[Helen](https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/6r8o55/alls_well_that_ends_well_mf_mff_update/) was pleased with the response [the last story](https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildstories/comments/8on4m4/unplanned_unexpected_my_first_older_woman/?utm_content=title&utm_medium=user&utm_source=reddit&utm_name=frontpage) got, but disappointed with the story.
“Show, don’t tell!” she said “You left out most of an entire weekend!”. I was going to explain the importance of leaving the audience wanting more, but something happened that I want to write about later.
After that – I know…but I tease because I care – Helen sat thinking.
“If you’re not going to give people a blow by blow account you should tell them what happened the weekend after.”
“It was fucking,” I said. “More of the same, I’m afraid.”
“Gonewild Stories is full of that already and people don’t seem to be bored,” said Helen, “but is there anything you’d prefer to write about? And don’t put this bit in. It’s too meta.”