand around my limp cock. I look down at her, then throw my head back onto the pillow, closing my eyes as Desi manages to masturbate me to another erection. She looks up with a smile and says, “Giddy Up Cowboy. I’m not done yet.”

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Babysitter’s Discovery part 04

After several tongue swirling kisses of passion, Anna pulled Emma to her feet, and said, “Follow me.”

Emma did so, and was fascinated to see the tattoo that Anna had. It was just above the beginning of her rear cleft, and a large, very red rose had its petals open to a colorful butterfly hovering just above it. Emma thought that it looked sexy as all hell. She couldn’t resist, she reached out, tracing her fingers along the design.

Anna let out a sigh of pleasure, and she said, “Do you like my new tattoo?”

Emma whispered, “It’s so sexy, I’d love to get one, if I didn’t have to get needled, that’s scary!”

Anna grinned, and said, “I didn’t get needled for this one. It’s a temporary tattoo. I didn’t like the idea of the needles either, and then, if you want it removed, laser removal costs a lot, with no guarantee that it will get rid of it, and can leave a hell of a scar. With this, I get all the benefits of a sexy design, without the downsides.”

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Happy Birthday Part 1 [f] [Self-Bondage] [Sensory Deprivation]

Before I entered the room, I made sure to leave a note taped to the door.

“Happy 18th Birthday, Nathan. I’m sorry I couldn’t be there to celebrate yesterday, but I hope this present I left in your room makes up for it. You can do whatever you want with it for as long as you want.
-Sincerely with Love, Your big Sister Karen”

The Nerdy Best Friend Part 6 [MF]

I felt the early morning light start to creep in and coax me out of my sleep.

My body started to come into conciseness and I noticed how sore I felt. I laid there with my eyes closed. Remembering the events of the night and early this morning. I let the memories wrap around me like a warm blanket.

I felt the bed slightly move. He reached out to me and pulled me into him. I smiled. My back pressed against his chest.

“Good Morning” he whispered in a raspy tone. His breath tickled my ear.

“Morning” I felt his lips touch the back of my neck causing my skin to goosebump instantly.

I felt his hard on against me. I sighed with happiness. After two years without sex it felt amazing to feel desired. I gently reached behind me and took his cock in my hand. He stifled a groan in my shoulder.

He slide his hand between my legs. I parted them for him. He slide a finger in.

I was already wet.

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Fire for that need (part one witch)

Circled by seawater drying on the ground I throw the incense into the fire. The spicy scent drives me forward whispering, “I want, I need…” I can’t even finish the thought, the feeling that is untouchable, undeniable. Soon it just becomes a chant, “I want, I need.” Loosing myself to the beat of the words, the dance of the flames, I see them change forming a mountain. No, a piece of my mind goes, a volcano with a glowing top. Out pours a great blackness and then suddenly the flames have wings. Such brightness makes my eyes water so that I must close them, but the endless chant goes on. There is a large gust that blows the fire towards me and I yelp in surprise, the heat blazing by my body.

My eyes flash open, the fire is as it should be, the stones still keeping it in. Looking at it wondering how it could flow towards me in this cave with the entrance far behind me. “You called me witch,” I nearly jumped out of my skin at the deep voice at my back. I turned and saw a man near the edge of the circle. His skin was as black as obsidian where the white linen wasn’t covering it, with almost as much shine. Though it was his eyes that enthralled me, I had never seen eyes that were so golden, like a lost treasure suddenly found.

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10. Part One: a lesson (BJ) for kitten (f) from Sir (m). [Bdsm]

She fell asleep with her hand between her legs, slight pressure from her fingertips cupping her naked mound. Panties were an unnecessary hassle and the blankets would keep her warm for now.  It had been a long day.  She knew that tomorrow was going to require energy and fell asleep thinking in a few short hours he would arrive.  He would leave her with the strange feeling of being absolutely spent and also completely energized, the ying and yang of connection – mind and body.  

It is still complete darkness, far too early in the morning, for anything but this.  She drowsily flutters her eyes open a crack when she feels the blankets lift and his chilly hand reach to cup her plump bottom.  

“Scooch over, love”  he says as his solid weight snuggles in behind her.  

She sighs, smiles, and makes a contented noise.  She adjusts the pillows for his arm to be under her and slightly pushes her ass back into his groin. He moves messy tangles off of her neck and gives her a few light kisses.  The familiar scent of her is noticeable as he settles into their happy bubble.