Author: tweakmymeter

Laundry Day, Surpise Visit [M/F] x-post from r/sexystories

Hope you enjoy reading as much as I have writing. My intent is to throw this out rough now, get some feedback and then polish it up before I move to part three, that should be the conclusion.

Comments and critique are encouraged. Really. Tell me what you think. Feedback is a big deal. :)

If you find this to be TLDR, then skip straight to Part #2 That's where it gets going.

Laundry Day… Part #1 with Part #2 in the comments.

Saturday morning… close to noon, still tired from staying up too late the night before. I get some coffee started then head back to the other end of the house to grab some laundry for the wash.

It's a beautiful spring day, really warm outside so I pull some windows and the door open, with just the screens on to keep the bugs out.

I live on a quiet street in the suburbs, and mine is the last house before a few empty lots, so I get zero foot traffic. I don't even think twice about traipsing about the house in my boxers. Read more »

Laundry Day [M/F] A surprise visit (PART #2)

Continued from Part #1, this is the rough draft for the second piece.

I think if I tried to wait until I was satisifed with a story I'd likely never post anything, so I'll post these rough for now with the intention of cleaning them up at a later date. This is as much as I had outlined from the get-go, so I'll have to get back to working on the conclusion. I do have some ideas.

I hope you folks appreciate my writing. Comments and critique are welcome and encouraged. Let me know what you think.

I wonder… how long does it take other folks to write stuff like this? Only a few paragraphs here, incomplete and rough as hell and I still have a few hours into it. Makes me wonder how folks get good enough to write a whole novel, and even though I don't have one, I have a new found appreciation for editors.

Enough of my blather… Read more »

Laundry Day [M/F] A surprise visit

I've always had this silly idea in the back of my head, that maybe I should be writing more than just forum posts and rants on facebook, that maybe I might have more to say, or share, than I've been allowing myself.

So, within that vein of thought, I sat down, and through a mix of two things that really did happen to me, along with some embellishment and other imaginings, I put the following partial story together.

I have no idea what to expect from this, good bad or indifferent, but If you take the time to read it, please share your thoughts / critique. Writing like this is experimental for me and I'm going even further on the limb by making it erotic… and know that I know, that this is rather rough. I've gone over it a few times, and I think I could continue to edit, just this tiny piece for ages.

Point is, I know I'm a newb, and have a long way to go before I might be 'good'. So be honest, but also respectful please. Advice, points, a direction… all welcome. Read more »