Handsomely Cute Ch. 1 (FtM)

Handsomely Cute is a transformation story that I’m looking for feedback on.

My story follows a girl named Robin that has a huge crush on a girl named Becca. However, due to certain circumstances, Robin gets her heartbroken and might’ve just found a way to get past it.

Here’s the link to the [google doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTPHSss3iCedsBI-9vEoJSCtwKdMCmNIJqrF5JWVmxbTi0oQg9qMoH_64JbAmT26Hv3eydR1HxCKJGp/pub).